ConnellShuuji Posted September 8, 2011 Share Posted September 8, 2011 (edited) I prefer the second one, even if it's the older one. By the way, seph1212, I'm sorry, I didn't mean to insult you, it was only a joke. I wanted to offend Niharu. Edited September 8, 2011 by ConnellShuuji Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted September 8, 2011 Author Share Posted September 8, 2011 Yaaaay Marie's a lot better now xD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted November 27, 2011 Author Share Posted November 27, 2011 (edited) Ahem, I'm back with some sprites. XD I'm sorry for my absence, but anyway I would like some comments on these new mugs ^O^ 1) Her name's Kleo. I don't know what her class could possibly be! But I think I'll go with a Wind mage/Shaman 2) I was rying to make a Tengaar mug, but it turned out like this. I don't know if it's similar enough ._. 3) Berenice! she's some kind of Mage/troubadour princess. I like her a lot XD 4) ...just a mercenary. He doesn't even have a name yet XD At first I wanted to create a Male Lyn, so the base for his face is Lyndis' XD Edited November 27, 2011 by Niharu Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted November 27, 2011 Share Posted November 27, 2011 Ahem, I'm back with some sprites. XD I'm sorry for my absence, but anyway I would like some comments on these new mugs ^O^ 1) Her name's Chleo. I don't know what her class could possibly be! But I think I'll go with a Wind mage/Shaman 2) I was rying to make a Tengaar mug, but it turned out like this. I don't know if it's similar enough ._. 3) Berenice! she's some kind of Mage/troubadour princess. I like her a lot XD 4) ...just a mercenary. He doesn't even have a name yet XD At first I wanted to create a Male Lyn, so the base for his face is Lyndis' XD Wow I really like these! Even though I can look and see where the parts came from, you make them look as if you had made those all up on your own. I really like Chleo and the Tengaarish mug. One thing I can see on Berenice is how it looks like the hair is implying the back of her head is a little big, or something that almost doesn't look like the shape the head should be in. And on Tengaarish's (xD) top right shoulder there is a stray skin-color pixel where there should be an outline. =] And also the sleeve thing on the right shoulder could use a bit work on the shading perhaps? Like maybe on the inner part of the sleeve it could use a bit more shade I guess. Oh and Chleo's also missing a bit of outline herself on the bottom left and top left of her hair. Male merc definitely looks like he has too much shading on the right of his neck, or at least too much of the two darkest skin tones =o Don't think I really see anything else though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amelia Posted November 28, 2011 Share Posted November 28, 2011 Very nice character concept and poses. I like them a lot. You're improving, keep it up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted December 4, 2011 Author Share Posted December 4, 2011 Thanks everyone *_* I have only 2 mugs to show you today XD The first one is a thief, while the girl is ... just a villager. I wanted to make a medic or someting like that, but I think that "villager" fits her better. °_°" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted December 4, 2011 Share Posted December 4, 2011 nice. Although, I think the thief has a bit long of a neck Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raven Posted December 5, 2011 Share Posted December 5, 2011 (edited) Your villager girl, I can't help but feel her head is too bulged up top in comparison to the rest of her head. Maybe it's just me. But, I really like your works. Keep it up and keep improving as you have been. Also Seph, it looks to me as though Niharu and connellShuuji know each other, it's probably just best to leave them alone in regards to their teasing. Edited December 5, 2011 by V-Raven Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted December 5, 2011 Share Posted December 5, 2011 That thief looks awesome, maybe just put a shirt or something near the bottom of his neck (Like an undershirt?) to make it looks less long XP Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted December 6, 2011 Author Share Posted December 6, 2011 (edited) I made his neck shorter of about 2px and also... Older Rebecca! Yeah, I love braids! <3 Edited December 6, 2011 by Niharu Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ConnellShuuji Posted December 6, 2011 Share Posted December 6, 2011 (edited) LESS BRAIDS, MORE B**BS! (and less giraffes.) Joking aside, i fell in love with the thief. *_* And Tengaar's shoulders are kinda strange... It seems like she shrugs her shoulders... Edited December 6, 2011 by ConnellShuuji Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted December 7, 2011 Share Posted December 7, 2011 It's hard to locate where the thief's shoulders are, so as long as his head's about lined up with where legult's was (after adjusting to the head turn) I'd say its good. Blah, I don't know. I like him either way. Older Rebecca's still pretty young. Looks Rebecca-y enough. Good stuff. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raven Posted December 7, 2011 Share Posted December 7, 2011 Rebecca needs to keep her bandana and cute facial features. Also a larger chest. Because boobs n' stuff. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted December 7, 2011 Author Share Posted December 7, 2011 (edited) thank you for your tips ^-^ I'll see what I can do with these two. And I'll try to give Rebecca a bandana XD Edited December 7, 2011 by Niharu Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ConnellShuuji Posted December 7, 2011 Share Posted December 7, 2011 And I'll try to give Rebecca a bandana XD ...and boobs, please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted December 7, 2011 Share Posted December 7, 2011 Dis guy... He's stealin' mah boobs line. D8 Anyway, I'd actually have to say that this topic gives me some hope for the future of the spriting section here on SF. Thank you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astelaine Posted December 7, 2011 Share Posted December 7, 2011 Dat thief! So excellent! Seriously, your new stuff looks great. I've always liked your designs. :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nina Reed Posted December 8, 2011 Share Posted December 8, 2011 *_* Niharu, they're so cute! And the new Marie is sooooo beautiful!*_* I like them, you know that u_u Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted December 8, 2011 Author Share Posted December 8, 2011 (edited) Dat thief! So excellent! Seriously, your new stuff looks great. I've always liked your designs. :) Thank you,That's really a nice thing to hear <3 I also like your sprites a lot! They're all so clean..! ^o^ Dis guy... He's stealin' mah boobs line. D8Anyway, I'd actually have to say that this topic gives me some hope for the future of the spriting section here on SF. Thank you. Now I'm feeling important... xD Anyway, Thank you! I also brought a new mug! One of my favorites FE 7 characters: Erk! He finally promoted to Sage! °w° Edited December 8, 2011 by Niharu Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nina Reed Posted December 8, 2011 Share Posted December 8, 2011 *-* Wow, it's so cute, Niharu! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted December 8, 2011 Share Posted December 8, 2011 I like it, but I think the neck's too long. (Why do I seem to think that about everyone's stuff?) Maybe fatten the neck a little on the right side (OPV) too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 8, 2011 Share Posted December 8, 2011 His chin looks rough (spriting wise) and his mouth is at an extremely awkward angle. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted December 8, 2011 Author Share Posted December 8, 2011 Thanks for your tips! I fattened the neck and cleaned the chin. xD Any better? <3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 8, 2011 Share Posted December 8, 2011 Mouth mouth mouth, fix that weird angle mouth. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted December 8, 2011 Author Share Posted December 8, 2011 Roger, sir! now he has a normal mouth XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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