Fitz24 Posted June 18, 2011 Share Posted June 18, 2011 This will mostly display things for my hack that I want to be judged like sprites, maps, and animations(if I want to make an animation). Here are some portrait re-vamps, thoughts? Character names(Top to Bottom): Jenn Scott Vinny Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrainFreeze Posted June 18, 2011 Share Posted June 18, 2011 Vinny's chin is too flat Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted June 18, 2011 Share Posted June 18, 2011 There's also too much shading on Vinny's face at the moment, especially at the eyebrows. You can add a line or two of the lightest skin shade instead. His left eye can also afford to be moved to the left a pixel. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted June 18, 2011 Share Posted June 18, 2011 Erika's hair needs help, somethings bugging me about the armor too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted June 18, 2011 Share Posted June 18, 2011 Erika's hair needs help, somethings bugging me about the armor too. The transition from the trim to the plate is really bad. There needs to be an outline of sorts. Try the fifth skin shade to outline the trim. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted June 19, 2011 Share Posted June 19, 2011 Jenns ear looks kinda detached. :B Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted June 19, 2011 Share Posted June 19, 2011 Jenns ear looks kinda detached. :B IIRC that's how Eirika's ear looks. Outlining the ear with the third hair shade, fifth skin shade, or outline should make it fit in more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted June 20, 2011 Share Posted June 20, 2011 Shouldn't the bottom of the ear show up near the chin, though? Because the tuft of hair on Eirika covered the chin. Idunno, I'm not the authority on this. lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted June 20, 2011 Share Posted June 20, 2011 Ears usually go from the eyebrow to the nose. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted June 20, 2011 Share Posted June 20, 2011 Top of the eye to the bottom of the nose* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted June 20, 2011 Share Posted June 20, 2011 (edited) ^^^ That. Edit: Dammit Trent. Edited June 20, 2011 by Joerachi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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