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Mariobro3828 Posted June 6, 2011 Author Share Posted June 6, 2011 Fixed Jarod's head a bit. Edit: Umm, sorry I didn't read where it said disregard Jarod, but if you do want to use this one, go ahead. Hmm...I like it. The reason I said disregard Jared was because HHS had already redone him and I was gonna post that for review, though I think I kinda like that one better, but I might listen to some professional opinions. I've been meaning to post this anyways: Either way I do think he does look improved here. Thanks! :) Yeah, I was aware, I'm so used to colors in FE8 style that I naturally put mugs in them, even ones I edit. EDIT: I also made some quick fixes to Arnold. There were some shading problems and problems on the collar. The haircolor also was slightly improved. Yeah bandana's definitely better, I might still tweak the colors a bit and see what you guys think, that grey just doesn't seem to appeal to me. As for Arnold, awesome. Thank you for helping with both of these. .....wow. Improvement city here. The bird looks more natural, the armor is shaded well, and the hair looks awesome. Thank you very much! :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted June 6, 2011 Share Posted June 6, 2011 (edited) The only thing with the grey on Miguel is that one of the greys is the fifth skin shade. The other is just a tint of said shade. EDIT: I missed his neck, which looked too big and lacked an outline. Edited June 6, 2011 by Gaius Julius Caesar Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted June 6, 2011 Share Posted June 6, 2011 Hey guys, just to update for this topic since MBro's not here: Garytop over on Shrine of Seals fixed up Miguel and Elton. Just posting so that people can see, so that they either don't spend time working on already updated ones/provide even better ones. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrainFreeze Posted June 6, 2011 Share Posted June 6, 2011 (edited) Woah, nice.Did you use Eliwood's depressed mug to make the blonde? Edited June 6, 2011 by BrainFreeze Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted June 6, 2011 Share Posted June 6, 2011 I love that new tail on Miguel, and the angle makes sense. The issue is that his neck lacks shading. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatGuyDownTheStreet Posted June 6, 2011 Share Posted June 6, 2011 Gave Ryan slightly better hair. I didn't do so well on the chibi, but that should only take a few tweaks on your part. BTW, any portraits I've submited so far may not be the right size (128x112 pixels) so you might have to drag the image a couple rows down or up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mariobro3828 Posted June 6, 2011 Author Share Posted June 6, 2011 (edited) Oh yeah, that hair is much improved, much less flat, thanks! :) If I may post it, a request for our next chapter: Class: Pegasus Knight/Falco Knight (either high level unpromote or low level pre-promote) Personality/looks: Hot, any guy would hit on her, but cold. She's very competent as a pegasus soldier, but almost seems as if she has no soul (until near the end, we'll show some character development) but either way, any guy would hit on her, but probably get the shit beat out of them. She might kill Reid (the game's token womanizer) if he hits on her, haven't decided. Haven't decided on a name yet. EDIT: Also, need to update my avatar in appreciation of BWDyeti and AK's work. Will do that after I mow definitely. Edited June 6, 2011 by Mariobro3828 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Sholes Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 ^Dibs!^ Do you have any specifics that you want, hair color, armor color, etc. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 Sholes, I think you should leave that sprite to someone more skilled. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Sholes Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 That's really his decision. If he feels that way I'm fine with that answer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 He already did :E Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 Eh, let him try, Seph. He'll pick the one he likes better, anyway. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 Eh, let him try, Seph. He'll pick the one he likes better, anyway. Off course :3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iavasechui Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 ^_^; wish I could help here but I'm not very good at all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 Lol I was trying to fix one of them and ended up messing it up myself xD I saw what I didn't like about it but couldn't tell how to fix it. So someone else could fix it if they haven't already been working on it. I think his hair can be fixed. Just to the right (our point of view) of his bangs. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 Mikhail had very little issues, mostly colors/shading. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 Julius, you didn't really fix the shading. If I'm right, you've made it worse in parts. So instead of just telling you what to fix, I went ahead and fix'd the shading myself: The mug could still use less Lloyd, and a different hair color, as the third shade's not dark enough. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 In the original mug the third shade was the outline and he had about 7 different skin shades. That was my main concern, as well as fixing the collar in a similar manner to Arnold's. I agree, your shading is much better than what I made mine in parts. I went ahead and tackled Anthony. This one was tough, but I think I made him look better. The helmet's been moved over (part of the helmet was over his eye before, in a way that wouldn't be comfortable). As for the body I moved it up and over, and the near shoulder pad has been moved as well. It's now better proportioned, hopefully. I also FE7-ized the colors to make it consistent. His eye color and armor color are also no longer the same. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 A lot of your shading is quite jagged, Julius. And you seem to band a lot as well. That, and your custom armor colors need to be toned down, as the third shade is darker than the outline color. posting this for color fix even though AK's gonna post epic fix soon: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 Hopefully this is a bit fixed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 The helmets shading is still very chunky, dood. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strawman Posted June 7, 2011 Share Posted June 7, 2011 And the helmet still seems to be placed strangely on the head. I have an old splice thats a knight with a helmet that I think you might be able to use for Anthony. It doesn't quite look the same as the guy you've got now but I think it has less issues. I also don't have frames for it though...so...yeah. I tried to fix it up a little bit, but I'm sure it still has plenty of problems. Here it is: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted June 8, 2011 Share Posted June 8, 2011 Helmet shading is fixed, but I don't know what to do about the brown-colored part of the helmet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted June 8, 2011 Share Posted June 8, 2011 The helmet shading's not fixed. It's armor, not clothing, so the lines differentiating plates shouldn't be as thick as they are on that helmet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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