Serene Posted July 6, 2008 Share Posted July 6, 2008 So I'm thinking of writing something for a sitcom spinoff, that is funny, since all I write is action and violence. I'll probably start this either tonight or tomorrow (definitally tomorrow) I will still work on my other story, this is just something to use so I have a good place to release my jokes. If anyone would like to help me write this thing, let me know after I make a couple episodes. This will be somewhat incorrect wtih the Sitcom Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted July 6, 2008 Share Posted July 6, 2008 sure i'll throw in a few chapters. but you start it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serene Posted July 6, 2008 Author Share Posted July 6, 2008 sure i'll throw in a few chapters. but you start it. It's only so that you guys get an idea on what direction I'm heading with the story Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted July 6, 2008 Share Posted July 6, 2008 So how is this different from the sitcom? Why not just write in that? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serene Posted July 6, 2008 Author Share Posted July 6, 2008 So how is this different from the sitcom? Why not just write in that? Because A. I wanted to do something far different from the sitcom and be funny B. Because the Sitcom already has a set, storyline, plot, and line on whose good or evil (or just plain dumbass). I wanted to make my own storyline, sides, and setting Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Posted July 6, 2008 Share Posted July 6, 2008 Yeah I say write in the sitcom itself...if it's not too different... EDIT: Nevermind. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serene Posted July 6, 2008 Author Share Posted July 6, 2008 Yeah I say write in the sitcom itself...if it's not too different...EDIT: Nevermind. It's going to be completely different, on many level's. I still plan on using action just it's going to be for comic relief, (in other words it's going to be funny) and all the things I have listed before Edit: Sorry I didn't notice the edit till after this Edit: I'm also going to chose the sides by ideas but I already know the two leader's Leader number 1: Raven Leader number 2: Bianchi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyrra Posted July 6, 2008 Share Posted July 6, 2008 Mmm. Because we NEED another spinoff of a spinoff of a spinoff of a sitcom of a spinoff of a...etc etc etc. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serene Posted July 6, 2008 Author Share Posted July 6, 2008 Also I'm going to try to use every regular member here, that does include mod's and admin's. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CGV Posted July 6, 2008 Share Posted July 6, 2008 I'll help out. Add me in Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serene Posted July 6, 2008 Author Share Posted July 6, 2008 The reason why I asked for help is because A. I get uninspired sometimes B. It's a long ass idea List of people interested in writing for this: MaSu CGV Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 I'm interested too, but I might not be very good at comedy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serene Posted July 7, 2008 Author Share Posted July 7, 2008 Alright here's the first part, I'm going to introduce Bianchi's team first *On a plain large and wide enough to the point where you can't kill with the sniper rifle on your base* *Bianchi's team base* Lyle: Hey MaSu *Masu looks* you ever wonder why were are here MaSu: I don't know, it could have been any that brought us here, like genetic evelution or just plain stupidity. But it keeps me up at night. Lyle: Uhh, I meant why are we out in the sunlight when we could be in the shade MaSu: Oh Lyle: What was all the stuff about religion anyways MaSu: Just forget it Bianchi: Hey dirtbag's come down here Lyle: Fuck, yes ma'am *up on a ridge, Raven and CGV are talking, Raven has a sniper rifle* CGV: What are they doing Raven: If you ask me that one more time, there's going to be a need for a medic CGV: No what are they talking about Raven: I don't know, probably porn CGV: But I thought that only you had any porn in this wasteland Raven: We don't know about the enemy, and besides I don't think they would be anyway's, the leader is a female CGV: Yeah, that means that at least they can get some Raven: ah I don't think that they would be hitting on their commanding officer CGV: good point, let's head back *back at Bianchi's base* MaSu: So what you call us down here for Bianchi: Desdemona, Cymbeline, bring in the new jeep's I designed *Desdemona, and Cymbeline, come out of nowhere and reveal two shitty ass jeeps with a mounted chain gun* Bianchi: Gentlemen, *directed at Lyle and MaSu* I would like to introduce the Screaming Eagle Lyle: Why Eagle ma'am Bianchi: Because it has a nice ring to it MaSu: No why Eagle, it should be called the shit moblie Bianchi: How about we call in the MaSu mobile instead *Everyone but MaSu starts to chuckle* Lyle: Excellent comback ma'am MaSu: *under his breath* kissass Cymbeline: There's only five of us yet there's space for six Desdemona: Great, I know what's coming Bianchi: I've seen it fit to increase the number of soliders for our side, at barren wasteland outpost number five MaSu: Shit that mean's were getting a rookie Bianchi: Yes, they should be here in about a week Lyle: Okay, is that everything Bianchi: No *grabs shotgun* MaSu drop and give 20 in 1 minute before I shoot you *MaSu does 18 in a minute* Bianchi: Too slow *shoot's MaSu in back* MaSu: Ow Bianchi: Don't worry you get new blood, all you need to do is drink some orange juice. Dismissed everyone *End of part 1* Next part will introduce team Raven Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cymbeline Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 lol The army? XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desdemona Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 Army? xDD I found that pretty funny. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zanarkin Posted July 7, 2008 Share Posted July 7, 2008 lol. it's a good and interesting story. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serene Posted July 7, 2008 Author Share Posted July 7, 2008 Thanks guys, I'll have the next part up later tonight. I think. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted July 8, 2008 Share Posted July 8, 2008 Thanks guys, I'll have the next part up later tonight. I think. if you do add team raven's part tonight then i'll add another team bianchi part. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serene Posted July 8, 2008 Author Share Posted July 8, 2008 Alright I feel better so here's the next part *Team Raven's base* Raven: Seriously when is that rookie going to arrive CGV: Yeah I know, while we wait, hey Raven you got any porn. Raven: *Sigh* Yes, *hands over porn* You know, I wouldn't be looking at this is my girlfriend was here CGV: Yeah cause you'd do it with her in a heartbeat Raven: Better than porn *Serene and Kilvas walk in on Raven and CGV's conversation* Kilvas: bad timing Serene: really bad timing *slaps CGV* stop looking at Raven's porn, go ask Bianchi's team for some CGV: But they're the enemy Kilvas: Like they'd shoot at us. Their as bad as we are Raven: Okay Kilvas, cut the shit CGV: Seriously Kilvas, it's pronounced Mar-gir-ine Kilvas: *facepalm* I'm going back on lookout Serene: I'm going to go for a walk *Serene walks 50 steps and get's shot* Serene: SON OF A BITCH WHO SHOT ME! CGV, Raven, and Kilvas: AH SHIT! *Five minute's later it turns out it's the new rookie* CGV: great just what we need a dumbass Hika: I'm not a dumbass, I'm just thought he was the enemy Kilvas: Next time read the color of the armor before you randomly fire your gun Serene: Ah don't worry I'd probably get unlucky and the bullet would actually hit me even if it missed Raven: Did the ride come with you Hika: Yes *a tank pop's behind them* CGV: We can't get chick's in a tank Raven: You are worried about chick's at a time like this!? CGV: I'm just saying it looks like we can't get chick's with this thing Kilvas: *Facepalm* Raven: Seriously CGV cut the shit, it's getting on my nerves CGV: Okay Hika: So what am I suposed to do now Serene: Your job is to come here so I CAN WEDGE MY FOOT SO FAR UP YOUR ASS THAT YOU WON'T BE ABLE TO SHIT FOR FIVE YEARS. Kilvas: Calm down Serene Serene: DON'T TELL ME TO CALM DOWN I AM CALM Raven: Alrighty then. CGV get in the tank CGV: what are you looking at me for I ain't armor certified Raven: Kilvas, Serene, New guy *all say no* Raven: Holy shit whose running this army. They give us a tank we can't use CGV: Well at least they give us free porn Raven: Oh shut up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Florete Posted July 8, 2008 Share Posted July 8, 2008 You can throw me in as a more mysterious helper to team Raven. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serene Posted July 8, 2008 Author Share Posted July 8, 2008 You can throw me in as a more mysterious helper to team Raven. Wow I was already going to do that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desdemona Posted July 8, 2008 Share Posted July 8, 2008 Hahaha...Found that chapter pretty funny. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Florete Posted July 8, 2008 Share Posted July 8, 2008 Wow I was already going to do that It must be providence. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serene Posted July 8, 2008 Author Share Posted July 8, 2008 It must be providence. It probably is I'll have a new part put up tomorrow morning, I write comedy better than action Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serene Posted July 13, 2008 Author Share Posted July 13, 2008 Okay here's a mixture episode *Team Bianchi's base* Lyle: So this is the rookie Des: I never expected it to be who it was Cymbeline: Same here, I'm going to look at the grass. Desdemona: Sweet I'm going to come with you *Leaves* Songbird: Hi everyone MaSu: Go home Songbird: But I thought you would be happy to see me MaSu: I would have been more happy to see you after this war Lyle: What war, it's just two groups of bumbling idiot's that shoot at each other and can't shoot. Bianchi: It's better to have more troops for this vital operation in this wasteland MaSu: Sure, not like this part of the universe is important Bianchi: Of course, now MaSu, go run girly laps while I shoot at you in the back MaSu: You have got to be kidding me *looks at horizon*, shit, everyone hide. Bianchi: why it's not like they are going to get hit by my bullet's going thru your body MaSu: It's not that, it's a TANK *everyone looks outside to see that half of Raven's team is with Hika who is in the tank* Desdemona: I hate to agree with MaSu here Bianchi, but HIDE!! MaSu: EVERYONE GET DOWN Bianchi: No, Lyle and MaSu will launch a counter offensive against the tank, you two will get in one of the jeep's and shoot at the tank MaSu: I'm going to fuckin die, Songbird: Have fun dying brother Lyle: Great I'm going to die as well *they get in the jeep* *team Raven's group* Raven: So me, you, and Hika, has launched a direct offensive with the tank while Serene, and Kilvas will go in the back at take out the sargent CGV: So then we can take their porn Raven: Is that all you think about Hika: I say that CGV likes girl's that are slut's CGV: You did it now Raven: *pissed off* ROOKIE, DON'T CALL MY GIRLFRIEND A SLUT, OH I SWEAR YOUR ASS IS GOING TO GET KILLED Hika: Calm down, *looks on horizon, guys they sent out their jeep. Raven: Oh geez we have a tank, shoot at them. Hika: *initiate target auto lock* Okay *shoot's round at jeep, it doesn't blow up*, What the fuck Raven and CGV: How is that physically possible Hika: I don't know but the two in it are running back CGV: Good let's continue, *the tank continues to fire at the jeep*, make it stop. Hika: Okay *auto lock turns off* *back side of Bianchi's base* Serene: I think they'll expect an attack from the rear so let's head in thru the front Kilvas: Okay *they reach the other side of the base* Tank: Target locked on Hika: Oh that isn't a target that's Serene and Kilvas Raven: Ah Hika what's going on Tank: Auto firing Hika: NO, DON'T FIRE YOU STUPID TANK LADY *fires round, and hit's Serene and Kilvas* Both: SON OF A BITCH Hika: Oh you have got to be fuckin kidding me CGV: Let's return back to base *Bianchi's team* Lyle: He got hurt really bad Bianchi: Shit, let's work on that experiment that we have been wanting to use. Lyle: whose going to be the donor *get's knocked out* Songbird: guess you are Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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