Chocolate Kitty Posted September 16, 2012 Share Posted September 16, 2012 Fightnih look at that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted September 16, 2012 Author Share Posted September 16, 2012 Fightnih look at that I-I-I WORK OUT Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted September 16, 2012 Share Posted September 16, 2012 *looks at that body* ahhh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted September 16, 2012 Share Posted September 16, 2012 Referencing characters with arms exposed is a good way to get muscle practice. i go to the gym to get muscle practice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted September 17, 2012 Share Posted September 17, 2012 Her poor neck looks like it's going to snap off because it's so thin ._. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted September 17, 2012 Author Share Posted September 17, 2012 any better? é_é the other part of the neck is covered by the hair, I think Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted September 17, 2012 Share Posted September 17, 2012 Yeah, looks better. I figured the other half was covered by hair, but I still felt it was too thin. Looking good, now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted September 17, 2012 Author Share Posted September 17, 2012 This one was a request °wà Allard, also known as Lowen's brother and Erikitty's edit and here, you can have THE EVOLUTION OF NIH that first one, so gorgeous... xD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted September 17, 2012 Share Posted September 17, 2012 Nih, your customing style is so interesting XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eCut Posted September 17, 2012 Share Posted September 17, 2012 (edited) and Erikitty's edit [5:29:57 PM] Super NONONO_Kitteh: eCuuuut can you go post allard crit in nih's thread http://puu.sh/165Sq I think the left part of the shirt (lavender box) could be moved over a couple of pixels. Right now, it is at a different angle than his breastplate, making it look a tad off. In the red box, I think this line that defines the armour looks a bit too dark and a little pillow. I think you should try to make it a bit more subtle. :) I also think his hair kinda looks like a wig or there is a mop on his head o 3o; probably due to the fact there is no hair between his ear and the top of his armour's trim. Overall, it is super cool. :) Edited September 17, 2012 by Wicked Witch of the East Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted September 18, 2012 Share Posted September 18, 2012 Hair looks really solid... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted September 18, 2012 Author Share Posted September 18, 2012 uh improved it a bit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eCut Posted September 18, 2012 Share Posted September 18, 2012 Yeah, that definitely looks better! :) The wider shoulders make it look like his neck is a bit short, though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pixie Posted September 24, 2012 Share Posted September 24, 2012 OMG I love my brisnih and her sprites omg so amazn gurl look at dem sprites they work out NIHHHHH<3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted September 30, 2012 Author Share Posted September 30, 2012 Pixie <3 female villager girl WIP °wà Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Feaw Posted September 30, 2012 Share Posted September 30, 2012 Did I say you could post it? But yeah, this would be a better place to get c'nc. And you already know I love it~<3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted September 30, 2012 Author Share Posted September 30, 2012 I'm sorreh, whorey doggie ;_; Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Feaw Posted September 30, 2012 Share Posted September 30, 2012 lol it's okay Pornih~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew Posted September 30, 2012 Share Posted September 30, 2012 Pixie <3 female villager girl WIP °wà this is lovely~ I'm especially fond of the angle of the head and the hair. her breasts seem pretty high to me, they're like up in her armpits at the moment, that's really the only thing I noticed :v so goood Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Peachar Posted September 30, 2012 Share Posted September 30, 2012 I'm not entirely sure why the far strand of hair wants to go to the inside of her cleavage rather than the outside where it would naturally fall like the near strand of hair. I'm also getting a kind of derpyear vibe. The hair is also a little unnatural here: Why does that front strand all of a sudden flow forward while the rest of it dangles behind? If the rest of the hair draped over her should kinda like Igrene's mug, it'd make a bit more sense than going with the Joshua effect. Eyes are also creeping me out a little. They're kinda like 0 _ O I approve of the jawline. A nice square female. I also approve of the random curl and the neck. Also...how you have improved! I'd have never imagined you'd have improved your quality in just one year's time (comparing post one and recent work) as much as you have. I'm slightly jealous. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted September 30, 2012 Author Share Posted September 30, 2012 why thank yooouuuuuuuuu <3 And I'm the jelly one. ç_ç Any better? <3 Lassie made the colors. so BLAME THE DOGGIEH é_é Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Peachar Posted October 1, 2012 Share Posted October 1, 2012 (edited) something like this It's rough. I'll let you do your thing on it. It's looking good though! Ear is still kinda of funky though. Edited October 1, 2012 by Let It Rain Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted October 1, 2012 Share Posted October 1, 2012 *looks down* Typically my hair seems to prefer falling straight down over my breasts rather than to the inside or out ^~^ It's like the sides of my head where my hair falls down from are aligned with my breasts, so that's the easiest "path" for my hair to take x3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Orpheon Posted October 1, 2012 Share Posted October 1, 2012 Getting back to what Frejole (Freohr, if she's fine with me calling her that), it looks like that the strands of hair are being sucked under her arm rather than being diverted around her breasticle. It might make more sense for it to go straight over her breast, yea :o Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amelia Posted October 1, 2012 Share Posted October 1, 2012 Your hair is great and all but it would be better if it's less liney. Just in my opinion. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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