His head is not in angle with the body. His head is also too small for the armor, and the shading on the skin around his bangs needs to be fixed. I think a change of armor would be best.
It's improved, but there are still problems. Such as her right (our left) eye being tilted (the bottom part of her eye is angled). . . when her right eye isn't. Her right (our left) breast also looks off, but she could maybe have a large chest. Anyway, here are a few other problems I noticed:
Yellow boxes: Hair shading needs to be fixed. Referencing some FE mugs will help.
Wine(ish) box: Shading is awkward around the neck and collarbone.
Pink box: Nose is wrong. I'm not sure if you're going for a front view or if her head is turned. . . So, if front view: fix the bottom part of the nose and reference FE6 Anna's mug to see how the nose should be at that angle. If it's a side view, you might want to reference Lyn's semi-forward gaze mug but also fix the eye to show that it is a (somewhat) side view.
Red lines: Where I think the neck and the shoulder should be (your mileage may vary. . . probably).
Better. However, the shading around the bangs needs to be fixed and also where the neck meets the collar.