Cymbeline

I'll bite. . . She lacks whites in her eyes. The base of her neck looks too thick. Her shoulders are uneven. . . Hair needs shading in the middle rather than wholy on the sides. Um. . . hope that helps.

I like Palatino Linotype more, but both are nice. ^^

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The hair should be a bit thicker or less flat, in my opinion. As for the other two: Amewan is nice, though the hand seems maybe a bit too small. Also, there needs to be some shading under her shoulder armor. For your persona, the collar needs more shading to define between the skin and collar.

I can't tell if that is the hairline or bangs. However, assuming it is the hairline, it needs to be raised higher so that she has more of a forehead. Also, the armor on her shoulder looks too large so making it smaller would be good. On the right side of her right eye (our right), there is a blue dot next to the hair, but on the skin.. Lastly, the biggest problem to me is that she looks like she lacks eyebrows. I'm not sure if that's her design or not, though. . . so. . . yeah.

I like the design of this one. However, this sprite has the problem of two different outline shades: most of the sprite has FE8's (which is darker) while the hair and headband have FE7's (lighter). Fix the FE7 outline to be the same color as the FE8 shade (since you seem to be using FE8 colors). Above the headband there seem to be green dots above a red line. Make them dark red. Other those two, I noticed a few other problems: Purple boxes: Need shading in these areas. White box: The ear is a different set of skin shades (FE7) from the rest of the skin (which is FE8 skin tones). Pink box: Looks like two sets of outlines here. Get rid of the bottom dots. Pale blue box: Purple shades in the hair against the outline. Fix it to be the darkest hair shade. Dark blue box: outline seems a bit odd in this area for the head. Make it straight and connected to the line to the left. Green box: The chunk of hair here looks a bit odd.

There are still at least two different outline colors. But that should be an easy fix. Also, there are also two different skin color sets, and the problem with the ear still being too close to the eye. As for the second one, there needs to be a little bit more shading under the necklace. The bow on her head is a little out of perspective, as the left side of it should be smaller than the right given the way her head is turned. However, I think it's actually rather cleanly spliced, so you are improving.