Masu Posted September 7, 2008 Share Posted September 7, 2008 Damn it. That Lyle Damon thing.......that was what I had planned for me and branded to do when we fight knife . *groans* Now I have to think of ANOTHER way of doing the fight. *knew I should have updated yesterday like I planned* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Songbird Posted September 7, 2008 Share Posted September 7, 2008 LOL DAMON HAS A WIFE And it's always nice to have a happy ending, though I see that there's lots of potential to start another story with Lich around. XD Great job, Lyle! =D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted September 7, 2008 Share Posted September 7, 2008 LOL DAMONHAS A WIFE And it's always nice to have a happy ending, though I see that there's lots of potential to start another story with Lich around. XD Great job, Lyle! =D *smashes face against wall* THANKS. NOW WE ALL KNOW WHAT THE NEXT STORY IS GONNA BE! *continues to smash face against wall* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted September 7, 2008 Author Share Posted September 7, 2008 LOL DAMONHAS A WIFE And it's always nice to have a happy ending, though I see that there's lots of potential to start another story with Lich around. XD Great job, Lyle! =D Lol. Thanks. *smashes face against wall* THANKS. NOW WE ALL KNOW WHAT THE NEXT STORY IS GONNA BE! *continues to smash face against wall* No. On a personal level, I always liked the Lich and Mathan. I thought of the characters a loooooong time ago. And I always thought they sorta deserved a somewhat happy ending. I mean, Mathan isn't evil, his mind is just shattered. And the Lich is just doing his job. BTW, does anyone have any questions? I know the whole Damon=Zeek thing shattered at least one mind. *Brings flowers to Kiryn's mind's grave.* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serene Posted September 7, 2008 Share Posted September 7, 2008 Lol. Thanks.No. On a personal level, I always liked the Lich and Mathan. I thought of the characters a loooooong time ago. And I always thought they sorta deserved a somewhat happy ending. I mean, Mathan isn't evil, his mind is just shattered. And the Lich is just doing his job. BTW, does anyone have any questions? I know the whole Damon=Zeek thing shattered at least one mind. *Brings flowers to Kiryn's mind's grave.* Yeah I have a question WTF HAPPENED TO ME. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted September 7, 2008 Author Share Posted September 7, 2008 Yeah I have a questionWTF HAPPENED TO ME. Well I assume that everyone returned to Serenes Forest. Cept for Despuidad, Arcturus, and Lea. I assume they went off on their own. Idus probably healed up and returned to whatever he was doing. And Vor went on to be completely immortal. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted September 7, 2008 Share Posted September 7, 2008 Yeah you might wanna add another chapter to tie things up. So far this is what the ending looks like: Damon loses Zeek's wife shows up Damon goes "WTF" Lyle flies through a wall Evil lady says im immortal Damon says I know your weakness Lyle stabs IMMORTAL lady in the forehead Immortal lady screams and lich tells her to STFU Lyle bianchi masu and princess go to a dance leaving everyone else in the castle of doom to rot and be lost for all eternity the 2 OC's look at Lyle and talk and leave THE END. And wasn't fireman in the middle of a fight? Against some ninja lady? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hibari Posted September 7, 2008 Share Posted September 7, 2008 (edited) Yeah you might wanna add another chapter to tie things up. So far this is what the ending looks like:Damon loses Zeek's wife shows up Damon goes "WTF" Lyle flies through a wall Evil lady says im immortal Damon says I know your weakness Lyle stabs IMMORTAL lady in the forehead Immortal lady screams and lich tells her to STFU Lyle bianchi masu and princess go to a dance leaving everyone else in the castle of doom to rot and be lost for all eternity the 2 OC's look at Lyle and talk and leave THE END. And wasn't fireman in the middle of a fight? Against some ninja lady? That was already finished, but I think Nightmare was fighting that Arcturus guy. Edited September 7, 2008 by Branded Blade Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted September 8, 2008 Author Share Posted September 8, 2008 That was already finished, but I think Nightmare was fighting that Arcturus guy. Nah that fight ended as well. Perhaps I should write some sort of epilogue thing. But most of the characters just go back to Serenes Forest. It's not like it's an unsolvable mystery. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted September 12, 2008 Author Share Posted September 12, 2008 Well, on a whole, how did you all like it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted September 12, 2008 Share Posted September 12, 2008 hmm........lemme think about this for a bit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted November 9, 2008 Author Share Posted November 9, 2008 *Bumps.* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TLSothe Posted November 9, 2008 Share Posted November 9, 2008 I only ever read CH. 1 of this! = O I'll read it...soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oguma Posted November 9, 2008 Share Posted November 9, 2008 I should read this... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted November 9, 2008 Author Share Posted November 9, 2008 You're both more than welcome to do so. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted November 15, 2008 Share Posted November 15, 2008 Good! Yay! I can't find myself in the end... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted November 15, 2008 Author Share Posted November 15, 2008 Good! Yay!I can't find myself in the end... Yeah. Sorry. I kinda ripped a lot of people off in this story. Sorry.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted November 19, 2008 Share Posted November 19, 2008 It's okay. Better than the ending(s) I had in the first-ever sitcom movie oh those many years ago. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oguma Posted November 19, 2008 Share Posted November 19, 2008 You're both more than welcome to do so. *starts reading* You are such a good writer, Lyle. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted November 20, 2008 Author Share Posted November 20, 2008 It's okay. Better than the ending(s) I had in the first-ever sitcom movie oh those many years ago. Lol. I remember that. How are things with you and Brom? XD *starts reading*You are such a good writer, Lyle. Lol. Oh shucks you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted November 20, 2008 Share Posted November 20, 2008 -tries really hard to not punch Lyle- Lol... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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