Anthony N Posted August 29, 2015 Share Posted August 29, 2015 So, I've decided to share some of my stuff :)Critique is much appreciated. xD [spoiler=Custom Mugs] [spoiler=Battle Stills] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted August 29, 2015 Share Posted August 29, 2015 pillows, pillows everywhere and very jagged lines have you done much splicing? because if not, i would suggest going back to that and trying to copy the shading techniques used in FE7/8, to get the hang of how things are to be done as it stands, these are very rough :x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted August 30, 2015 Share Posted August 30, 2015 Those little gem icons are pretty sweet. Is that Ragna??? I agree with SnakeyMom that you have pillows/jaggies everywhere, plus your colors are currently all over the place (sometimes they work in their own style, sometimes they don't work at all). I'd probably suggest retrying the hair/clothing shading while using a lot of vanilla references. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghast Posted August 30, 2015 Share Posted August 30, 2015 first dude is cool with better shading i think the dog creature would look really great Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anthony N Posted August 31, 2015 Author Share Posted August 31, 2015 pillows, pillows everywhere and very jagged lines have you done much splicing? because if not, i would suggest going back to that and trying to copy the shading techniques used in FE7/8, to get the hang of how things are to be done as it stands, these are very rough :x well, not really. i don't think i have ever done any splicing tbh :p Those little gem icons are pretty sweet. Is that Ragna??? I agree with SnakeyMom that you have pillows/jaggies everywhere, plus your colors are currently all over the place (sometimes they work in their own style, sometimes they don't work at all). I'd probably suggest retrying the hair/clothing shading while using a lot of vanilla references. i planned to use those icons to replace the old FE's affinity icons. but guess not due to palette constraint :( some of the mugs were made quite long ago so... guess i'll try touching up some of them some time later. first dude is cool with better shading i think the dog creature would look really great thanks. i made the dog creature quite some time ago, and was too lazy to go back. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anthony N Posted August 31, 2015 Author Share Posted August 31, 2015 UpdateDeath of the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse. p.s: i'm also entering biweekly battle sprite competition with this one for convenience. :p Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diogenes Posted September 3, 2015 Share Posted September 3, 2015 This one is a cut above your other stuff, but the pale horse's legs look somewhat awkward. Is it supposed to be a skeletal horse? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghast Posted September 3, 2015 Share Posted September 3, 2015 holy fuck that look awesome Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anthony N Posted September 13, 2015 Author Share Posted September 13, 2015 Update:boss mugs again... Pestilence and Lilith Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anthony N Posted September 13, 2015 Author Share Posted September 13, 2015 This one is a cut above your other stuff, but the pale horse's legs look somewhat awkward. Is it supposed to be a skeletal horse? thanks, and yeah, the horse is skeletal. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Posted September 13, 2015 Share Posted September 13, 2015 Read your PMs The shading on both of those is pretty chunky and pillowy, the first one has a lot of outline color too. The faces seem pretty good but the outfits could use some work, especially with the aforementioned shading. The lines don't look all that smooth on the outifts, which becomes really obvious when its the outline color. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ErrantDShepherd Posted September 14, 2015 Share Posted September 14, 2015 (edited) You have a good grasp of designs and color... Lots of cool stuff, some of it excellent looking. The execution and finer details need some work as others have mentioned, things like pillow-shading, clean lines and proportions. But that will come with time and practice. Check out some of the tutorials in the Sprites Resource thread for some tips on those issues. :) Anyways, look forward to seeing more. Very nice new thread, hope to see you around more, keep it up! :D Edited September 14, 2015 by TheErrantShepherd Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anthony N Posted September 14, 2015 Author Share Posted September 14, 2015 You have a good grasp of designs and color... Lots of cool stuff, some of it excellent looking. The execution and finer details need some work as others have mentioned, things like pillow-shading, clean lines and proportions. But that will come with time and practice. Check out some of the tutorials in the Sprites Resource thread for some tips on those issues. :) Anyways, look forward to seeing more. Very nice new thread, hope to see you around more, keep it up! :D Thanks, yeah I'm kinda trying to get rid of my pillow-shading habit since everyone's talking about it >"< Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anthony N Posted September 14, 2015 Author Share Posted September 14, 2015 Another update:a female mage...and also... battle sprite for Lilith :3 :3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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