I want him to fix the shading under the hand, and get rid of the SPAGHETTI strands that make up the hair. It's like one of those playdoh figurines, where you push the playdoh through and it makes strands.
Your 2-E map is a lot cleaner (A LOT) but it's still a really bland. Try throwing in all the little tiny things that were sitting around on the map of 2-E.