47948201 Posted November 18, 2010 Share Posted November 18, 2010 No, no, don't redo the entire sprite XD I just mean his back is flat. And also, the capitalization of "Untitled RPG project" implies that the actual name of the project is "Untitled", which is the name of my hack (as if my oh-so-unimportant identity wasn't obvious already by my odd spacing style) =/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 18, 2010 Author Share Posted November 18, 2010 No, no, don't redo the entire sprite XD I just mean his back is flat. And also, the capitalization of "Untitled RPG project" implies that the actual name of the project is "Untitled", which is the name of my hack (as if my oh-so-unimportant identity wasn't obvious already by my odd spacing style) =/ Oh, 'K. I can fix that... I think. And, as of now, it is called Untitled RPG Project XD They're thinking of a name for it. I'm sure it'll change XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted November 18, 2010 Share Posted November 18, 2010 He needs to be taller again, roughly where the orange line is, he also needs more back and a bigger head, the armor looks alot better though its shading could be further refined. Have a look at the(amazon) near breast on my example, while it does have shading over the actual breast itself it has shading below, since you're only working with 2 colours and outline i'd suggest dictating the shape of the breast with the darker blue and using the lighter blue for the breast itself, it might take a few trial and errors but I'm sure it will look right eventually, only thing is atm it seems her breast starts on top of your shaded arc as apposed to that jsut giving the breast a more spherical appearance. I also changed around a few pixels on the eye using hair colours to get a softer look on the far eye and make the near one less "pixely" i think i changed a pixel on the jaw too, but i dno for sure haha, Also, the sections that are in orange squares, I don't quite know why they're filled but not shaded with the rest of the hair, they should either connect with the hair or turn to background colour ;) Hope this is somewhat useful in your editing process Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 18, 2010 Author Share Posted November 18, 2010 Vamp, I swear, I love these XD It's getting late here, so I'll see what I can do tomorrow, though don't be surprised if something shows up tonight :3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 18, 2010 Author Share Posted November 18, 2010 (edited) Vamp, I do not see how anyone could resist your critique x3 And, god, I'm such a liar XD I say I'm gonna fix stuff tomorrow, and I do it tonight. Also, Vamp, I can't make him any taller :< He has to fit into RPG Maker standards of 96x96, which he just is. Edited November 18, 2010 by seph1212 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted November 18, 2010 Share Posted November 18, 2010 (edited) Maybe extend the neck? Wait, what the hell am I saying, ignore that :P Edited November 18, 2010 by Dancer A Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 19, 2010 Author Share Posted November 19, 2010 (edited) So, for a first time doing custom hair, custom cape, and custom fur, I think I did pretty well. EDIT: DAAAAAAAAN Edited November 19, 2010 by seph1212 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amelia Posted November 19, 2010 Share Posted November 19, 2010 That was fast! D: Nicely done, too! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 19, 2010 Author Share Posted November 19, 2010 That was fast! D: Nicely done, too! Thanks Amely~ Btw, it's Toona, not Tuna :P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 19, 2010 Author Share Posted November 19, 2010 Yay, better eyes!... The nose still irks me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 19, 2010 Author Share Posted November 19, 2010 (edited) Placeholder face is placeholderish. So, how does the hair look so far, everyone? I'd love some critique on it. It's for Fire Mumblem :P EDIT: please ignore the impossibility of the hair's position XD Edited November 19, 2010 by seph1212 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted November 19, 2010 Share Posted November 19, 2010 other than the fact that it has little shading and makes no sense... the colour levels arent that great either, but I'm sure you'll get there eventually. It almost looks like it should be a sorta 50's esque hair style with that flick, so i dno, this is what i assumed you were going for, maybe if it had a shape similar to this it'd make more sense? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 19, 2010 Author Share Posted November 19, 2010 Well, when this is your reference, you don't have much to work off of XD But, I can see how that shape would work better. Reference time, away~ tomorrow Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheReaper Posted November 19, 2010 Share Posted November 19, 2010 Joshua has been watching too much tv yo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted November 19, 2010 Share Posted November 19, 2010 WHy is he wearing those shells from mario kart on his shoulders... and is he from the simpsons? *yellowskin... SHOT* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 19, 2010 Author Share Posted November 19, 2010 WHy is he wearing those shells from mario kart on his shoulders... and is he from the simpsons? *yellowskin... SHOT* I didn't draw it :< Markyjoe, that Fire Mumblem guy did. I know, it's pretty bad, but it's all I've got to work off of. Trust me, even my art is better than that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amelia Posted November 20, 2010 Share Posted November 20, 2010 Thanks Amely~ Btw, it's Toona, not Tuna :P I like calling her Tuna. D:< Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 20, 2010 Author Share Posted November 20, 2010 I like calling her Tuna. D:< SHE'S NOT A FISH! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted November 20, 2010 Share Posted November 20, 2010 Eew fish. Im allergic to them. *flees from topic* That hair... Looks kind of flat IMHO. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 20, 2010 Author Share Posted November 20, 2010 Eew fish. Im allergic to them. *flees from topic* That hair... Looks kind of flat IMHO. 'Cause that's totally not what Vamp already said, of course :/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted November 20, 2010 Share Posted November 20, 2010 Im not in the mood for off topic warn today :| Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 20, 2010 Author Share Posted November 20, 2010 (edited) Im not in the mood for off topic warn today :| Then... Don't point out things that people have already said? Makes sense to me :| I highly doubt I need to have the same thing told to me twice. Edited November 20, 2010 by seph1212 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 26, 2010 Author Share Posted November 26, 2010 Amely, thanks for having that awesome picture in your sig. It made me want to sprite this XD So, hair, I need help. First time FCing hair, so... Yeah, it was started before sir blue-hair mcpointy bangs CnC? Vaaaaaaaaamp? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CT075 Posted November 26, 2010 Share Posted November 26, 2010 The clothes suck. Damn, Trent. You've outdone yourself. That hair looks great. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peener weener Posted November 26, 2010 Share Posted November 26, 2010 Amely, thanks for having that awesome picture in your sig. It made me want to sprite this XD So, hair, I need help. First time FCing hair, so... Yeah, it was started before sir blue-hair mcpointy bangs CnC? Vaaaaaaaaamp? That is awesome. It's not quite FE shading, but it is more awesome than FE shading. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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