Astelaine Posted May 7, 2012 Share Posted May 7, 2012 (edited) Wow, Anna's hair is incredible. Lovely work, Astra! :) As for Tiamo, she's excellent, but her bust seems a little too big. While Awakening's artist does like that kind of embellishment, it still seems like her chest is fuller than in her artwork, and maybe sticks out a little too far. Keep in mind that Tiamo is otherwise small-framed; her boobs should be relatively proportionate to her build. That said, it's a matter of taste in the end, keep it all Merc if you like. ;) Edited May 7, 2012 by Astelaine Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted May 7, 2012 Share Posted May 7, 2012 i just want to omnom anna's hair along with the rest of her if you know what i mean Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted May 7, 2012 Share Posted May 7, 2012 Well what I see in Anna's hair is that the hair that's..... uhhh, like wrapped around her head and whatnot... it looks too stringy because when I look at it the lines seem so skinny that they just look more like dots to me... so maybe if it doesn't look as stringy like how it is on others who have their hair tied back like that, then the lines wouldn't have to look so skinny to that point... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klokinator Posted May 7, 2012 Share Posted May 7, 2012 With hair like that, Anna must be Super Saiyan 12. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted September 15, 2012 Author Share Posted September 15, 2012 lol4thpage OC, should appear somewhere else soon enough. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted September 15, 2012 Share Posted September 15, 2012 Tiny shoulders. High tits. o 3 o Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eCut Posted September 16, 2012 Share Posted September 16, 2012 Hair looks like it has a bit too much contrast. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Peachar Posted September 16, 2012 Share Posted September 16, 2012 ^I think it's just Selena hair colors. That said, It's really hard to see what's going on with the fur around her neck. That definitely needs more...definition? Body is also quite a bit off from the head angle, but it's not too bad. Same with shoulders; a bit small but not absolutely terrible. I will say, though, her arms are just skin and bone; they are very thin. Maybe a pixel or two for meat, plz. (that'll help with the shoulders thing) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Feaw Posted September 16, 2012 Share Posted September 16, 2012 Hair looks like it has a bit too much contrast. Looks fine to me (and I'm a contrast freak). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted September 18, 2012 Share Posted September 18, 2012 Eh... Some of the spots, mostly with the darkest shade, in the hair look like they really stand out to me. Definitely a lot of the parts on the top of her head where the bangs and the rest of the hair is parting at. So yeah I can see where eCut's coming from. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted September 18, 2012 Share Posted September 18, 2012 Hair looks like it has a bit too much contrast. You're on the right track, but incorrect. I had to loom in close to my computer screen and possibly damage my eyes to see that there are 4 hair shades. Those aren't Selena's colors, for whomever clown said that. 1st-2nd hair shade: too little contrast 2-3: fair amount of contrast 3-4: What the fack big beast contrast too much fhqwhgads Darkest skin colors are still too light for the border color, like on every mug you do, but you don't seem to want to fix that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted September 18, 2012 Share Posted September 18, 2012 I had to loom in close to my computer screen and possibly damage my eyes to see that there are 4 hair shades. Because ruining your eyesight is preferable to copy-pasting + zoom in another program, right. It's also kind of blatantly obvious from a distance that there're more than 3 hair shades, and they are Selena's. Either way, too much detail in too little space without enough definition to separate or distinguish them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted September 18, 2012 Author Share Posted September 18, 2012 Those aren't Selena's colors, for whomever clown said that. Darkest skin colors are still too light for the border color, like on every mug you do, but you don't seem to want to fix that. They actually are. that feel when i realize that it's taken from fe8 females Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted September 18, 2012 Share Posted September 18, 2012 Meh, for some reason I remembered FE8's colors being more consistent Carry on, I guess. Because ruining your eyesight is preferable to copy-pasting + zoom in another program, right. Exaggeration Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted September 18, 2012 Share Posted September 18, 2012 Exaggeration Sarcasm. :B Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Peachar Posted September 18, 2012 Share Posted September 18, 2012 Those aren't Selena's colors, for whomever clown said that. [spoiler=Imaclownlol] Looks like it could be different because shading style is different than how the shades were used on Selena. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted September 18, 2012 Share Posted September 18, 2012 (edited) They actually are. that feel when i realize that it's taken from fe8 females Err... They're reallllllly close. But IDK what you consider 'their colors'. (As in they're so close you can't tell the difference) I do agree you should use the darker shades for the AA with the skin and the outline, though. The outline on the shoulder in particular feels like there's no AA at all. Edited September 18, 2012 by L95 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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