Well, I've decided to write this thingie after lots of thinking. Since I'm Mexican, any help with the grammar mistakes is VERY appreciated (Makes me write better). Any feedback on the feedback topic, please. Also, don't expect me to update often, because I'm a person who doesn't have much free time to do this (I will complete it, just don't expect it to be fast).
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In some of the World’s oldest books, most of them made almost 2000 years ago, people tell the story of a little girl. This girl had a peculiar ability: the power to make miracles. Mothers with their sick children came to her, families with no money, men with no work. She prayed for them, and, with a little bit of patience, the miracle would occur. People believed that she was blessed by God, and thus they called her the “Holy Woman”.
Years passed, and the king of the World’s biggest country died of illness. Since the king never had a legitimate heir, the people of that country convinced the Holy Woman to help them and she was crowned Queen a year after.
The Queen made a court with the seven people she trusted the most, and gave them powers that were beyond human understanding. Even if their abilities weren’t as powerful as hers, they were still powerful enough to make some of the miracles she did.
When the Queen died of a mysterious cause, people mourned for 100 days and 100 nights. The Court then decided to take over her place and run the country. Their rule was despotic and they used their powers to silence everyone who opposed them.
When the Court’s members grew old and died, the people, infuriated, took out the corpses out of the palace and burned them. The wives and the children of those people were never found…
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The world of Meitneria has changed a lot since then. The people live in the big cities of Cobalt (the coldest city, also has lots of green areas), Yule (The place of artits and musicians), Rhonysville (the biggest and wealthiest city), Maddot (a port city with lots of tourism) and Felinae (a city with a growing industry).
On the year 1981, many people have started to suffer strange cases of amnesia, delirium and memory loss. The reasons are still unknown. The story begins with Arashi Airisu, a young student of history of the Cobalt Local College, who suddenly starts to meet friends with these problems
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Well, that's the intro, I hope you liked it. The story starts slow, but the more bizarre things will appear later. There will be things like magic and death (that's so like me).
Also, if you want to include a character into this story, please send me a PM (not a post, a PM, please) with a bio of your character (Name, age, appereance, personality, city where he/she lives, magic abilities of they have one (just nothing Mary Sue-ish, please), and a small bio). This is the first time I'm doing this, and I know it won't be easy, but I will do my best.
Thank you for reading!