BrainFreeze Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 (edited) Better Edited May 31, 2011 by BrainFreeze Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted June 1, 2011 Author Share Posted June 1, 2011 I think by flat he means straight down. See how the rest of his clothes and his body are at an angle but his shirt just goes straight? The shirt should also be slanted. Oh yeah! lol =) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted June 26, 2011 Author Share Posted June 26, 2011 Oh yeah... Round 33 Round 34 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted June 27, 2011 Share Posted June 27, 2011 Round 34 looks like his neck is too skinny and too long. Try moving the head forward and down and widening the inner collar. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted June 27, 2011 Share Posted June 27, 2011 Missing part of teh outline: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted June 28, 2011 Author Share Posted June 28, 2011 (edited) Round 34 looks like his neck is too skinny and too long. Try moving the head forward and down and widening the inner collar. I can see long, but I think it probably only looks skinny because of the strand of hair that's coming in front of it. I think I can make some of the collar seem to appear on the other side of the strand though and it'll make it actually look like it's doing that. Missing part of teh outline: It was actually like that to begin with =[ I was wondering if I should fix it so I guess I will. It probably isn't so noticeable with Sonia because of the hair color. Edited June 28, 2011 by Agnaktor Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted June 28, 2011 Share Posted June 28, 2011 Uhhhh, Free Sonia's outline isn't cut off at the top. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted June 28, 2011 Author Share Posted June 28, 2011 Really?... But that's how it looked when I got it =[ Oh well either way it's an easy fix so I shouldn't feel too bad about it. Lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amelia Posted June 28, 2011 Share Posted June 28, 2011 Uhhhh, Free Sonia's outline isn't cut off at the top. Uh Seph, Lumi cut that off by accident. o3o Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted June 28, 2011 Share Posted June 28, 2011 Yeah, the Set had Sonia's top cut off a bit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted June 28, 2011 Share Posted June 28, 2011 Oops sorry ;3; I didn't realise.=x= Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted June 30, 2011 Author Share Posted June 30, 2011 Oh lol that's fine Lumi =D I hope that what I did with the collar helped. Hopefully the neck doesn't look too long anymore because recently I just haven't been in the sprity mood (which is leaving me uninspired to do much for the summer comp ;-;) so idk if I would be too lazy or not to move all the hair along with the head since I'd also have to make teeny tiny changes along with it. D= In which case I also just remembered that I tried to make sure Hector's chin got at the same level that Valter's was at. (since I left Valter's neck the same so I just moved his chin to the point that was erased) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted July 10, 2011 Author Share Posted July 10, 2011 (edited) Started up another sprite. Took me a while to come up with something =/ But (thank you Night xD) now I've got a new program because of how stupid the Windows 7 Paint is and this new program is more simple like an older Paint. While it doesn't do that replace color thingy the way Paint does, it still helps when I just wanna mess around with adding pixels or reshaping/reshading and whatnot... Then after I do that I use the color replace on this Paint since it can at least do that. But yeah, here's the new sprite. I think she kinda looks like an Avril... I usually can never come up with names for my sprites... EDIT: I just realized the only reason blue was in that string with Fiora was only cause her hair was blue too. Now green with black doesn't look right so maybe I'll have to change that too... Ugh. I also realized that on the bottom right it looks like I made that scarf thing stretch too far =_= Okay then is this good? =I Edited July 10, 2011 by Agnaktor Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted July 11, 2011 Share Posted July 11, 2011 Hardcore pimped fiora, but still fiora. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted July 11, 2011 Author Share Posted July 11, 2011 Hmm.... I can see how that can be a good thing, and I can see how that can be bad xD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted August 19, 2011 Author Share Posted August 19, 2011 Whoops 36th competition And before you say I am editing that cloth/whatever thingy going around her head/face. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted October 9, 2011 Author Share Posted October 9, 2011 (edited) Sprite comp. 40 entry I wanna fix the bangs and I kept trying to mess around with their shape but I couldn't get it to look the way I wanted them to. Also I'm afraid of messing around too much with them because idk how much that counts as customing. As for the trim, should I change it to red? It doesn't seem to look that good as white... Idk if that's all about the outfit that doesn't look right because that outfit is just =_= And of course if there's anything about it that looks wrong, then feel free~ edit Edited October 9, 2011 by Freohr Datia Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted October 9, 2011 Share Posted October 9, 2011 Cleaning up is not necessarily customing. See: Vamp and waq's splices. Not fond of the red trim, TBH. I think all white would be better, especially because there's a lot of the same sort of values going on. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted October 9, 2011 Author Share Posted October 9, 2011 Ah, that part I made red because it was hard for me to put the white in there against the black. It looked all blocky to me. But I think I made it look a bit more fitting before I changed it to red so I could change it back to that. Although I'm actually thinking of ditching the whole idea and change the outfit itself. I was basing this sprite off of a picture (although of course I couldn't make them look exactly alike). I was also trying to avoid putting Artur's cloak on her since I was thinking "that's what everybody else would do" but I may try to include a cloak, but just try to keep it a bit different... somehow. But yeah I'm liking the idea of just changing the outfit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted October 9, 2011 Share Posted October 9, 2011 Well, it wouldn't hurt her any, I think. ...also, your pony GIFs are making my connection lag like mad. >: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted October 9, 2011 Author Share Posted October 9, 2011 (edited) *quickly goes to work before the deadline/competition closes* Also awwwww D= I <3 using gifs EDIT: WAIT TODAY'S ONLY THE 9TH??? Earlier around midnight I looked and thought that today would be the 10th but apparently I didn't know it was already the next day =D Edited October 9, 2011 by Freohr Datia Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted October 11, 2011 Author Share Posted October 11, 2011 Okay, latest version. Can't say I'm hundred percent satisfied, but idk what else to do with it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strawman Posted October 11, 2011 Share Posted October 11, 2011 Looking good. I like the clothes change! You could try to give her a not so obviously L'Arachel face if you want lol. Mess around using Artur or Echidna's eyes/jaw/nose etc if you want. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted October 11, 2011 Author Share Posted October 11, 2011 Oh I was actually trying to base it off of a pic and l'arachel's eyes matched it best.... Or maybe Artur's would work. Yeah I suppose I could try replacing the eye then. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strawman Posted October 11, 2011 Share Posted October 11, 2011 Oooooh Well then never mind then lol, I forgot you had a reference for it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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