Anacybele Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 Wait, Ike was on the floor? lolwut, I thought you wrote that he was on a couch or something. XD Btw, I posted my entry for Sangyul's contest, if y'all are interested. Here's a hint about it: it features a certain son of Ike that I came up with. ;3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoncat Posted March 26, 2015 Author Share Posted March 26, 2015 Wait, Ike was on the floor? lolwut, I thought you wrote that he was on a couch or something. XD Btw, I posted my entry for Sangyul's contest, if y'all are interested. Here's a hint about it: it features a certain son of Ike that I came up with. ;3 He could be on either. I didn't write either way xD Cool, I'll make sure I check it out! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snowy_One Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 Would you be willing to do a chapter focusing on Kelly sometime soon? I know it's your fanfic, Kelly isn't your character, and that it probably wouldn't be a big bit of the story, but I would very much like her getting some more of the Limelight. Like maybe just have it focus on her personality and how she deals with magic and the like? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anacybele Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 He could be on either. I didn't write either way xD Cool, I'll make sure I check it out! Oh... Wow. lol XD And awesome. ^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blah the Prussian Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 Since Ana's doing it, I might as well, too. My entry is up as well. As for the actual chapter, it is good to see that canon characters are getting the spotlight as well. A consistent problem with fanfics is the sidelining of canon characters, so its good to see its not happening here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anacybele Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 Erm, I only did it because Dcat is my friend and I know her well. It's not really polite to advertise your stuff in someone else's feedback thread if you don't know the person at all. Heck, I probably still should've PM'd her anyway. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoncat Posted March 26, 2015 Author Share Posted March 26, 2015 (edited) Would you be willing to do a chapter focusing on Kelly sometime soon? I know it's your fanfic, Kelly isn't your character, and that it probably wouldn't be a big bit of the story, but I would very much like her getting some more of the Limelight. Like maybe just have it focus on her personality and how she deals with magic and the like? Idk about a whole chapter, but that sounds like something I can certainly do. She's traveling with the group after all. As for the actual chapter, it is good to see that canon characters are getting the spotlight as well. A consistent problem with fanfics is the sidelining of canon characters, so its good to see its not happening here. That's good to hear. Erm, I only did it because Dcat is my friend and I know her well. It's not really polite to advertise your stuff in someone else's feedback thread if you don't know the person at all. Heck, I probably still should've PM'd her anyway. He didn't advertise it, just mentioned it briefly...he's fine. Edited March 26, 2015 by Dragoncat Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anacybele Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 Well, true, it was brief. :P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snowy_One Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 If you want I've got plenty of ideas on potential arcane smithing plans and elaborations on how magic in the FE-verse might work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoncat Posted April 13, 2015 Author Share Posted April 13, 2015 Another minor laguz OC introduced. Torrel has a reason to be distrusting too, her backstory has her younger sister being captured by Daein and feralized and killed. She and Strixal will probably make another appearance later... And Shenzi is the name of one of the hyenas from Lion King xD Meh. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anacybele Posted April 13, 2015 Share Posted April 13, 2015 (edited) I figured you got Shenzi from The Lion King! That's awesome since the movie is awesome. :D Good chapter, it makes sense for Torrel to be so hateful of beorc. She acts much like Lethe, so yeah. They'd be good friends. lol Edited April 13, 2015 by Anacybele Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoncat Posted April 13, 2015 Author Share Posted April 13, 2015 I also named my mightyena Shenzi. I used to think that pokemon was based on wolves, then I found out that they were hyenas. She would get along with Lethe. Only difference? Lethe's sister is still alive. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anacybele Posted April 13, 2015 Share Posted April 13, 2015 (edited) I thought Mightyena was a wolf for awhile too. But hey, a hyena is also a canine so it's not that hard of a mistake to make. In fact, the Poochyena line could be based on both hyenas and wolves, who knows...? Speaking of The Lion King, if I find a shiny Litleo, I want to name it Kiara or Kovu. XD And yeah... Edited April 13, 2015 by Anacybele Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoncat Posted April 13, 2015 Author Share Posted April 13, 2015 Lol why does it have to be shiny? My pyroar is Simber. Simba + ember. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anacybele Posted April 13, 2015 Share Posted April 13, 2015 Because a shiny one is more special. lol And nice. :P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blah the Prussian Posted April 13, 2015 Share Posted April 13, 2015 Come to think of it, and this just occurred to me now, whats going on with Sephirans plan? Did the Senators still pull all that bull in Bengnion? It'll be interesting, actually, to see how Bengnion has been affected by all the butterflies going around, as it is my favorite FE nation ever. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoncat Posted April 13, 2015 Author Share Posted April 13, 2015 The Begnion senators are still being dicks, and it looks like parts 2 and 3 of RD aren't going anywhere. We had the Crimean rebellion, and...the laguz alliance vs Begnion will be in too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blah the Prussian Posted April 14, 2015 Share Posted April 14, 2015 (edited) The Begnion senators are still being dicks, and it looks like parts 2 and 3 of RD aren't going anywhere. We had the Crimean rebellion, and...the laguz alliance vs Begnion will be in too. So in that case, we'll probably have a Bengnion-Daein alliance where Daein is a willing partner. Interesting. Come to think of it, wasn't that Ashnards whole plan? Could Sephiran and Nyra be working together? Now I'm just speculating, of course. But Theodor hates Daein. It will be interesting to see how he reacts to the alliance. Edited April 14, 2015 by blah2127 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoncat Posted April 14, 2015 Author Share Posted April 14, 2015 That is an interesting idea...we'll have to see how things play out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoncat Posted May 3, 2015 Author Share Posted May 3, 2015 Borrowed Ana's cloakweed idea...also, Snowy and I discussed having Kelly try some magic invention and fail epicly. Hope what I came up with will suffice. Oh, and fart humor is always hilarious. It's not as blunt/out there/obvious as some of Gangrel and Basilio's lines, but it's still there xD Towards the beginning of the chapter... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snowy_One Posted May 3, 2015 Share Posted May 3, 2015 It's good, though she should be working on learning to overcome the shortcomings as well! Still, yay! Thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoncat Posted May 3, 2015 Author Share Posted May 3, 2015 Welcome. But I think that would be a one time thing, I can't see them needing cloakweed/having to hide their scent again. Idk... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anacybele Posted May 3, 2015 Share Posted May 3, 2015 Borrowed Ana's cloakweed idea... I noticed. lol Don't worry about it, I'm fine with you using the idea. I doubt some other FE fanfic writers haven't come up with something similar anyway. :P But nice chapter! Poor laguz kids. Glad they got rescued! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoncat Posted May 3, 2015 Author Share Posted May 3, 2015 (edited) The cloakweed was such a genius idea, so yeah. And ikr? I didn't get to put it in, but the bandits were going to sell them as slaves in Begnion...even though the apostle has that outlawed there's still some creeps who do that. They're lucky the bandits turned out to be cowards. Edited May 3, 2015 by Dragoncat Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anacybele Posted May 3, 2015 Share Posted May 3, 2015 Well, I derived it from the one part in my story The Secret Sword where bandits reveal that they killed some laguz and took their fur so they could cover up their scent. So, I came up with a way for laguz to cover up their scents when needed as well. I also remembered the herbs Falchion came up with that have different medicinal properties. So then I thought, a plant that can cover up one's scent! :P And yeah, there was even a chapter in PoR where Sanaki had Ike and his group bust some slave sellers. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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