Wow...just wow...
I am amazed. Such fantastic style, such flawless prose. Does this masterpiece have a name? Either way, I am simply in awe at your skill at writing Mr. Hero. Your story pulled me in immediately, and gripped me emotionally in a way no other work of fiction has ever done before. I could feel Bob as not just a character in a story, but as a real, living person that I could relate to. A true master of suspense, I was on the edge of my seat when Bob entered that time machine. I nearly cried when he did that thing for a reason. This story has affected me in ways no other story could. There are simply no other words that can be used to describe such a literary masterpiece. This deserves more than a simple grade, no, work as amazing as this should be published. The entire country must hear of Bob's amazing tale! You sir, are an absolute genius. I keenly look forward to your next work.