Superluigi Posted August 23, 2010 Share Posted August 23, 2010 (edited) Just a bit of my mapping work. Not much at the moment but it's a nice start to a gallery. Rather large images... fail computers beware! [spoiler=Maps] That'll do for now. Please comment/crit and be nice, I'll make this post nice later on. Edited May 26, 2011 by Superluigi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted August 23, 2010 Share Posted August 23, 2010 ........daaaaaaaamn those are good. I'm not really a mapper, so I can't critique as well as I could if those maps were sprites. Right now, I can't see any flaws. XD; Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Glenn Posted August 23, 2010 Share Posted August 23, 2010 I prefer the first map out of the two (not too big on Sacae-esque maps) in terms of flat-out appearance. As a general observation, I feel like the paths/roads could be a bit more "random" (in the sense that they need to be "jumpy" like in the Sacae map, but you don't want them to show patterns like the Sacae map kind of does) in both maps. For the first map, it's notably the two roads at the bottom of the map, though the top ones could use it as well (albeit less than the bottom ones). Also, as I'm sure you're aware, you've got some road tiles with dark spots that stand out a bit much in the first map. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Superluigi Posted August 26, 2010 Author Share Posted August 26, 2010 Update time! Just some bloke, you might have him seen before: And a few Snes weapon icons I updated a while ago: Dulam Yotsmungand Fenrir Hel Loputousu Poison Stone Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xiltas Crysten Posted August 26, 2010 Share Posted August 26, 2010 Looks good o.o Is it Hetzel or Tetzel from FE10? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted August 27, 2010 Share Posted August 27, 2010 Hetzel, raphiel's savior/enemy. Looks very good, nice work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strawman Posted August 27, 2010 Share Posted August 27, 2010 Wow, that Hetzel mug is great. Cool maps also, but I don't really know anything about spriting maps haha. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Superluigi Posted August 28, 2010 Author Share Posted August 28, 2010 I'm kinda bored of hacking today, so I decided to totally remake an old mug of Radney I made. It's still a WIP, but feel free to Crit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted August 28, 2010 Share Posted August 28, 2010 Hetzel is awesome! Good job! Your mugs arent bad! Im not much of a mapper though so i cant really say if they are good or not. :( Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Superluigi Posted October 12, 2010 Author Share Posted October 12, 2010 Meh, another bloke based on someone FE10, don't even know the original guys name. Feel free to blast with crit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xiltas Crysten Posted October 12, 2010 Share Posted October 12, 2010 Hmm... the only thing disturbing me a bit would be the shading of the cloak, but it's more of a tiny error besides, I'm not much better at shading either Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Superluigi Posted May 9, 2011 Author Share Posted May 9, 2011 It's clear I don't do this sort of thing often... Gandolf, the not so white. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Sholes Posted May 9, 2011 Share Posted May 9, 2011 That is beautiful! Just fix the shading under the eyes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted May 9, 2011 Share Posted May 9, 2011 That is beautiful! Just fix the shading under the eyes Man, this critic is so helpful! Seriously. Anyways, the head is big, the body isn't. The body doesn't have to be THAT much larger, but, Dieck sized as least would be good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Superluigi Posted May 9, 2011 Author Share Posted May 9, 2011 Some quick edits... Anything else drastically need changing? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted May 9, 2011 Share Posted May 9, 2011 Well... Yeah, his body's not big enough still o ~ o It's the neck and the visable shoulder. They're too small in comparison to his very large head. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Superluigi Posted May 10, 2011 Author Share Posted May 10, 2011 Better now? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted May 10, 2011 Share Posted May 10, 2011 Little bit, yeah. He could still use some more neck here Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Superluigi Posted May 20, 2011 Author Share Posted May 20, 2011 Ahh! Bandit! Neck and frame fixes for Gandolf Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted May 20, 2011 Share Posted May 20, 2011 ohaiFE4 I was instantly reminded of Dimaggio Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Superluigi Posted May 26, 2011 Author Share Posted May 26, 2011 (edited) Yeah I did base him on Dimaggio a bit. WHAT! More FE4!? I fail at custom hair. EDIT: Yes! Second page. Edited May 26, 2011 by Superluigi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted May 26, 2011 Share Posted May 26, 2011 His head is a heart~ ...and his clavs are probably up way too high and far apart. The clothing wrinkles don't make a whole lot of sense, and the collar should be going up in the back, not down. Ponytail is supar lumpy, and your plain-faced mug syndrome is manifesting itself again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Superluigi Posted May 26, 2011 Author Share Posted May 26, 2011 A little better? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted May 26, 2011 Share Posted May 26, 2011 (edited) Missed a whole line on his far ear tail. Near ear tail is pretty choppy, too, and doesn't match the far one very well. The pauldron is kind of nondescript, and doesn't really show the shape of the armor very well. Hrm, and the far side of the chest might be shaded in too much. Edited May 26, 2011 by · j e a l o u s y · Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Superluigi Posted May 27, 2011 Author Share Posted May 27, 2011 More edits Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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