Nayr Farros Posted November 15, 2011 Author Share Posted November 15, 2011 That face and body is the betaTethys, which is the same as Neimi's face. Only changes to the face was the irises and the conversion to Fe7 style shading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nayr Farros Posted December 8, 2011 Author Share Posted December 8, 2011 Nayr got a redesign. Full custom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arch Posted December 8, 2011 Share Posted December 8, 2011 Nayr got a redesign. And a dislocated shoulder, it looks like. Poor guy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nayr Farros Posted December 8, 2011 Author Share Posted December 8, 2011 Yeah I think I overfluffed the cloak on that area. :p Gives me something to do later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted December 9, 2011 Share Posted December 9, 2011 His neck looks long to me, but it seems like every splice or custom's neck I've looked at recently has been too long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Sholes Posted December 9, 2011 Share Posted December 9, 2011 To me it looks like his head isn't big enough for the rest of him. Other than that and the shoulder he's Nayrlicous. :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nayr Farros Posted December 10, 2011 Author Share Posted December 10, 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blademaster! Posted December 10, 2011 Share Posted December 10, 2011 Reminds me of Ike's FE10 sprite before promotion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nayr Farros Posted December 10, 2011 Author Share Posted December 10, 2011 Yeah I noticed that too. Although it was unintentional. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted December 10, 2011 Share Posted December 10, 2011 Reminds me of Ike's FE10 sprite before promotion. Hmm, it does. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nayr Farros Posted December 10, 2011 Author Share Posted December 10, 2011 I decided to continue a sprite I started months ago and abandoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted December 10, 2011 Share Posted December 10, 2011 That's really good! I love her dress! ^-^ But maybe you should try marking a bit less the bottom of her eyes...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon5 Posted December 16, 2011 Share Posted December 16, 2011 Question, friend: How long'd it take you to get that good? ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Posted December 16, 2011 Share Posted December 16, 2011 Her eyes are the same size at this viewing angle, which makes her left eye seem larger than the right IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zahlman Posted December 17, 2011 Share Posted December 17, 2011 I decided to continue a sprite I started months ago and abandoned. + Absolutely love the hairstyle. + Most things are quite nicely detailed and proportioned (I don't think it's really possible to tweak the eye size at this resolution), assuming she's supposed to be on the skinny side (which seems congruent with the sharpness of her collarbone). = Maybe add more detail to the jewellry? +/- What Niharu said. Also, the hair colour and dress colour don't seem like a good match, but I've certainly seen worse, and can't really think how it should be changed. - Something seems somehow odd about the border on her hair at the back. Try not including diagonals. - Neck seems pillow-shaded. I don't think with this light source that there should be that bit of shadow near her left collarbone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warg Posted December 17, 2011 Share Posted December 17, 2011 (edited) That part of the air has too straight outlines, try to make it more like a circle, if you know what i mean Edited December 17, 2011 by Warg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eclipse Posted December 17, 2011 Share Posted December 17, 2011 My turn~! 1. The shape of her head (where her hair is) seems. . .puffy. . .or otherwise, off. I can't really put my finger on it. Could be that I still can't see things like this right. A little help here, please? 2. My brain is refusing to reconcile the circled area, and I don't know why. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nayr Farros Posted January 20, 2012 Author Share Posted January 20, 2012 NuNayr got ReVamp'd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Celice Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 oh god, is his body just splattered? his head, so tiny! and neck freakish huge, and head brokenly splayed to the side... GOD (very smushed and disproportioned in parts) Yet I've got to say, I'm a fan of how the cloth was done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 I'm not seeing Celice's horribly broken parts. I honestly like him a lot, he's kind of ike esque but original at the same time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 I'm seeing two of them, those being the massive neck and the head's angle. That looks like a seriously uncomfortable position. but yes, the cloth is very smooth and nice. Shows enough definition to know what's going on but doesn't go overboard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 Not to mention it looks like he's standing like a stiff board, with how close his arm is to his body. Unless you're going for that pose. But he's gonna be really uncomfortable if he keeps that pose up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nayr Farros Posted January 20, 2012 Author Share Posted January 20, 2012 Vamp actually liked the pose. Celice: Go troll somewhere else. Your generic hatred of unrealistic proportions is not welcome here. :p Deranger: I caught that too, but it was unintentional. Yet it works. Seph: Will take the neck into consideration. But that's more or less Ross' pose with a different angle. Octavian: Isn't the first time an FE sprite has had an uncomfortable looking pose Also I dunno if it's just me, but I crack my neck a lot and can make that pose with relative comfort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 Vamp actually liked the pose. Celice: Go troll somewhere else. Your generic hatred of unrealistic proportions is not welcome here. :p Deranger: I caught that too, but it was unintentional. Yet it works. Seph: Will take the neck into consideration. But that's more or less Ross' pose with a different angle. Octavian: Isn't the first time an FE sprite has had an uncomfortable looking pose Also I dunno if it's just me, but I crack my neck a lot and can make that pose with relative comfort. Vamp liking the pose really shouldn't have anything to do with anything. There have been many times where bigger spriters have liked the pose of my stuff, but it still didn't make much sense :P Ross's neck isn't that thick, and FE8 sprites are pretty shit in general. And just because another FE sprite has an uncomfortable pose doesn't mean that makes them right. I'm just gonna go sprite everything with Barth's facial structure, it was done before, so it totally looks good. Or Bors' hair. While you may be able to make that pose with relative comfort, I doubt you'd walk around all day long in said pose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anouleth Posted January 20, 2012 Share Posted January 20, 2012 If he's wearing a headband, it should make a "dent" in his hair. As it is, the headband is just like... sitting on top of his hair. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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