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Lt.Smirks

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  1. And the winner is TOA! Shep is 2nd, and "Greninjeta" is 3rd.] Good job peoples!
  2. Still has the same issues as Alm. Head is too tall and chin is far too flat. Reference some FE7 mugs for proportions.
  3. THEME: Deep Space Generics - Make classes for the proto Martian Emblem that never was. [spoiler=Voting and Winners]VOTING: Voting will be split into two categories. -Best in Theme -Best Overall Battle Sprite >Voting will run for 3 days If there are a large amount of entries, Best in Theme will be divided into smaller categories based on whether an entry is custom, splice, or animation. WINNERS: Winning placement will be decided by total number of votes across categories. >The winner gets to choose two potential themes either from a list or of their own imagination. >The winner and runner ups will vote upon the themes to select one. >The winner gets two votes in addition to theme selection. >Second place gets two votes. >Third place gets one vote. >Whatever theme wins the winner's votes will be used for the next competition. Note, votes can be split, if you have two votes they do NOT need to go to the same theme. Voting Ends: Sunday, May 29th.
  4. The mug is good below the eyes, but their are quite a few problems in the top half. First of all, the face is stretched i.e. too long and too thin. I pulled the eyes down a few pixels and widened the brow. I also brought the hair down or else he'd have a huge forehead. Next, if you're going to make brown eyes that big you need a white. Also the lines under the eyes don't need to be so defined, you can lighten them a shade. I did a few little eye tweaks to show what I mean. Finally the hair. You have some weirdly shaded strands especially at the back of his head plus the part is turned the wrong way and not really centered. (I didn't really do much to the hair though)
  5. Still missing #7, #13, #29 and #38. Updated to #138 Fixed the errors you guys pointed out. See below for updated sheet.
  6. I opened that Gif in my program and its reading 119 colors. :/ Including a few shades of purple and green. But the main thing is like Eliwan and others have been saying, the palette needs WAY more contrast and the timing is off. What program are you using to animate it?
  7. Dumpety dump: (note to self: never try to use Erika's face again) An old Link I made a while back. [spoiler=My little sister nagged me into teaching her some splicing ]
  8. Well if at least one person is sure to enter I guess (I made sure not to say Biweekly this time). How does May 24th sound? Also, good to see you back Shep!
  9. Due date is tomorrow! Let's get some more entries!
  10. Since when has your profile winked? Freaking me out man. and that does look better
  11. Just over a week left! EDIT: Made him look a bit more...Sinister?
  12. Haha that's what we're here for, to point out the weird mistakes people make. lol She kinda looks like she's jutting her chin out atm. Maybe move her head back a pixel?
  13. Wow those battlers are flat out amazing! Incredible work there. I especially like the Hero and Sage remakes. The mugs aren't bad by any means but some of them do still look a little off. Overall though, I see a lot of good customing in them. Favorite is bottom left. Nicely done, I look forward to seeing more!
  14. Far side collar is inside his cheastplate, near side is out?
  15. We're Back Baby! This contest went on hiatus last fall and finally it's here again! THEME/TOPIC: Deep Space Generics - Make classes for the proto Martian Emblem that never was. [spoiler=Rules]RULES: 1) only 1 entry per contestant, either in the Full Custom division or in the Splice/Edit division.(Animated may be a division if enough entries are in to justify it) -Please declare which division you fall under to avoid potential confusion. 2) No voting for your own entry! 3) Entries should be limited to 16 colors.(15 colors+ 1 background color) This is more of a guideline, but good to follow for style and challenge reasons. Colors may be custom or using GBA sprite palletes. 5) No posting previous/old works! This means no edits/recolors of something previously made as well. -allowing previous/old works would give an unfair advantage to certain entries, two weeks is a good amount of time to work on an entry... how fair would it be to have to go up against something someone spent months or even a year on? -creating brand new works, encourages creativity and artistic growth and development, kinda what the whole art forums are about... isn't it? [spoiler=Voting and Winners]VOTING: Voting will be split into two categories. -Best in Theme -Best Overall Battle Sprite >Voting will run for 3 days If there are a large amount of entries, Best in Theme will be divided into smaller categories based on whether an entry is custom, splice, or animation. WINNERS: Winning placement will be decided by total number of votes across categories. >The winner gets to choose two potential themes either from a list or of their own imagination. >The winner and runner ups will vote upon the themes to select one. >The winner gets two votes in addition to theme selection. >Second place gets two votes. >Third place gets one vote. >Whatever theme wins the winner's votes will be used for the next competition. Note, votes can be split, if you have two votes they do NOT need to go to the same theme. --- Any further questions or concerns can be PMed to the current host! (Smirks) or posted either in the feedback thread or within this thread itself. DEADLINE: Tuesday, May 17th
  16. Honestly the worst part is the GIF's timing; it makes it kinda hard to see what it would actually look like. something like this perhaps? Overall it's pretty good. The blur frames are especially nice, but the attack lacks Oomph. Maybe making the jump higher would help I dunno.
  17. Sniper Jesus. Obviously.
  18. https://gyazo.com/9750b737002b5d016a4032151af49192 https://gyazo.com/05cfea10cd551e4eb8f97705c1dec6bc One of the many projects I'm currently doing: "Autosplicer! Making Splices Easy"
  19. One of those requests I mentioned. Goodbye,Sweet Hand. Maybe now I can some crits on something other than his hand lol. @Tao- The cape and lance are just blocked in right now, so thanks! Mug Medley mayhap?
  20. I mean, I like the idea and all but... http://serenesforest.net/forums/index.php?showtopic=52502 already being done bud, and once they get a few more completed they should be free to use.
  21. Splice Comp Almost done with this guy. Just the cape and spear left. I really don't want to lose the hand :( But I'm seeing more and more how it doesn't really work. I've been kinda slow on here because I've been doing a bunch of requests and personal stuff. Hopefully I'll finish something this week though.
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