I like the concept of the right one. Here's some advice:
You're using a pitch black outline, and mixing FE8 colours with FE7 colours (specifically in the face). You should use either one or the other and use the outline colour from the one you choose.
The cloak is way too bright, and perhaps could do with another darker shade.
Also the left bang is oddly shaped.
Overall though, you're sprites are clean, well done :D