Alabaster Posted November 28, 2012 Share Posted November 28, 2012 (edited) 2nd one is a lot better, but you need to make the head smaller a bit more imo XD atm it looks like her forehead is huge and the hand... it's too stiff XD Edited November 28, 2012 by Ponih Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted November 28, 2012 Author Share Posted November 28, 2012 I seem to have a problem with heads lol Aso, if anyone wants to add me on Skype then feel free (AthenaWyrm). I usually stream drawing/spriting and other nonsense. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Peachar Posted November 28, 2012 Share Posted November 28, 2012 I actually liked blackie better before. I'm not quite understanding her hair though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted November 28, 2012 Author Share Posted November 28, 2012 http://puu.sh/1vnES It's supposed to be like this, but yeah :/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Peachar Posted November 29, 2012 Share Posted November 29, 2012 (edited) maybe this will help with placing or whatever. At the moment, she is like originating the tail at the far side, yet it swooshes to the near side though the hair is tying back to the near side as well. Her bangs are also coming out of the top of her head making, as Nih said, her 4head a 9head. I liked the older eyes better as well and the older bangs, but these can work lol it's your design Her hand, as said before, is really stiff and flat. She is suffering without that border as well, and her black is probably a bit too dark in general. Her body should probably be angled a bit more to match the head a bit, unless you are going for the tilt neck. Her arm is just skin and bone. Add a pixel or two to the near one to fix that. Ear is a bit small, but passable. Just scoot it up a pixel or two. lol. IDK what I'm talking about. EDIT: The near eye is the one that I liked better on the older one. The far eye on version 2 is better than the first version's far eye. Edited November 29, 2012 by Redfield Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted November 30, 2012 Author Share Posted November 30, 2012 Alright, I'll get to work on that. Thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted December 5, 2012 Author Share Posted December 5, 2012 I'm dying Can I like make KOS-MOS instead That would be better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 5, 2012 Share Posted December 5, 2012 There's some FE7 outline color hanging out on her glove. and yes do KOS-MOS that would be pretty awesome o: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted December 5, 2012 Share Posted December 5, 2012 KOS-MOS would be nice yes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted December 5, 2012 Author Share Posted December 5, 2012 jdajgadgl I have no idea how long this is going to take, but it's KOS-MOS Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted December 5, 2012 Share Posted December 5, 2012 saggy boobs! but das a nice wip ^O^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted December 6, 2012 Author Share Posted December 6, 2012 Some more crit would be nice :> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted December 6, 2012 Share Posted December 6, 2012 I've been watching your works. I find them really nice. ^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted December 6, 2012 Share Posted December 6, 2012 The breasts can be moved up a few pixels. The hair shading is looking great. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted December 6, 2012 Share Posted December 6, 2012 (edited) Boobs need to go up. And they look... flat? Idunno, squished, or something. The rest of it looks good so far. Oh, her arm is really skinny. Edited December 6, 2012 by L95 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted December 7, 2012 Author Share Posted December 7, 2012 Have a Shion too Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted December 7, 2012 Share Posted December 7, 2012 brush up on your shading °w° especially on the hair and on her clothes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted December 7, 2012 Author Share Posted December 7, 2012 If you're talking about KOS-MOS, she's not done yet ;v If you're talking about Shion, then okay Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted December 7, 2012 Share Posted December 7, 2012 Fuckin misleading ass title I've been skipping this topic for the longest time, you troll. Pretty good work in here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted December 8, 2012 Share Posted December 8, 2012 The fur is a little too neat, unless that's the illusion you were aiming for. I feel like the clothes on Shion are a little off, as well. Something's bugging me. But I'm enjoying it. I love your color choices. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted December 9, 2012 Author Share Posted December 9, 2012 @Hamlet I tried to make the fur smooth and neat because that's how it appears on the model. Made adjustments to Shion, and... ... some notfemale practice eventhoughhestilllooksreallyfeminine. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eCut Posted December 9, 2012 Share Posted December 9, 2012 (edited) I really really like that mage (?) guy! http://puu.sh/1yNhn This area of his cape feels incomplete though. And I don't understand the flow of his pony tail... It looks like there is a wire just keeping it straight, instead of flowing with his body. To me, it looks like it should be behind his collar as well. But yeah, I really like him. :) Edited December 9, 2012 by eCut Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Peachar Posted December 9, 2012 Share Posted December 9, 2012 Missing some far jaw there. Meat it out a little. [on bishie] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted December 11, 2012 Author Share Posted December 11, 2012 I also changed his hair to look more detailed, although I'm not sure if it's working l0l Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted December 12, 2012 Author Share Posted December 12, 2012 I feel like I'm getting worse, or that my style doesn't really fit FE :( Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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