Levin64 Posted September 25, 2015 Author Share Posted September 25, 2015 (edited) Dayum, double post. Blame zee Internet-- Edited September 25, 2015 by Leviathan64 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Posted September 25, 2015 Share Posted September 25, 2015 He doesn't ever really change pose, he slides across the ground and then swings his arm wildly without putting any of his body into it. If you try doing any of that IRL it won't be a very effective attack. I think his approach should be more like Marth's dash attack from SSB, where he would drop down into a low sprint instead of just teleporting or whatever. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ErrantDShepherd Posted September 26, 2015 Share Posted September 26, 2015 (edited) I think the base attacks work fine. The critical attacks feel kinda... Meh, at the moment though. Like he should have some more movement rather than the usual moves. Dodge and critical feel kinda sameish compared to the regular attacks. :\ Once again, the regular attacks look good. They are simple, look cool and just work... But the other ones need something more in my eyes. :0 Edited September 26, 2015 by TheErrantShepherd Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Levin64 Posted March 28, 2016 Author Share Posted March 28, 2016 A long time since I last posted here huh? Got so much to say but yeah, just wanna sum it up... Many things happened... My pa died last January, got an accident 3 days ago... And this... artblock for 1 year, maybe? Yeah ^^ So nice to be back, fresh air of Serenes Forest~ My hands are kinda rusty now, so... What'cha think? Hmm~? It's already 2 years and I still don't know how to make custom sprites... Tips and tricks, perhaps? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Levin64 Posted April 4, 2016 Author Share Posted April 4, 2016 I'm back~ This should me a mug of me(?) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghast Posted April 4, 2016 Share Posted April 4, 2016 not a bad sprite at all! It might just be me but the hair at the top of the forehead seems a bit messy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Levin64 Posted April 21, 2016 Author Share Posted April 21, 2016 My OC sprite... hmm?Opinions everyone? She's a Light Mage. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eliwan Posted April 21, 2016 Share Posted April 21, 2016 these are varying degrees of relevant, sorted by the order they occur in during the animation-- Idle frame: why is there a line of skin tone on the edge of the glove? The blur frame for her arm being raised to the skies should have skin tone close to her shoulder instead of being solid purple. We can see part of her arm when she holds her hand up to her face/chest, but that skin tone becomes purple despite it remaining skin tone after the blur as well. It also is significantly higher than her hand goes, further contributing to looking awkward. The blur frame for her arm going to her other side looks awkward due to her immobility. It feels like she should be twisting for that motion, but her head just kind of slides a single pixel. The frames where she has her arm crossed just look impossible-- like her elbow isn't actually extant, but instead her arm is serpentine in motion. Admittedly, this is probably because I'm seeing "there should be bodily motion" there--as opposed to this actually being a problem, just my biases coming to play. The blur frame for when she moves her arm across her body, causing her scarf to move, seems woefully insufficient for the amount of motion she is performing-- it doesn't seem like, to me, it covers all the area that her arm should be moving over. Definitely looks nice, though I think she could move her leg more and twist before her arm snaps outward. but then again--i have little idea what i'm talking about when it comes to animacy of a motion set. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted April 22, 2016 Share Posted April 22, 2016 If she's a mage then the scarf should flutter around in a loop like a mage cloak. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Levin64 Posted June 21, 2016 Author Share Posted June 21, 2016 ...? Ho ho~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Levin64 Posted August 19, 2016 Author Share Posted August 19, 2016 Long time no see! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kain Posted August 19, 2016 Share Posted August 19, 2016 (edited) Love it! Concept is great, the color scheme looks good, and the execution is great. A couple of suggestions: The "fur" could use some work on its shading. The individual tufts look good, but it doesn't quite look like the fur is underneath the shoulder pauldrons. Second, the design on his chest-piece looks like it is oriented at an angle that isn't quite consistent with the chest-piece. If it were reoriented just slightly, it would look more like its a part of the armor. Edited August 19, 2016 by Kain Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Levin64 Posted August 31, 2016 Author Share Posted August 31, 2016 Sorry for the long absence and thanks for the feedback! To tell the truth, when I've accepted some of the feedback from you guys, I don't know how to start "fixing" it, so.... I'm sorry... But I'll figure it out how to "fix" em someday~ yeah, someday! (when-) Have another mug- Same question, how to start making customs? Been on splicing for 3 years-- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted August 31, 2016 Share Posted August 31, 2016 ... just do it? I'm willing to bet you already do a fair amount of custom work on your mugs, so the next step is to figure out how to make a whole kit from scratch. It definitely helps to have a reference so that you know where your concept is going, though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet_Basil Posted August 31, 2016 Share Posted August 31, 2016 Those are some really nice splices, I really like the 4 on the right especially the blue haired girl. The upper left one has a "u" between their hair, not sure if that's intentional. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Levin64 Posted September 15, 2016 Author Share Posted September 15, 2016 (edited) Gonna post up the requests~ Hmm? Edited September 15, 2016 by Levin Alaude Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glaceo Posted September 15, 2016 Share Posted September 15, 2016 Looking nice, the only thing I find wierd is that everyone is always so serious, but I guess it's okay. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Levin64 Posted October 8, 2016 Author Share Posted October 8, 2016 Looking nice, the only thing I find wierd is that everyone is always so serious, but I guess it's okay. why so serious me I don't know, it's a habit I guess. Why did you cut my hair?! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Levin64 Posted October 8, 2016 Author Share Posted October 8, 2016 ...? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted October 9, 2016 Share Posted October 9, 2016 Looks pretty cool. But also kind hard to distinguish what it is.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Levin64 Posted October 9, 2016 Author Share Posted October 9, 2016 Rydia from Final Fantasy! Forgot to mention that~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Levin64 Posted May 1, 2017 Author Share Posted May 1, 2017 (edited) ... Damn it. It's been a long time since Idontknowwhen Mug dump mug dump Still sticks to splices. I don't have any knacks on custom so-- sigh. And my project-- OMG Edited May 1, 2017 by Levin Alaude Images are not showing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koumal8 Posted May 1, 2017 Share Posted May 1, 2017 i can't see a thing, all pics are broken. Am I the only one? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Levin64 Posted August 5, 2017 Author Share Posted August 5, 2017 It seems the photo-hosting website is the one to blame-- :((( Any recommendation for photo-hosting websites? I've been using Photobucket for a long time and looks like now it's going... bad? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Levin64 Posted August 6, 2017 Author Share Posted August 6, 2017 (edited) Gah I have no restrain Only different colors so what to expect The original is the single one. Too lazy to fix previous posts so I'll repost the latest. BEING LESS PRODUCTIVE IS ANNOYING AF Edited August 6, 2017 by Levin Alaude Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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