ThatGuyDownTheStreet Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 Then I suggest doing it later. Real life prioritizes first. But when you have time I suggest lowering it about 1-3 pixel rows, and judge based on what looks right to you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iavasechui Posted October 29, 2011 Author Share Posted October 29, 2011 Ah... is the name alright? XD totally stole it from Tactics Ogre: Let us Cling Together from one of the randomly named enemies XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 I wouldn't even know how to pronounce that name. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iavasechui Posted October 29, 2011 Author Share Posted October 29, 2011 XD to be honest neither do I, I just saw it and liked it... probably need a better one XD Though I do want it to start with Is XD I'm weird and she's supposed to be Isabel's mother... might need to make her look a bit older though... -_-; Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 (edited) Ah, what makes the shoulder look weird is how it looks as if her back bends like a V. Her left (to our right) arm is facing the side while the rest of her body looks to be facing forward, or towards us. Queen Isemeine (still needs a crown and probably a ton of fixes) Even though you took the neck directly from Eleanora, it doesn't look right because a portion Eleanora's shoulder and her neck is covered by her hair giving it kind of a funky looking shape. I see that not only did you keep her neck, but also the rest of her body so you didn't change the proportions at all. Shifting it down might make it too short, or at least on the left side of her it will be too short. Maybe all you really need to do is reveal more of her shoulder and neck. Edited October 29, 2011 by Freohr Datia Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 Free, I don't see what you mean. The neck is too long on both sides, and in total, not just because her shoulder is being covered. Eleanora's neck on the original sprite is too long itself, so whenever someone splices right onto that neck, it's going to look too long. Really, I don't get your point here ' x' Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 Well I thought it looked long too but I was just in the mind that whoever the fe spriters were knew what they were doing XD But if that's so then what I mean is incorrect. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 (edited) Well I thought it looked long too but I was just in the mind that whoever the fe spriters were knew what they were doing XD But if that's so then what I mean is incorrect. It's 'k, even I had problems with Eleanora when I started splicing. It's a nooby mistake, they get corrected, it works itself out ~( ' x')~ Edited October 29, 2011 by seph1212 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 It's 'k, even I had problems with Eleanora when I started splicing. It's a nooby mistake, they get corrected, it works itself out ~( ' x')~ You gots wiiinnnngs =3 Weeeee But while shortening I still kinda thing more of the shoulder should be shown at least since it was covered up in the mug. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 As you can seeeeeee nothing was covered up, actually ' x' The necks are exactly the same width, and the only thing was was covered up was the tiniest bit of shoulder. Not even 4 pixels. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 Huh? I'm saying Eleanora's neck is covered up, not Queen Isemeine's Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 Huh? I'm saying Eleanora's neck is covered up, not Queen Isemeine's Ooohhhh, okay. I'm tempted to say it's not, seeing as it's 16 wide, which is the width of most FE7 females, if not wider Cough Serra cough. Her neck is just really long. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iavasechui Posted October 31, 2011 Author Share Posted October 31, 2011 Is this better? Also this guy Looking back I'm really starting to hate his hair.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted October 31, 2011 Share Posted October 31, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iavasechui Posted November 1, 2011 Author Share Posted November 1, 2011 Well I tried to shorten the neck... the second one was the only shortened neck that didn't look terrible Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted November 1, 2011 Share Posted November 1, 2011 There is nothing in my post about neck lengths. Just shoulders. Where are they. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iavasechui Posted November 3, 2011 Author Share Posted November 3, 2011 XD oh I thought you meant my attempt to fix the neck screwed up the shoulders XD... umm I have no idea how to fix the shoulders... -_-; Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted November 3, 2011 Share Posted November 3, 2011 You've gotta make her wider. She has no shoulders, because she's super thin. FE proportions are wack, yo. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted November 3, 2011 Share Posted November 3, 2011 Try something like this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iavasechui Posted November 28, 2011 Author Share Posted November 28, 2011 Still not sure how I'm going to fix the queen, but I made a new splice last night out of boredom XD Her name is Marion and I guess she's a Wyvern Rider XD (XD god I hope nothing's wrong with this one, I already got perfect blinking and talking frames made for her XD) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Sholes Posted November 29, 2011 Share Posted November 29, 2011 It's pretty good. The only "problem" I see is the angle on the hair in the back. It looks like you should be able to see some of it on the other side of her face. That might just be me though. : / Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted November 29, 2011 Share Posted November 29, 2011 Body angle vs. head. >: Fiora's head points <---- this way. Miredy's body is facing the viewer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted November 29, 2011 Share Posted November 29, 2011 Body angle vs. head. >: Fiora's head points <---- this way. Miredy's body is facing the viewer. No disrespect, but can't people turn their heads? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted November 29, 2011 Share Posted November 29, 2011 Last I checked, my head wasn't sitting on the side of my neck, pointing at my right shoulder. Having a believable turned body is different than having dissonance between head and body angles. This doesn't happen to fall into the former category. The angle simply doesn't work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted November 29, 2011 Share Posted November 29, 2011 (edited) ... Like... it almost kinda makes it look like it has some strange tilt compared to the neck. So I suppose if the neck is still Miredy's then the neck is facing where the body is and the head still isn't. It's mostly looking at its placement on the neck that looks wrong to me. I'm not really sure though but the first problem (since I have no idea how you could make a neck look turned) I could see is that the angles just don't look right, even if it is a turned head it just doesn't look right. Edited November 29, 2011 by Freohr Datia Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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