Masu Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 post it here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rei Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 (edited) Your use of capitalization really made this story flow very well and as well as give it the character it needs. You should make people pay $10 to write stories for them. cool story bro Edited January 29, 2009 by Rei Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kiba Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 you should close your topic just in case or else people will just spam in it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted January 29, 2009 Author Share Posted January 29, 2009 you should close your topic just in case or else people will just spam in it But i dont feel like reopening it every time i wanna type ;_; Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neko Arc Chaos Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 I enjoy it, and look forward to more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 DEAR GOD This story is MIND BLOWING. I had no idea it could get better but...it did! Amazing job Masu! AMAZING! It brings...tears to my eyes, almost... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 Why do you even bother? It doesn't even have full stops let alone proper grammar. Go fix it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shuuda Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 (edited) I have not read this yet, however, I do have one important thing to say. Title! Please think a bit harder on it next time, since it really suggests a lack of effort to me. Upon reading this monstrosity, my advice to you would be: please stop writing as you are blighting literature with is rubbish. I mean, that topic space could have been used by someone who gives a damn about art... your story clearly belongs in the spam section. Edited January 29, 2009 by Shuuda Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive Account Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 This thing causes my mind unimaginable pain. It's pretty funny. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufasa Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 Lol. Good stuff. Keep it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shuuda Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 (edited) Let me take this as an example of the replies you have to ignore Will. Your stuff Will, while decent(for the levels of this forum) it is nothing close to "awesome". Am I being crude here? Yes. Am I being honest? Yes. Here at Serenes they have the terrible habit of giving "thumbs up posts". Let me tell ya: this posts kill your chances of improving. This posts make you think you're doing great when you're mediocre at best. They do not inspire any desire for self improvement. They are like iron weights that that hold you from improving as an artist. This is posts are a true example of what we casually call "bullshit". If you're smart will you'll completely ignore this single sentence posts that don't help at all. If someone over here says your stuff is "awesome" they are lying; ignore them and if possible tell them to cut the bullshit. If you want to be a mediocre artist then by all means ignore this post. If you want to improve I suggest you find a decent place to get criticism because this ain't it. What I would not give to have this quote imprinted somewhere. Edited January 29, 2009 by Shuuda Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rei Posted January 30, 2009 Share Posted January 30, 2009 lol this shit is funny, only if you get the jokes though. I'm waiting for MOAR chapters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Defeatist Elitist Posted January 30, 2009 Share Posted January 30, 2009 lol this shit is funny, only if you get the jokes though. I'm waiting for MOAR chapters. No offense, but then it really belongs in the Spam section. A story made almost entirely of in jokes is a pretty bad story. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rei Posted January 31, 2009 Share Posted January 31, 2009 Doom was fucking hilarious in the last chapter. I love it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Posted February 4, 2009 Share Posted February 4, 2009 Excellent. EXCELLENT! WISTRON5000's entrance was one of the most dramatic things in the world. Oh and... *Looks at sig* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masu Posted February 4, 2009 Author Share Posted February 4, 2009 Excellent. EXCELLENT! WISTRON5000's entrance was one of the most dramatic things in the world.Oh and... *Looks at sig* :D YES! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not Changed by VASM :( Posted February 4, 2009 Share Posted February 4, 2009 OH MAI GAWD THIS WAS FUCKING AWESOME DIS IS TEH BEST SHIT I HAVE SMOKED SINCE WEEEED BEST STORY ON SERENES EVEN BETTER THEN SHUUUDAHUDAHUH Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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