Maklo Posted March 10, 2011 Author Share Posted March 10, 2011 ^I thought something was up with her breasts, but I couldn't quite put my finger on it. You know, aside from them being huge. Oh well, Ima fix her boobs. (and the other stuff) Also, there's this thing. I drew this in like five minutes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 That's really good, especially for 5 minutes. Did you get that spriting style from anywhere in particular? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ken Zomg Posted March 10, 2011 Share Posted March 10, 2011 Her right arm (OPV) looks like an arm to a doll. There really isn't another way to put it XD. But other than that and what Dan said, I see no issues. I think he's saying that the forearm's a little too thick. Other than that, nice sprite. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 I don't think that's what I meant. I meant that it looks like the arm pops right on and off. I'd cut the shading near the shoulder and maybe make the should look alittle more er... natural. When I say that, i mean specifically here. It curves too much when the shirt meets the arm, so I'd make the shirt extend to tthe right 2-3 pixels. (I'll go more in-depth if you don't understand XD) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maklo Posted March 11, 2011 Author Share Posted March 11, 2011 (edited) Nah that's okay, I understand. thanks for the comments, guys. @April: Nope I just kinda made it up. I do a lot of original sprites so I developed my own style, though I guess you could say to some degree the shading and anti-aliasing are fire emblem influenced since that's the first and only other kind of spriting that I do. I don't think that's what I meant. This made me laugh. Edited March 11, 2011 by Maklo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maklo Posted March 14, 2011 Author Share Posted March 14, 2011 Messed with the trim a bit, added a third shade to her sash thingy, messed with her arm, and moved her breasts up. New thingy Loli Young Lyn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 (edited) Armpit needs shading. Her arm still looks like a barbie doll, but not as much as last time. Edited March 14, 2011 by Joerachi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 (edited) The breasts are really cylindrical, like balloons, and the cleavage is at an off angle to the body. Just noticed, the eyes are too low, so move them up a few pixels, and the ear is ridiculously small XD Should go from the bottom of the nose to the top of the eyebrow, or just a little smaller than that. Edited March 14, 2011 by seph1212 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maklo Posted March 22, 2011 Author Share Posted March 22, 2011 Updates NEW--->OLD Mostly just redrew their ears, which used to be really small. New stuff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted March 23, 2011 Share Posted March 23, 2011 The breasts are really cylindrical, like balloons, and the cleavage is at an off angle to the body. Balloons are cylindrical? Whoa...Maklo, those new mugs look badass. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted March 23, 2011 Share Posted March 23, 2011 Balloons are cylindrical? Derp. Shoulda put a semi-colon and said "they look sort of like balloons". Oh well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maklo Posted March 23, 2011 Author Share Posted March 23, 2011 Just submitted this to the ultimate full custom and splicing contest or whatever it's called. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maklo Posted March 23, 2011 Author Share Posted March 23, 2011 Sort of a WIP. Her face is giving me hell. Also, I'm thinking of starting a personal spriting project. I'm gonna GBAify all the FE2 mugs. Starting with Claire. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Sholes Posted March 26, 2011 Share Posted March 26, 2011 They look cool, can I use for a hack I'm working on which BTW is located here Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted March 26, 2011 Share Posted March 26, 2011 Dat Sigrun. I really really like it, and you said WIP, so, waiting for the finished product. Only thing I can say right now is asdf neck shading. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maklo Posted March 26, 2011 Author Share Posted March 26, 2011 @Dr.Sholes: Sorry, I'm gonna have to refuse that request. I do know about your project, though and I was considering doing a younger Brunya. If I do finish it you can use it so I'll keep you posted, but I make no promises. @Joerachi: Yeah, I dunno. There's something about her face that bothers me; it's missing that mandatory Sigrun smexiness XD. I was thinking of redrawing the face from scratch. The rest I actually liked like the hair for example. As for the neck, that was probably me just being lazy again. I have a habit of forgetting to double-check my portrait before posting them and making sure they are completely finished. Glad you like it though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frosty Posted March 27, 2011 Share Posted March 27, 2011 I love that Sigrun, to be honest! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maklo Posted March 27, 2011 Author Share Posted March 27, 2011 Really? Thanks. Maybe it's just me then. I got spriting hypochondria. There's somethin wrong with it I swear.XD Update New Stuff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted March 27, 2011 Share Posted March 27, 2011 I think the problem with the Sigrun is that her nose and mouth are too far to the left (OPV) and it's giving her an elongated face. If you pulled them a few pixels back to the right, and pulled the cheek in a bit, it would look better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maklo Posted March 29, 2011 Author Share Posted March 29, 2011 (edited) Updates New Stuff I took a lot of liberties with these ones. Gray Cliff Robin For iavasechui's hack. Edited March 29, 2011 by Maklo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted March 30, 2011 Share Posted March 30, 2011 (edited) DAT SIGRUN!!!!! That is so nice. I dig it quite a bit. The update looks a bit better too. You have a nice style when it comes to hair. :D Not bad but her head seems to look too far forward. Maybe bring the ears up a little too. They look a bit short and a bit too low on her head. I like it though! Edited March 30, 2011 by Florina Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strawman Posted March 30, 2011 Share Posted March 30, 2011 Your ultimate splice/custom competition entry looks like a lion. It'd be cool if he had lion-ish colors too haha. I like it. On your other sprites you have an interesting style. Cliff and Robin are having some chin/jaw issues. The way Cliff's armor(breastplate) is turned according to the trim in the middle of it doesn't match with shoulders. It matches with his head but not his shoulders. I really like Gray, though the shading on his neck under his chin may be too triangular and rigid maybe. And lastly, this is more of a matter of opinion but Robin's design, especially his shirt, is very simple. As in its really not that interesting. I mean I guess it isn't really an issue but he really could just pass off as some random civilian. But maybe thats what you were going for? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted March 30, 2011 Share Posted March 30, 2011 On Cliff, Robin, and the last mug there, their mouths are too close to their noses. You need to bring the mouth down, and make the jaw longer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maklo Posted March 30, 2011 Author Share Posted March 30, 2011 Your ultimate splice/custom competition entry looks like a lion. It'd be cool if he had lion-ish colors too haha. I like it. That's the look I was going for. And lastly, this is more of a matter of opinion but Robin's design, especially his shirt, is very simple. As in its really not that interesting. I mean I guess it isn't really an issue but he really could just pass off as some random civilian. But maybe thats what you were going for? I take it you've never played FE2. In FE2, Gray, Robin and Cliff are all villlagers (as in that's their class) so I was trying to go for simplicity. Though I didn't really want to make them look completely like villagers so I made them look like classes that I figured would suit them because villagers can promote to five different classes I think, which you can choose. Gray is a mercenary, Robin is an archer and Cliff is a cavalier/soldier. So yeah I was trying to make them look rather simple in design. Peronally I never liked Robin anyways so he gets shafted. I'll get to work on your suggestions when I get a chance. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iavasechui Posted March 30, 2011 Share Posted March 30, 2011 I usually make one of them a mage... I don't remember which one... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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