Aviv Posted April 5, 2011 Share Posted April 5, 2011 (edited) -> -> Really old -> Old -> New Originally a request for a friend, I decided to take my liberties and redo the mug for an RP/Hack I am involved with. GBA mug for my Skylessia GenII character, Percival Marisul, on FEPlanet. His FE10 version mug [spoiler=FE4 Shaman Sprite Sheet(Spoilered for Size)] A sprite sheet I originally made for FE4Adv, back when it was still alive. If you want to make a script for the sheet, feel free to use it. I only ask for recognition/mention of the sheet being my creation. Any critiques/comments/criticism would be really appreciated! Edited August 9, 2012 by Aviv Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted April 5, 2011 Share Posted April 5, 2011 So, the blue haired girl has no head. Or, at least, it's caved in. Right here. Just give her more hair, and make it curve down, like on Igrene, or Isadora. The red haired guy's head's also a little caved in, on the left OPV, in pretty much the same area. It's just not as drastic as the girl's. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Glenn Posted April 5, 2011 Share Posted April 5, 2011 In the Shaman sheet, the spot indicated to start the Critical frames could use a couple of transitional frames, I feel. (Yuria)'s one arm is halfway raised with the other at her side in one frame, and in the next, they're both raised high in the air. Even with a low display time on the frames, it'll still stand out in animation. Other than that, I feel as though the animation could use some more... movement. (Yuria) is basically standing still the entire time, aside from dodging. Yes, I'm aware that mages didn't exactly move around in FE4/5, but this is running on a different engine and even the basic Mage animation is more dynamic there. Add in something to make (Yuria) less static, and I think you'll be on your way to something. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aviv Posted April 8, 2011 Author Share Posted April 8, 2011 Is this better? Also, a little bird told me Viceman's b-day just passed. So I decided to pop out a sprite of his Skylessia GenII OC, Elyssia. Based off of his art of her in her 2nd tier. Also, who would want to be alone on their birthday? So here comes her friend, Andrew Vastor! (OC of Sety's on FEPlanet). Thanks for the critique LG! Applying suggestions to the Shaman sheet now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted April 10, 2011 Share Posted April 10, 2011 Yeah, it's a bit better. It could still be raised a bit in the front, and brought down a bit in the back. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aviv Posted April 16, 2011 Author Share Posted April 16, 2011 How's this Seph? V1 of Percy's sprite. Currently working on a new one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iavasechui Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 it still looks like the top of her head is flat... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 It does look flat. Take a look at the hair shape of this: See how it's a sort of oval shape? And the back of isn't coming out ridiculously far? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrainFreeze Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 V1 of Percy's sprite. Currently working on a new one. That's awesome, it would look great as an animation. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aviv Posted April 16, 2011 Author Share Posted April 16, 2011 (edited) I originally misunderstood you when you said it should be brought down in the back, I thought you meant the hair by the neck D8 Anyways, here's an updated version Edited July 1, 2011 by Tangerine Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aviv Posted June 20, 2011 Author Share Posted June 20, 2011 Feels like I haven't posted anythign here in... forever? ^Percy's boy Perren. He is a Dark Sage (A variation of a druid that has taken a greater interest in Anima magic over Elder magic). My 1st OC, Anthony's, grandson. Takes more after his grandfather than his father :) Mugs for Lyra Tawny and Elphisia Svanhildur, two of the lords for Skylessia Emblem hack. Mug of my sister's OC, Fia Vaelia. Any comments and critique's would be greatly appreciated! :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aviv Posted January 21, 2012 Author Share Posted January 21, 2012 (edited) Been a while since I've posted in here... ^ Perren got a new face and hair, along with an amulet. ^ Requests from FEPlanet. ^present for my friend, BP, of her morph character Esmeralda. ^Female Hero. Alot of progress needs to be made here. ^Two animations for the main characters of my hack/story known as Valeon Chronicles. Edited January 21, 2012 by Aviv Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aran613 Posted January 22, 2012 Share Posted January 22, 2012 (edited) In the female hero, the axe is much larger than that of a male's axe, and the sword is kinda that way, too. Although I do agree that there needs to be a new female hero sprite. Ekhidna did look a bit odd... EDIT: Not to mention the classic-hero shield has been removed. Edited January 22, 2012 by Aran613 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 22, 2012 Share Posted January 22, 2012 I agree. That's a very large axe. And she definitely isn't of the physical proportions to wield an axe that big properly. She could stand to be a bit more muscular too. It still reads Beta!Lyn too much. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aviv Posted August 9, 2012 Author Share Posted August 9, 2012 *Uses plethora of Mass Revives* Well it's been a while since I've posted anything. Been busy with my Senior Year of high school, finishing college scholarship stuff, working two jobs, etc. But now I'm ready to pick up spriting and hacking where I've left off, so onward at full speed! Four characters who will appear in my hack that is now underway. River, an archer from the island country of Sylvessa. Some say he's Valter's younger & hateful brother or hateful son. Amira, a pegasus knight in service to the knights of the holy empire of Velinca. Garrett, a former gladiator from Le' Iros who now enjoys his time taking care of his children. Jessica, a social noblewoman from Aryah. Younger sister to my character/one of the main characters in the story. Possesses the Merciful Staff known as Iloa. Pic of the same person. WIP. Can't decide what hair color I like more. Two more WIPs. Beginnin WIP of a full custom shamaness. Her name will be Sheriah. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sea Lion Posted August 10, 2012 Share Posted August 10, 2012 With that first splice in the row of four his armor seems either a little too high up or too far away from his body, possibly both. With the third one his body seems a little squashed to me. And that last one I really like, but don't use just the outline color to trim the button thing, use some of the darkest of that blue instead in some parts. I'd go with the greenish one, but change the earring color so you can actually see it in that one. As for the custom, the eyes are a bit far apart and the outline of the face is really jagged. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted August 11, 2012 Share Posted August 11, 2012 His FE10 version mug The FE10 mug's pretty messy around the edges. And the same goes for the collar on his neck. It has super sharp edges and stands out like that. What did you used to make it? Also whatever that line thing going down the middle of the tunic (or whatever x3) looks a little goofy and blotchy perhaps? It also looks sorta weird on the top right area of the tunic that's beneath the armour, but for all I know what's what it originally looked like. Too lazy to look it up myself, but it just looked a little odd XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aviv Posted September 6, 2012 Author Share Posted September 6, 2012 ^The FE10 mug is severely outdated. Went a different route in terms of that mug after the fact. Still working on the other mugs, but I'll show a recent work: My friend challenged me to revamp Rei's mug and He'd redo Lugh's. I am actually pretty happy with how it came out! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted September 6, 2012 Share Posted September 6, 2012 Looks pretty nice! His neck looks a tad long, though, and I think his shirt/neck might need some AA where they meet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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