Shuuda Posted January 16, 2012 Posted January 16, 2012 So here's me getting back on the horse after quite some time with a new story. Looking back at the story I had previously written I realised it was pretty crummy overall, so I decided to try something which hopefully has a lighter tone, or at least a more likeable protagonist. I still consider this version of the first chapter to be an early draft, so any grammer/spellings or just general comments would be most helpful. I hope you enjoy.
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