Lenh Posted March 20, 2016 Author Share Posted March 20, 2016 I can not see it yet, please put the fishy eyes on for me~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted March 22, 2016 Author Share Posted March 22, 2016 grumpy old man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt.Smirks Posted March 23, 2016 Share Posted March 23, 2016 That's pretty cool looking. One thing though, have you tried using the lighter brown for his clothes? They look a little un-detailed. Actually looking at it I think the face could do with a little more refining too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted March 23, 2016 Share Posted March 23, 2016 he looks 30 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Posted March 24, 2016 Share Posted March 24, 2016 he looks 30 old by fe standards I feel like his hair should be depoofed at least a little bit, the center of it all feels too high. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Peachar Posted March 24, 2016 Share Posted March 24, 2016 Tiny head, but that's the price to pay for massive hair haha. Not bad, though I agree that the hair should be depoofed a little so that you can expand the head size more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted March 26, 2016 Share Posted March 26, 2016 Heavy banding going on in the cloak is probably my biggest beef, honestly. Aside from what everyone else has said, I'd also like to add that you have 2 darkest skin tones, and neither of them match with either of the hair colors. You still have 15 colors, but since there are essentially 2 redundant colors, you might as well use them to expand your palette a little more. Darkest white tone could be darker, and lighter black tone for the hair could be a little lighter to make that transition less stark. You might even be able to get away with using second darkest skin tone to help AA that out a little more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted March 26, 2016 Author Share Posted March 26, 2016 Thanks all for the crit~ It's helpful, but I figure I should say I can't bother with putting out revisions atm. I'll look back and try to repair stuff you all have pointed out just to learn from it, but it wouldn't be a complete patch worth showing. Sorry in advance for not returning that end of the feedback. Things'll probably be raw/shoddy for a while. Very much noted maybe I should just do WIPs and not slipshod areas. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
47948201 Posted April 13, 2016 Share Posted April 13, 2016 Oh wait what I totally forgot you were doing that because I was like ehhh I don't want to make you blah blah and spend my one request on oh hey some Fates sprites I wonder if perhaps there's any chance that maybe you wouldn't mind terribly doing that Nohr royal person with the cinnamon buns and stuff I mean no rush and if you don't want to that's fine too and *rolls away* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted April 20, 2016 Author Share Posted April 20, 2016 Finally finished Hoshi's request and ok 47948201~ I have caught wipitis but the important part is done ^^~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted April 20, 2016 Share Posted April 20, 2016 dat elise is gud. I like alot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fateborn Posted April 20, 2016 Share Posted April 20, 2016 But the staff isn't finished. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
47948201 Posted April 20, 2016 Share Posted April 20, 2016 Yaaaaaaasssssssssssssssssssssssss c: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted April 20, 2016 Author Share Posted April 20, 2016 Thanks guys ^^; @Ubel: I did consider just cropping it or something like this But figured it was better to get something out for Char to use. And slightly hoping that someone would fill in the staff b/c I gave up on aliasing it. I'll probably get to it eventually just so I can match it up with Haar, just not this week. ;w; Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
47948201 Posted April 20, 2016 Share Posted April 20, 2016 XDDthat is amazing 100% yes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted April 24, 2016 Share Posted April 24, 2016 confused why you didnt post my request here though ?_? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted April 24, 2016 Author Share Posted April 24, 2016 It's your OC and was your request so I just decided to leave what you did with it up to you. ^^; I wasn't super confident about it so withdrew from any possible crit opportunities. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted April 24, 2016 Share Posted April 24, 2016 oh yeah. what was wrong with it? '~' you make it sound like pixel puke! it was pretty i liked it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted April 24, 2016 Author Share Posted April 24, 2016 Ah I can not hide, fine ^^; I just feel like I can't put the 100% satisfaction guarantee on it, like I think I'd play with the colors or her hair or all sorts of different poses with her after having gotten her down the first time (rather than giving the first pass), for that sort of pride where I'd straight up post on a zero-confidence day. It's nothing particular I guess just myself being myself on a non-trace work. I'm still up for requests for either originals or reference/traces, by the way~ Fates portraits was a pretty straightforward conversion aside from the clip-offs. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Posted April 27, 2016 Share Posted April 27, 2016 I like the bow on her! Since no one else has requested anything, how about Hanbei? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted May 4, 2016 Author Share Posted May 4, 2016 Thanks! I had another request come in earlier via PM but Hanbei's a nice refresher (and the hat was fun)~ 23 colors~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted May 4, 2016 Share Posted May 4, 2016 How about Hisoka from Hunter X Hunter 2011? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Posted May 4, 2016 Share Posted May 4, 2016 Yay! Lovely ^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted May 5, 2016 Share Posted May 5, 2016 Thanks guys ^^; @Ubel: I did consider just cropping it or something like this But figured it was better to get something out for Char to use. And slightly hoping that someone would fill in the staff b/c I gave up on aliasing it. I'll probably get to it eventually just so I can match it up with Haar, just not this week. ;w; i really love this! (lmao that staff) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted May 30, 2016 Author Share Posted May 30, 2016 How about Hisoka from Hunter X Hunter 2011? Maaybe? (R.I.P. trying to fit colors in) Also dropping the splice entry and another finished request here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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