Sacred Blaze Posted December 30, 2015 Author Share Posted December 30, 2015 (edited) Last touch ups for the night. Looking good. I agree though in thinking the right side of her face is still looking a bit odd. There's a lot of space between her eye and the edge of her head in her lightest skin shade, which makes it look a bit stretched. The thing in her hair is looking unnaturally straight in its shape. And on a side note, she looks like she's looking a lot... younger? It's not that important, but as it is right now she seems like she's pushing it into child territory. Or it might just be me. Edited December 30, 2015 by Sacred Blaze Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 31, 2015 Share Posted December 31, 2015 rascalflatsidon'tknowwhattodowiththishairanymore AMAZING killme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DH_Ninja Posted December 31, 2015 Share Posted December 31, 2015 I took a crack at it again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 31, 2015 Share Posted December 31, 2015 I like the bottom one the most, personally. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kon Posted December 31, 2015 Share Posted December 31, 2015 (edited) Have that fix that I promised forever ago and a fixup of Zara. I started this forever ago but only got back to it the other day >_< And I know Zara's eyes are pretty derp, but I dunno what to do with them anymore atm >_< Edited December 31, 2015 by Kon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 31, 2015 Share Posted December 31, 2015 Move 'em together a bit, they're too far apart is what's causing the derp o3o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kon Posted December 31, 2015 Share Posted December 31, 2015 deeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 31, 2015 Share Posted December 31, 2015 ze issue eet vas wis 'er eyebrows voila, mon ami Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kon Posted December 31, 2015 Share Posted December 31, 2015 I'm such a derp orz Thank you ;u; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 31, 2015 Share Posted December 31, 2015 eet ees no probleme, mon ami~ You did a great job of fixing literally everything else up, so take pride in that! Is a good job :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sacred Blaze Posted December 31, 2015 Author Share Posted December 31, 2015 (edited) I took a crack at it again. Yeah, I guess we'll go with the bottom one then. As for the variations on the hair on the top three, I'd say the middle one is best. ze issue eet vas wis 'er eyebrows voila, mon ami Looking good. Thanks to both of you. EDIT: Oh yeah, and for the Florence edit too. I was wondering if you were going to do anything more on that actually. Edited December 31, 2015 by Sacred Blaze Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aviv Posted January 1, 2016 Share Posted January 1, 2016 Val's Noble Dress attire update. The old one is on the left for comparison purposes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sacred Blaze Posted January 1, 2016 Author Share Posted January 1, 2016 Hmm, well the design for the new shoulders seems better, but the right shoulder dips really low in comparison to the left. Another thing is that on the left the second plate is on top of the other one, but on the right the second plate is underneath. On the hair, I think that things are looking a bit off with the edit. Main thing is that bit of hair that's cropping up on her cheek there, but otherwise I think it might be that there's a bit too much hair in that area, which makes her hair look messy in comparison to her hair in both the old look and her style in her normal look as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sacred Blaze Posted January 8, 2016 Author Share Posted January 8, 2016 (edited) Anyone see any problems with these? Edited January 8, 2016 by Sacred Blaze Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kon Posted January 8, 2016 Share Posted January 8, 2016 The blue haired girl is missing some skin my her hairline, and the blond's eyes seem to be too close together. I think both outfits can use revamping too, but that's more of a personal thing. I can try my hand at them if you don't mind ~o3o~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted January 8, 2016 Share Posted January 8, 2016 so anyone can work on these? i'm going to work on laraya and fix the angles on thelma if no one minds Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sacred Blaze Posted January 9, 2016 Author Share Posted January 9, 2016 The blue haired girl is missing some skin my her hairline, and the blond's eyes seem to be too close together. I think both outfits can use revamping too, but that's more of a personal thing. I can try my hand at them if you don't mind ~o3o~ Yeah, I caught those missing skin pixels as well and told the spriter. As for the outfits, I'm not really too fussed about changing them, honestly. I've got a different look for Alyssa (blue hair) coming anyway, at least. But I don't mind seeing other stuff. so anyone can work on these? i'm going to work on laraya and fix the angles on thelma if no one minds Yeah, anyone can. As a heads up though, I know for sure that you might have some competition on a Laraya edit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DH_Ninja Posted January 9, 2016 Share Posted January 9, 2016 so anyone can work on these? i'm going to work on laraya and fix the angles on thelma if no one minds I used Laraya in my run of the game. Had the final blow. I wanna touch her too but go for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted January 9, 2016 Share Posted January 9, 2016 As a heads up though, I know for sure that you might have some competition on a Laraya edit. yeah thats what i'm asking -3- i dont want to work on something if someone else is! I used Laraya in my run of the game. Had the final blow. I wanna touch her too but go for it. are you the only one who was working on her or is blaze talking about someone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aviv Posted January 9, 2016 Share Posted January 9, 2016 Val's Noble Dress attire update. The old one is on the left for comparison purposes. Hmm, well the design for the new shoulders seems better, but the right shoulder dips really low in comparison to the left. Another thing is that on the left the second plate is on top of the other one, but on the right the second plate is underneath. On the hair, I think that things are looking a bit off with the edit. Main thing is that bit of hair that's cropping up on her cheek there, but otherwise I think it might be that there's a bit too much hair in that area, which makes her hair look messy in comparison to her hair in both the old look and her style in her normal look as well. This better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sacred Blaze Posted January 9, 2016 Author Share Posted January 9, 2016 yeah thats what i'm asking -3- i dont want to work on something if someone else is! are you the only one who was working on her or is blaze talking about someone else? I was actually talking about someone else in this case. But I forgot that DH_Ninja also said that. This better? Yeah, a little bit. Shoulders look better too, but they might still need more work than that. The bottom part of her body can't just be cut off though, otherwise she'll be noticeably short in-game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DH_Ninja Posted January 9, 2016 Share Posted January 9, 2016 Just do the thing. It could be a bit before I get to it. No progress but i'll certainly follow up on peer review. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sacred Blaze Posted January 12, 2016 Author Share Posted January 12, 2016 (edited) Updates on Dante and Laraya. That hair detail though. Edited January 12, 2016 by Sacred Blaze Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sacred Blaze Posted January 21, 2016 Author Share Posted January 21, 2016 (edited) This better? Following in from Aviv's edit on Val's noble outfit, I've just tried to touch things up a bit. I think the main issue I had before was that the shoulders were going heading off at different angles from each other. This looks better to me, but I don't know. What do others think? Anyway, just for my own peace of mind, is anyone planning on working on any portraits right now, or soon? I know some people had plans to do stuff with other characters, so I just want to know if that's still happening, or whether it's becoming time to wrap up this topic. There's basically only one portrait left that hasn't been edited properly, the woman in the light blue colour under the Done Mugs section on the first page. (Danielle) I just changed her colour scheme and made some minor touch-ups, so she's free for whatever anyone else might want to do with her. Edited January 22, 2016 by Sacred Blaze Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted January 22, 2016 Share Posted January 22, 2016 i wanted to work on at least one but it looks like theyre all done already. unless theres some you dont to be spruced up or smth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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