I'm gay dabadeedabada Posted June 3, 2015 Share Posted June 3, 2015 (edited) from oldest to newest note: a couple of these are still in the status where I need to revise them first is a splice, second has a little bit of hair from I forgot who, rest are full custom and i'm 90% sure they're the wrong size Edited June 3, 2015 by Yasako Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted June 3, 2015 Share Posted June 3, 2015 Ayyyy shiny #1~ I like the variety and color choices ^^ If these are for hacking/standard, the last girl is definitely too tall in placement. In general scale afaik, #1 is a little undersized, #2 is about right, #3 and #4 are slightly larger but those are also my favorites as far as overall composition and execution goes (aside from #3's shoulders). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draco Posted June 3, 2015 Share Posted June 3, 2015 Hey, I recognize these.#2 especially. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted June 3, 2015 Share Posted June 3, 2015 loving the little gurl <3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I'm gay dabadeedabada Posted June 3, 2015 Author Share Posted June 3, 2015 (edited) Ayyyy shiny #1~ I like the variety and color choices ^^ If these are for hacking/standard, the last girl is definitely too tall in placement. In general scale afaik, #1 is a little undersized, #2 is about right, #3 and #4 are slightly larger but those are also my favorites as far as overall composition and execution goes (aside from #3's shoulders). #3 had to be destroyed to fit in the hackbox. Here's an older version: It still has quite a few flaws, especially since it wasn't tidied up a little bit like the hacked up version (I noticed more errors after I decimated his shoulders). I couldn't replicate the shoulderpad after resizing his body because I'm a scrub As for #4, I forgot to crop out the parts that I drew in to make it easier to visualize her cloak and cravat. Do you think there's something out there as far as a "guide to Fire Emblem head sizes"? That'd be useful and also hilarious. My color choices and designs are pretty anime though. I'm also really jealous of how neatly some of you do the coloring and shading. It's really smooth. Although it doesn't look very GBA FE-ish, but that's because the GBA FE mugs weren't that polished anyway. Also I totally forgot but #2 is a splice too in that I have like basically a 9x16 rectangle of someone's hair in there somewhere Edited June 3, 2015 by Yasako Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted June 3, 2015 Share Posted June 3, 2015 (edited) Yes, anime, goood~ As for shading, yeah, you could smooth the lines you have a bit more (the collar lines of #2 and #3, and shoulderpad+blindfold lines for #3 stick out a lot). Typically I don't think you ought to be using the outline color inside the sprite much at all unless it's the for the blue or a really deep shadow. You can use the darkest skintone to replace the outline on the trim and the skinside of the collarline, but I'm not sure if using the darkest grey will work for the clothside of the collar or not. Do you think there's something out there as far as a "guide to Fire Emblem head sizes"? That'd be useful and also hilarious. Nope! (As far as I think.) Although you can slap the particular mug onto a new layer on the master sheet and stack it over a close match, then toggle visibility on/off a few times to compare. Or just pull close mugs and compare. Edited June 3, 2015 by Lenh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghast Posted June 3, 2015 Share Posted June 3, 2015 (edited) you have a lot of potential! Keep it up! Edited June 3, 2015 by GhastStation Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fateborn Posted June 4, 2015 Share Posted June 4, 2015 Hello Yasako, seems like you're the one that Hanrei mentioned. Firstly, nice job! Next, I'm the guy who did the original blindfold guy that Hanrei asked you to remake, I'm awe-stricken by that sheer talent of remaking a mug. Now, for the actual cnc In order from top to bottom. 1. I can tell this is likely your first splice, and so far it's a good attempt, the flaws I can see are: Hairs are too "slicked" across his head there need to be a clean split where your hair parts from each other. Neck should not be in same realm as the collar cloth that covers them, they should be either one pixel inside the cloth or more. (better to expand the cloth than shrinking the neck in this case) The neck also makes him look like he's leaning backward with his head making it feels out of place in this particular posture. 2. First noticeable flaw... NECK TOO LONG! GIRAFEE MUG WHERE. He has the same problem as the above in term of head leaning, where in this case he's leaning forward without the posture to match. (I ALSO THOUGHT IT WAS A GIRL but Hanrei remanded me after I pointed it out when he linked a video with the mug in it.) I also believe you have a case of pillow shading on the right shoulder (pov) 3. The mug that remade mine, eeek! Can't wait to critique this. First up... The right collar (pov) is shaded rather poorly, but i can see that it's difficult task, try changing it up a bit, Matthew (fe7) thief collar can be a good reference I believe. Last error is on the left shoulder (pov still) it feels rather small to clearly show an arm frame. You can argue he's holding it in a slingback to heal a fracture or something nastier but that's not the case here is it? 4. It appears that you wanted a small girl, you should at least match that to the general "mug" limitation and make her actually small rather than make her tall compared to others, hahaha... (i thought the same but it seems no one like chibi people taking up full hackbox space :( ) The shawl is really well done though. Try and shade her hair a bit more, a particular portion of the hair is just one color, but that's your style, keep it if you want. It's just a comment from me. Overall... Good job! Looking forward to more of your remake of my mugs for Hanrei. (I made a new one just recently, I wonder if you can make him even more badass than he is right now. :U) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
singularity Posted June 4, 2015 Share Posted June 4, 2015 I really like the third one's hair and neck shading(especially the hair). I prefer the new version though, the older one's strands is unnecessary and you did a good decision cutting it out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I'm gay dabadeedabada Posted June 10, 2015 Author Share Posted June 10, 2015 (edited) WIP dying Edit: Current version and last one I feel like working on for the foreseeable future because ugh. She's an Alchemist and I'm going to make the Alchemist battle sprite Someday. Edited June 10, 2015 by Yasako Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I'm gay dabadeedabada Posted June 13, 2015 Author Share Posted June 13, 2015 http://imgur.com/a/k1Xq7 dis a custom battle sprite thing for her ya I think I screwed up my vision putting my face up against the screen to sprite it coming soon to a fee3 near you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LetsGoForIt Posted June 14, 2015 Share Posted June 14, 2015 Oooooh, I'm really liking those battle-poses! Reminds me of the Chemist from Final Fantasy Tactics. What sort of frames would they have at melee range? Or would they be similar to a Mage in that they have the same poses no matter at one, two, or ten range? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Peachar Posted June 14, 2015 Share Posted June 14, 2015 I think you have something pretty good going on. I just suggest adding a little motion to the basic attack becasue atm she's like a robot with an arm that moves alone without disturbing the rest of the body. Also, just raising the flask iskinda boring, imo. Just a though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I'm gay dabadeedabada Posted September 23, 2015 Author Share Posted September 23, 2015 i dont know what im doing anymore but its not working help Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NICKT™ Posted September 23, 2015 Share Posted September 23, 2015 When it comes to doing custom heads or faces, for me I usually don't really have a clue when it comes to proportions and the like, so I rough ball the indent of the bottom lip which is usually 5 or 6 pixels from the jawline? Ish. Then the mouth is like, one or two above that, then two above the mouth is the bottom of the nose. Then just work your way up until it looks alright. I saw a video of a spriter who drew two big circles to form a head from scratch, so maybe if you wanna go that route then polish up on yo' circles. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I'm gay dabadeedabada Posted September 24, 2015 Author Share Posted September 24, 2015 [screeching intensifies] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Posted September 24, 2015 Share Posted September 24, 2015 His mouth doesn't really look very centered, a bit too far to our right. The jacket collar area looks like it's straight on, but it's not. I think the far side needs to curve away some. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ErrantDShepherd Posted September 24, 2015 Share Posted September 24, 2015 The hair and face seem fun... The body shading seems a tad pillowy though. Like the designs. :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I'm gay dabadeedabada Posted September 27, 2015 Author Share Posted September 27, 2015 is fix now? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ErrantDShepherd Posted September 27, 2015 Share Posted September 27, 2015 Less pillowed. Nice work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I'm gay dabadeedabada Posted March 13, 2016 Author Share Posted March 13, 2016 WHAT I DO WITH FACE!!! IT LOOK WRONG. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Posted March 13, 2016 Share Posted March 13, 2016 The face is very round and the head is not entirely centered on the neck. The eyes are pretty wide too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I'm gay dabadeedabada Posted March 13, 2016 Author Share Posted March 13, 2016 (edited) trim fuckboy who needs frames redone VS the exact same sprite but with a pixel taken off the right eye basically edit: I forgot to move neck one pixel left here but I did it on a thing now and now it is correctly aligned but not in this picture. Edited March 13, 2016 by Vegetable-chan Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Posted March 13, 2016 Share Posted March 13, 2016 You need to make his jaw less of a circle, it's more than just making the face thinner. His jaw is very round right now, it should follow more of a linear path. His eyes and some of his other features can be moved up a lil bit to make more room for proper anglings. Right now his chin is super wide as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I'm gay dabadeedabada Posted March 13, 2016 Author Share Posted March 13, 2016 omg, I had no idea that was what you meant LOL http://prntscr.com/aex39a Right now his chin is super wide as well.Bors feels chin-shamed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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