Ercdouken Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 Morning guys! Here's something I drew and then colored in with photoshop. The character is an oc of mine. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iceflare Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 Hello. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soledai Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 (edited) Of the other three, I'm actually leaning toward Ana's for my vote atm. Julian's is cute, but it feels too simplistic. Blah's premise is okay, but I honestly not a fan of the sentence structure. Too many simple sentences that could have fused, etc. Ana's isn't the greatest thing I've ever read, but she does have a grasp on prose and the characters were cute enough. I see, I was gonna read hers too last night, but I got busy with other things. I have a question that's related to the "topic" Do you work better with free reign or a specific goal? Edited March 26, 2015 by Soledai Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soledai Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 Morning guys! Here's something I drew and then colored in with photoshop. The character is an oc of mine. Hello. Hey you guys. How goes? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ercdouken Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 Hey you guys. How goes? Not much. Just bored. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breezy Kanzaki Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 I wish I had time to do the writing thing this week >_> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magical Glace Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 Morning guys! Here's something I drew and then colored in with photoshop. The character is an oc of mine. Stuff you can pay attention to if you want: -The hips and waist are far too thin. The hips should be shoulder width. -Neck is too thick for a female. It should be slimmer, and should have more curve. -Speaking of, the collar is flat. Flesh it out. -The space between the legs in unnatural. The thighs should be wider as well. -her Right elbow is dislocated. It kinda moves over then bends. -speaking of her right arm, that's a really short forearm. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magical Glace Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 (edited) I see, I was gonna read hers too last night, but I got busy with other things. I have a question that's related to the "topic" Do you work better with free reign or a specific goal? Specific goal. Usually Edited March 26, 2015 by Glaceon Armamentalist Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lance Masayoshi Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 Oh dear Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iceflare Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 I'm exhausted. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breezy Kanzaki Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 ~then again my writing is terrible anyway~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ercdouken Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 (edited) Stuff you can pay attention to if you want: -The hips and waist are far too thin. The hips should be shoulder width. -Neck is too thick for a female. It should be slimmer, and should have more curve. -Speaking of, the collar is flat. Flesh it out. -The space between the legs in unnatural. The thighs should be wider as well. -her Right elbow is dislocated. It kinda moves over then bends. -speaking of her right arm, that's a really short forearm. Thanks for the tips. I'm definitely not the greatest artist in the world. I try my best to make things look right and even then I always seem to get something wrong or something and I go "Fuck it!" Also, that "collar" is actually supposed to be a scarf. Edited March 26, 2015 by EricTheMerc91 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soledai Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 Specific goal. Usually I see, well actually in hindsight that makes sense Having a guideline is usually preferred, for the very simple reason of no "detours" I'm exhausted. Everything going okay? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magical Glace Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 Thanks for the tips. I'm definitely not the greatest artist in the world. I try my best to make things look right and even then I always seem to get something wrong or something and I go "Fuck it!" Also, that "collar" is actually supposed to be a scarf.Point still stands regarding how flat it is You're welcome! Glad it's appreciated. I see, well actually in hindsight that makes sense Having a guideline is usually preferred, for the very simple reason of no "detours" Everything going okay? Heh, yeah Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iceflare Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 Yeah, I'm fine. Screw PE. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soledai Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 Yeah, I'm fine. Screw PE. PE is great. What do they have you doing or is it a general dislike for it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breezy Kanzaki Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 Hmmm... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iceflare Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 PE is great. What do they have you doing or is it a general dislike for it? It's not that I'm bad at it, but I generally dislike it. It isn't so bad right now. At least I wasn't made to play "team" sports or something. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lance Masayoshi Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 "Pringles Experimentation" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lance Masayoshi Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 *stabs ground with multiple knives* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lance Masayoshi Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 ripper thread Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-------------------- Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 Alicia sure likes them Archers. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lance Masayoshi Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 ill archer you alright Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lance Masayoshi Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 Alicia sure likes them Archers.I actually realized what this meantSince I'm doing Gilgamesh on Eientei and Archer here 8) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starman Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 I am awake now What is going on? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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