Titamon Posted March 31, 2012 Share Posted March 31, 2012 I'm kind of new to kind to spriting and I've been having a little trouble You see this guy? He's supposed to be an adult version of Ross from Sacred Stones, but these eyebrows are giving me a lot of trouble. Can some experienced spriters out there give me some advice? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted March 31, 2012 Share Posted March 31, 2012 They're waaaay too long. He has, like, Rocky's smarm brow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NICKT™ Posted March 31, 2012 Share Posted March 31, 2012 *chuckles to himself* The ends are too long, and the crease begins too early. Not to mention they are mis-matched. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suzy49 Posted March 31, 2012 Share Posted March 31, 2012 the eyebrows are too long you can google "eyebrow golden ratio" for tips and images the High Point on the eyebrow arch can be found on a line connecting the tip of the nose to the center of the iris; and where the eyebrow should end can be found on a line running through the edge of the corresponding nostril through the outer edge of the eye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrainFreeze Posted March 31, 2012 Share Posted March 31, 2012 Is your avatar from the original power rangers? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titamon Posted March 31, 2012 Author Share Posted March 31, 2012 They're waaaay too long. He has, like, Rocky's smarm brow. Well Ross and his dad have very very thick eyebrows, that's what I was going for *chuckles to himself* Your profile says your a woman the eyebrows are too long you can google "eyebrow golden ratio" for tips and images This helped! Thanks! Is your avatar from the original power rangers? Yes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted March 31, 2012 Share Posted March 31, 2012 Since when has "too long" = "too thick?" Son, I love thick eyebrows; I have no qualms with a man with some actual fuzz on his brow, yo. It's just waaaay too long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted March 31, 2012 Share Posted March 31, 2012 Your profile says your a woman He's not Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted March 31, 2012 Share Posted March 31, 2012 He's a woman on the inside. That's reason enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Peachar Posted March 31, 2012 Share Posted March 31, 2012 OHAI I FOUND YOUR EYEBROWS Seriously...the are too loooooooooooooooooooong. Thick, fine. But eyebrows shouldn't be snuggling with the cheek. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titamon Posted March 31, 2012 Author Share Posted March 31, 2012 Better? Probably still too long Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NICKT™ Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 Your profile says your a woman A woman who cares a lot about spelling and grammar. "You're*" As for your mug, the eyebrows need to blend more, using the skin tones to make it seem less, pasted on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titamon Posted April 1, 2012 Author Share Posted April 1, 2012 Ok last one for today... I think the eyebrow problem is finally fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klokinator Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 I think the eyebrows look fine now. Next up, making the pauldron splay across his chest with actual shading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 Grammar wut ^ He means shade the chest where the strap is touching it, for further clarification Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Titamon Posted April 3, 2012 Author Share Posted April 3, 2012 Played around with it some more! whoop whoop! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Peachar Posted April 3, 2012 Share Posted April 3, 2012 [spoiler=You should open up a jewelry store with the amount of rings you got, sir] Red: "Would you like to sleep on my pillow arm? It's so fluffy~" You should probably work on shading that correctly instead of raping that poor, little area with the darker skin tones. I'd reference some of the sleeveless men in FE7. Green: "That's not an A-A+...that's a D-." If I rubbed my finger across those edges, I'd probably cry like a little girl, scream for a band-aid, and beg for a lollipop. Waaaaay to jagged. You gotta do some Anti-aliasing there. Orange: "YOU DON'T KNOW THE POWER OF THE DARK SIDE!" You gotta shade some face for a light patch there, man. You can't really mix the FE6/7 style shading with FE8. If you are going for FE7, shade over there with some lightest tone. Otherwise, for the FE8, use that orange color on the lower half of that face like the other FE8 sprites. Magenta: "Has anyone seen my outline? I feel naked without it." Yeaaaaaaah. Open here. Need outline please. Looks cut off. Cyan: "Watch your step. Don't wanna hit a hole!" It's not a HUUUUUUGE deal, like one that destroys the aesthetic of the sprite, but it's kinda distracting. Filling that little green hole with border color would suffice. Yellow: "Oh ho ho ho. Suns out today. Got plenty of shade!" These are just shading flumps. The hair one is kinda weird, and the arm is like LOLTOOMUCH and makes it look deformed...or like a cancerous mole. Take your pick. There are other places on the mug too, but the other ring got in the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted April 5, 2012 Share Posted April 5, 2012 Not to mention his arm needs muscle definition. Don't trust Dieck's arm shading, it's all sorts of wrong. Look to the FE7 men with their arms showing for arm shading advice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suzy49 Posted April 5, 2012 Share Posted April 5, 2012 you guys have such eyes for details it's almost frightening Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted April 5, 2012 Share Posted April 5, 2012 Guuuuuuurl, he was bein' kind, yo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted April 9, 2012 Share Posted April 9, 2012 you guys have such eyes for details it's almost frightening Yup yup yup! It's what it's like here! You joined in February? You'll get used to it eventually xD Skilled spriters are very picky and will critique any mishap. But it's not at all a bad thing. They help spriters become more "professional" and as long as they're making others think of the tiniest little details, then they can make their sprites look much much cleaner and become a bit easier on the eyes as well~ And they can eventually become super impressive!! These people that focus on details are often those who make the most amazing and even original looking customs and splices. They know what they're talking about~! They just love love love acting all ~cute~ and ~cuddly~ and ~funny~ about it like Char here is. But ignore the methods anyway! Spriters here just need to listen to what they have to say and ignore the rest if it bothers them. But it really improves the spriters if they listen. And I guess if I post I should actually try contributing... Personally I don't really like the way the shading around and below his jaw looks either but that's just me, since for all I know you might've spliced that in... But it mostly looks like there's a little too much dark or something like right along the jaw... Can't really say anything on the part below it though because while it does look kinda goofy to me I still think that's probably normal. Some of the strands coming across the headband look a little blocky as well. Maybe if you mess around with the coloring/shading there, by smoothing things out, that might fix it.... Also the strands might need to kinda curve/curl more smoothly. Like it looks like it just a sudden bend? Ummmm sorry for horrible wording XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted April 9, 2012 Share Posted April 9, 2012 It's not an eye for detail at all. :E It's saying what you think looks weird - AKA HONESTY. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted April 9, 2012 Share Posted April 9, 2012 Yeah but in the eyes of many new spriters you're seeing a lot of things they don't. It just depends on perspective~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Peachar Posted April 11, 2012 Share Posted April 11, 2012 It's just pointing out what is looking weird...specifically. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted April 12, 2012 Share Posted April 12, 2012 Yes, it is! But that still doesn't change how new spriters can't see what looks weird that "specifically" XD It's still an eye for detail because they wouldn't know for, therefore leading them to say and think skilled spriters can see a whooole lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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