NobodiePichu Posted July 10, 2014 Share Posted July 10, 2014 im looking for critique and advice for this stuff and how to improve. so without further ado self portrait mug that's bad i know but i will fix it one day. some map touch ups i did for a friend and a random splice i did a bit ago that looks okay i guess. an possibly more in the future if i remember to update every once in a blue moon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Posted July 10, 2014 Share Posted July 10, 2014 On the splice, the guy looks like he has way too much forehead, I'd move his head up a bit and give him a bit more neck, and maybe remove a bit of the poof from the back. The gold chains(?) off his hood are a little confusing as well. Not bad stuff though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted July 10, 2014 Share Posted July 10, 2014 That's actually a pretty neat self-portrait, design and color-choice wise. There's a (quite) bit of anatomy stuff that I can comment/edit on if you're okay with that~ On the splice guy you provided, I agree with Toa that the forehead is generous/face is dropped too low atm in comparison to the perceived top of the head (which is at the very top of the mug in this case). Always nice to see your entries in the comp, ShinyPichu. Are you going to show those too? ^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klokinator Posted July 10, 2014 Share Posted July 10, 2014 Hioly heck, that is a really good map. I like the flow, I like the design, I like the aesthetic. I just like it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NobodiePichu Posted July 11, 2014 Author Share Posted July 11, 2014 On the splice, the guy looks like he has way too much forehead, I'd move his head up a bit and give him a bit more neck, and maybe remove a bit of the poof from the back. The gold chains(?) off his hood are a little confusing as well. Not bad stuff though. mm Kay that's reasonable. That's actually a pretty neat self-portrait, design and color-choice wise. There's a (quite) bit of anatomy stuff that I can comment/edit on if you're okay with that~ On the splice guy you provided, I agree with Toa that the forehead is generous/face is dropped too low atm in comparison to the perceived top of the head (which is at the very top of the mug in this case). Always nice to see your entries in the comp, ShinyPichu. Are you going to show those too? ^^ please do comment on the anatomy, i still have trouble with that in sprites. as for the design and stuff its just based of a hood and shirt i own. i can post a few of the splice i have lying around i suppose though some of them are a little outdated, but if i make any new ones for the splice comp i'll post em here. Hioly heck, that is a really good map. I like the flow, I like the design, I like the aesthetic. I just like it! kinda mah thing dude so thanks for the complements. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 For the self portrait, the neck is very long and the head is a tad big. But you're getting there! nice work ^_^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NobodiePichu Posted July 11, 2014 Author Share Posted July 11, 2014 (edited) For the self portrait, the neck is very long and the head is a tad big. But you're getting there! nice work ^_^ gah, i even thought the neck was a little to long too! though the head i didn't catch thanks for pointing that one out. EDIT: followed your advice and i do have to say it looks alot better, thank you. Edited July 11, 2014 by ShinyPichu Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 shoulders were a bit high, and the head was tall. Also body angle and neck were a bit off. I can still sense there's something but idk.. Have ref tho ^_^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NobodiePichu Posted July 11, 2014 Author Share Posted July 11, 2014 gah i feel the hair looks bad but i think the body and such looks much better thanks ponih. ah well have some maps to look at for being so patient prolouge for a hack i had in mind and good ol chapter 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 Sorry I can not anatomy right now, think Ponih caught all what I was thinking about. You can also reference Legault. The hair is a bit difficult to read around the forehead area, might suggest you take out that dark curvy V shape you have in there since it's not really defining anything. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Primefusion Posted July 12, 2014 Share Posted July 12, 2014 I like your prologue map. Might want to smooth out the peak shading though. It's a tad chunky. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NobodiePichu Posted July 12, 2014 Author Share Posted July 12, 2014 I like your prologue map. Might want to smooth out the peak shading though. It's a tad chunky. i don't do a lot of peak shading, but i guess it is something to keep in mind for the future. think i finally got it. [spoiler=anothermaptouchupsofanoldoneididagesagoyaaay] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NobodiePichu Posted September 14, 2014 Author Share Posted September 14, 2014 god haven't posted hear for ages getting in on the eeveeloution thing stuff i guess, mine is terrible compared to merc and ponih and mew but eh (i love eevee and eeveeloutions too much to care) [spoiler=map dump stuff cause its what im actually suppose to be good at] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R.O.Berc Posted September 14, 2014 Share Posted September 14, 2014 Nice nice, welcome to da club. :3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted September 14, 2014 Share Posted September 14, 2014 U have "bich" in ur name XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD I have "porn" HEHEHE Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NobodiePichu Posted September 14, 2014 Author Share Posted September 14, 2014 U have "bich" in ur name XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD I have "porn" HEHEHE *cries 5 ever* okay Nice nice, welcome to da club. :3 thnk you, i aplogize for my terribleness and lack of creativity in its design. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted September 16, 2014 Share Posted September 16, 2014 nah it's coo XD mine is unfinished Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NobodiePichu Posted December 5, 2014 Author Share Posted December 5, 2014 [spoiler=if anyone can guess where these maps are based from you get one imaginary doller/map commison] some mugs from the recent splice comps in order to get back into the swing of things and some extra maps im probably not gonna really use, just to make sure i've got something to show cause why not. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted December 5, 2014 Share Posted December 5, 2014 Are those the FE13 map templates? Because I thought this was FE2 then realized it was based on the Awakening version Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NobodiePichu Posted December 6, 2014 Author Share Posted December 6, 2014 Are those the FE13 map templates? Because I thought this was FE2 then realized it was based on the Awakening version you win the imaginary dollar or the map request if you want it unfortunately the imaginary dollar will have to be an imaginary loony. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet_Basil Posted December 6, 2014 Share Posted December 6, 2014 (edited) The new snow maps are my favorite especially the first, I did one similar to the third one too a few months ago . I like your stuff. Edited December 6, 2014 by MidnightStar Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NobodiePichu Posted December 6, 2014 Author Share Posted December 6, 2014 Thank you. I consider maps to be my speciality. this ones a bit older then the other post, but it looks al right so meh i don't mind mountains, but they can be so picky. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendor Posted December 6, 2014 Share Posted December 6, 2014 the rivers seem very straight, maybe try adding some variety Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NobodiePichu Posted December 6, 2014 Author Share Posted December 6, 2014 hmm, i'll keep that in mind thank you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted December 18, 2014 Share Posted December 18, 2014 You seem quite good at ensuring your maps contain no height errors. Keep up the good work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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