fuzz94 Posted May 23, 2012 Author Share Posted May 23, 2012 Hm. Well the way her hair flows it would leave a small bit of skin showing under her ear and no where else. The issue is that the earing covers said space, so at this angle I don't feel like i can do much about it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted May 24, 2012 Author Share Posted May 24, 2012 Gonna throw this here I guess. It's a splice competition over at FE Shrine. Set was Rennac, Knoll and Innes Also if there is anything else anyone sees wrong with Zelda let me know. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted May 29, 2012 Author Share Posted May 29, 2012 T-T-Triple Post FTW. Throwin' another FE Shrine splice competition entry I did. The set was Batta, Geitz and Fargus Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted May 29, 2012 Share Posted May 29, 2012 (edited) You need to go through and fix up the outline. It's broken in quite a few places. Edited May 29, 2012 by L95 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted May 29, 2012 Author Share Posted May 29, 2012 Like so? I fixed the head band border a bit as well Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted May 29, 2012 Share Posted May 29, 2012 You missed the lines on side of his face and his shoulder. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted May 29, 2012 Author Share Posted May 29, 2012 which side? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted May 29, 2012 Share Posted May 29, 2012 Circles. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted May 29, 2012 Author Share Posted May 29, 2012 better? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted June 10, 2012 Author Share Posted June 10, 2012 Glenn revamp As usual credit to subieko for working on this with me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Celice Posted June 10, 2012 Share Posted June 10, 2012 Glenn revamp As usual credit to subieko for working on this with me Is this the Chrono Cross Glenn? I see some similarities, but a lot of disparities too, like the hair color, the facial structure. His body seems awfully big compared to his facial proportions. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted June 10, 2012 Share Posted June 10, 2012 I think the headband needs to be a darker colour, or at least the darker shade of white. It's too bright at the moment. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatGuyDownTheStreet Posted June 10, 2012 Share Posted June 10, 2012 I think the headband needs to be a darker colour, or at least the darker shade of white. It's too bright at the moment. Yeah, I agree with Agro, that light blue doesn't really look right. Isn't supposed to have a light blue color? Other than that it looks pretty good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted June 10, 2012 Author Share Posted June 10, 2012 Some fixes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sea Lion Posted June 10, 2012 Share Posted June 10, 2012 Not sure I like how the armor just meets the shirt thing on the breast plate without any trim or anything, it makes it look like it has no thickness to it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted June 10, 2012 Author Share Posted June 10, 2012 That's how he is in Chrono Cross. Yes Celice he is that Glenn http://images.wikia.com/chrono/images/9/98/Glenn.jpg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted June 10, 2012 Author Share Posted June 10, 2012 More Update Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatGuyDownTheStreet Posted June 10, 2012 Share Posted June 10, 2012 I don't know how to explain it, but I just feel like the hair looks really off on his left side (OPV). IDK, could just be me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted June 10, 2012 Share Posted June 10, 2012 The hair looks off on the whole thing because it's undefined and chunky. There are no strands or indication of direction. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted June 10, 2012 Author Share Posted June 10, 2012 Tried to fix that far left lock and touched up some more. Seph I am not sure how to fix that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted June 18, 2012 Author Share Posted June 18, 2012 Working on an animation for Isaac. I know the video is on dropbox, but you can watch it there without downloading. This is the critical animation, which is just the regular attack frames with some spice. https://www.dropbox.com/s/c2anzk1cmwebkly/critical.AVI Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eCut Posted June 18, 2012 Share Posted June 18, 2012 The idea is cool! However, I think the effects of the djinn appearing, moving into the sword, and the glow of the sword need work because right now they're just blobs of solid colour. You might just be using those as placeholders right now, I'm not sure, but if you're not then you should fix it . :) The djinn sprite could use work as well: it isn't in style and is kinda blocky looking. Also, Isaac is Venis Adept right? Maybe make his djinn brown instead of red. Anyway! The idea is really cool and I can't wait to see it if you fix it up. :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted June 18, 2012 Author Share Posted June 18, 2012 Thanks eCut! It is just a place holder for now. The mars djinn was sprited so long ago and I realize now that the venus djinn might make more sense. The djinn itself should be redone regardless so I'll probably just redo it as a venus. I think the move it's modeled after is cleave or something. It's from the first djinn received. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Glenn Posted June 18, 2012 Share Posted June 18, 2012 Isaac's first Djinn is Flint (complete with its artwork). Also, in the animation, the red "area" on Isaac's clothes needs to be shaded more. In actuality, that red area is armor (a breastplate, basically), so it should show some curvature and highlighting. Apart from that, it animates relatively cleanly. The only things that jumped out were that the really elongated frame from the Mercenary sheet that they use as a transition for the jump seemed to be more noticeable or evident than in the actual Mercenary animation and the sword should go through the enemy when it strikes and not in front of them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted June 18, 2012 Author Share Posted June 18, 2012 I went over colors and had to lose some for the breastplate that i took from eirika. The next time i clean this up i'll actually redo the djinn and make it a venus one. Thanks for the help! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.