NICKT™ Posted November 6, 2010 Share Posted November 6, 2010 Um, she only has one arm, wut? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 6, 2010 Author Share Posted November 6, 2010 (edited) Um, she's facing in a way that her chest plate covers it, wut? But, yeah, I can see where you're coming from. I'll add some more arm Edited November 6, 2010 by seph1212 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NICKT™ Posted November 6, 2010 Share Posted November 6, 2010 The direction she's facing would still show some arm in a normal standing position. In the position she's in right now, showing no arm, it's like she's pulling her right shoulder back and holding her arm behind her body or something. :/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 6, 2010 Author Share Posted November 6, 2010 But, yeah, I can see where you're coming from. I'll add some more arm This. I already said I would :P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 6, 2010 Author Share Posted November 6, 2010 Man, round 18 is driving me crazy XD I have an idea for some arms, but it's gonna be tough. Anyone who can guess the character, gets a cookie. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted November 6, 2010 Share Posted November 6, 2010 Zelda ears... THINK DANCER THINK Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 6, 2010 Author Share Posted November 6, 2010 Zelda ears? Way off. Not even in the same game genre, now XD Oops, I spoiled it. She's from a game. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted November 6, 2010 Share Posted November 6, 2010 Lol wut? Damn, KEEP THINKING DANCER Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 6, 2010 Author Share Posted November 6, 2010 (edited) Alright, done. I will never EVER go this crazy for a splicing competition sprite. Edited November 6, 2010 by seph1212 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted November 6, 2010 Share Posted November 6, 2010 She seems to be missing some shading around her hair. Other than that, shes pretty cool. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 6, 2010 Author Share Posted November 6, 2010 She seems to be missing some shading around her hair. Where, exactly? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted November 6, 2010 Share Posted November 6, 2010 Around her hairline and on her clothes. *shrug* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 7, 2010 Author Share Posted November 7, 2010 Alright, final update, hopefully. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astelaine Posted November 7, 2010 Share Posted November 7, 2010 You also shouldn't be using that heavy outline color around her trim and shirt. It's way too dark compared to her light clothing, and thus looks pretty jarring. Try using the darkest skin shade instead? Look at Natasha's sprite for an example. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 7, 2010 Author Share Posted November 7, 2010 Thanks for the advice, Astelaine. It does look better with the darkest skin tone instead. If you can't see what I changed, it was on the... Well, bikini-armor-thing and the part of the shirt that touched the skin. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 12, 2010 Author Share Posted November 12, 2010 (edited) Alright, since the splicing comp is kinda over and such, I decided to revamp this a little bit, in hopes that it would look better. So, folks, tear it apart, and tell me everything you all think is wrong, 'cause I want this to look good. This is me reference, for anyone wondering: http://www.videogamesblogger.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/10/tales-of-vesperia-wallpaper-judith-big.jpg Edited November 12, 2010 by seph1212 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 That streak looks a bit weird. If you want a good streak ref use Heath. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strider Zero Posted November 13, 2010 Share Posted November 13, 2010 (edited) I'm impressed by your sprites, Seph. You should consider placing a showcase for them all on your first post. One thing though. It seems like this one's head (The right one) is somewhat disconnected on the right side. That could just be me though. Edited November 13, 2010 by Strider Zero Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 13, 2010 Author Share Posted November 13, 2010 I'm impressed by your sprites, Seph. You should consider placing a showcase for them all on your first post. One thing though. It seems like this one's head (The right one) is somewhat disconnected on the right side. That could just be me though. Those two were just random ones. I doubt I'll ever go back to fix them. Not too proud of them, myself. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 15, 2010 Author Share Posted November 15, 2010 CnC this, please. I figure I'm doing all the ToV characters now, and I want to make them look good XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waqwaq Posted November 15, 2010 Share Posted November 15, 2010 isnt the shoulder too low??? maybe you should add shadnig to the hair :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 15, 2010 Author Share Posted November 15, 2010 isnt the shoulder too low??? maybe you should add shadnig to the hair :) Yeah, you're right about the shoulder. Any idea where the hair shading should go? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted November 15, 2010 Share Posted November 15, 2010 This is more how the body should be positioned I think, so far you have bits that dont match up when it looks like a symmetrical design so that shouldn't be happening. In general, the bangs lack shading and seem very empty, try to extend a few of the strand markers, just a few though if you do too many it could turn noodley the back of the hair has a slice of pure 2nd hair tone, I dont really understand why you've got it there, maybe try something like the back of Lucius' hair spliced in or something. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted November 15, 2010 Share Posted November 15, 2010 It's for the splice contest vamp :P Can't add in other sprites Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 15, 2010 Author Share Posted November 15, 2010 (edited) It's for the splice contest vamp :P Can't add in other sprites Doesn't mean I can't fix it up for personal use. I've entered this one into the contest, and now I can make it look better. Just can't enter it into the contest. :P Also, thanks, Vamp, I'll get right on it. Edited November 15, 2010 by seph1212 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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