Thor Odinson Posted December 23, 2010 Author Share Posted December 23, 2010 Sety GO Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted December 23, 2010 Share Posted December 23, 2010 I really like the design and his turtle neck's come out quite nicely haha seeing sety makes me want to go through and finish my old lineart of him I started, I had this thing where I'd go through and make the relatives of Characters that Chalpy/Blackavar had done *she did nanna, I did lachesis(and delmud, though I'm re=doing him, well I started to at least)* *she did Fury, I did Fee* *she did Levin, I started Sety* *she did Tinny, I went through and re-did miss tama's Tiltyu* Then there's the main set I did, related to her Ishtar haha Anywayyyyys i'm way off topic, the problem areas are the shoulderpads the hair and the face. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parrhesia Posted December 23, 2010 Share Posted December 23, 2010 The hair? Aw...but Lumine has somehow captured the definition of 'apple green'. Somehow. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted December 23, 2010 Author Share Posted December 23, 2010 Yeah. Amely pointed out some stuff with the shoulderpads that I'm gonna fix. Hair and face, though,Vamp, can you give in detail crit? I want to make Sety better since he's my best sprite to date. owo Also, off topic but... Can I use your Lachesis in my hack too? Also, for Trabant, do you have the frames or should I just make them (even though I suck, lolol)? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 23, 2010 Share Posted December 23, 2010 Yeah. Amely pointed out some stuff with the shoulderpads that I'm gonna fix. Hair and face, though,Vamp, can you give in detail crit? I want to make Sety better since he's my best sprite to date. owo Also, off topic but... Can I use your Lachesis in my hack too? Also, for Trabant, do you have the frames or should I just make them (even though I suck, lolol)? I'm using Vamp's Trabant in my hack, and if you can get permission to use it, you're welcome to use the frames I make for it I know that frames aren't one of your strong points, Lumi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted December 23, 2010 Author Share Posted December 23, 2010 (edited) I did get permission so... OMG thanks Trent. Yeah. For Sety, I totally stole the frames from Pent because I suck at them and am lazy. Just like I stole Franz's ear. Edited December 23, 2010 by Luminescent Blade Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frosty Posted December 23, 2010 Share Posted December 23, 2010 I like the Holyn one.... I'm digging dat Mist too... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted December 23, 2010 Author Share Posted December 23, 2010 (edited) Thanks, Frostbite. I tried cleaning up the hair a bit. QQ Vamp why do you make such sexy hair and why do I fail at referencing it? Aaaaaanyway, Still Pent's frames and Franz's ears. And no clue how to fix face. Edit: Moved nose over one px. Is this better? Edited December 23, 2010 by Luminescent Blade Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frosty Posted December 25, 2010 Share Posted December 25, 2010 Seems okay to me.... I like dat Sety mug.... I wonder what will your Cain and all the other red knights' mugs will look like... *shot* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NICKT™ Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 Hair's flat, trim's shit, shirts good(considering it's only got 2 shades), smiling frames are top row, not bottom, further shoulder pad sits differently to the closer one, looks like he's tilting his arm(imo I find it weird, plausible though.). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 (edited) Disregard this, silly iPhone dp'd Edited December 28, 2010 by Vampire Elf Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 Hair's flat, trim's shit, shirts good(considering it's only got 2 shades), smiling frames are top row, not bottom, further shoulder pad sits differently to the closer one, looks like he's tilting his arm(imo I find it weird, plausible though.). Just a note, the shirt has 3 shades. I think you'd want to focus on the shoulderpad shape first and foremost, the focus on the trim. To me it seems that you added the trim holes in at the end? It might just be that they're pillowy, where as the trim should go in lines? Like the gap in an 'A' or a 'P' the lines go around rather and form the shape iono if that makes sense, id give a visual example but I'm at my holiday house and only have my fone net no net for my lappy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NICKT™ Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 Just a note, the shirt has 3 shades. Looked like two to me, keep in mind I only looked at it on here and didn't bother copying it into paint and zooming in and shit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted December 28, 2010 Author Share Posted December 28, 2010 (edited) Astra made an edit of mine, but I dunno if I should post it until he gets online. Nickt, if you need me to sketch out the damn fullbody angle I'll do it. And though I understand my trimming abilities is absolute shit, can you, er... be a little more kind on the wording of it? And give actual tips on how to fix the goddamn thing. How the hell am I supposed to fix this shit if I don't get any pointers on it? Frames I'll fix. Edited December 28, 2010 by Luminescent Blade Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NICKT™ Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 cbf, let Vamp do it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 (edited) Lumi, the trim's lighting seems inconsistent. Just on the close shoulder pad for now, try applying lighting to pretty much the whole trimming and show me how it looks after, k? I call the first shade of everything the lighting, if you don't understand. Your trim so far isn't horrible, actually better than I could do before I got the hang of AA-ing. EDIT: Nother thing, use darkest skin shade to outline trim when it meets skin or anything else similar in color. Edited December 28, 2010 by April Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted December 28, 2010 Author Share Posted December 28, 2010 I'll make a fix on my own version, then. BTW, Astra has been kind enough to fix some of my stuff on Sety, so I got his permission to post it here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 I'll make a fix on my own version, then. BTW, Astra has been kind enough to fix some of my stuff on Sety, so I got his permission to post it here. Dat hair is still really flat. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted December 28, 2010 Author Share Posted December 28, 2010 It's better than my non-flat old version. Cleaner, anyway. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 It's better than my non-flat old version. Cleaner, anyway. His angle and lighting are close to that of Raven. Ref his hair for where the shadows should go. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted December 28, 2010 Author Share Posted December 28, 2010 Gotcha. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 I Dno but the trim just doesn't compare to the decorative one on your shannan, you need it to look raised as opposed to flat/ pillowed, if your still having trouble I'll compile some examples when I'm home, till then, possibly take a look at how I did it on my justice sprite, it isn't perfect but it might help Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted December 28, 2010 Author Share Posted December 28, 2010 (edited) Alright. I'll do that. ...I don't even know how the hell I did Shanan's. Edited December 28, 2010 by Luminescent Blade Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thor Odinson Posted January 12, 2011 Author Share Posted January 12, 2011 (edited) Meh. I'll eventually fix my sprites stuff, but for now... Furetchen. For LumiFE, FuretFE, and SE. A manlier version will be made for DoF. Cred to Astra for fixing up some stuff. Edited January 12, 2011 by Luminescent Blade Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted January 12, 2011 Share Posted January 12, 2011 Looks like your personal mug changes guys more than I change socks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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