Tchyrimi or halfrohp Posted November 24, 2013 Share Posted November 24, 2013 I think this one is my favorite of your works. You seemed to pick up hair really fast. I feel so inadequate. Good job. dv('-')vb Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted December 3, 2013 Author Share Posted December 3, 2013 (edited) finally finished Tristan. :) Edited December 3, 2013 by Acha Emiya Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted December 3, 2013 Share Posted December 3, 2013 The pose is weird 'cause his both of his shoulderpads are facing towards the screen, making his shoulders move forward awkwardly. And everyone looks really bored and uninterested because they all have the same expression. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted December 3, 2013 Author Share Posted December 3, 2013 expressions isnt exactly one of my strong points. Still trying to work on that. :( I'll see what I can do with the pose. :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted February 15, 2014 Author Share Posted February 15, 2014 (edited) I haven't sprited in a while so I'm trying to shake off a lot of rust. I tried to address the the things about the pauldrons/shoulders. I'm evidently still struggling with expressions so bear with me. >>>>>>>> I also decided to give Yurei an armor change. that's kinda all for now. edit: forgot to add this guy. Edited February 15, 2014 by Acha Emiya Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted March 30, 2014 Author Share Posted March 30, 2014 (edited) Hey, how's everyone? Been a long time since I posted anything and it's been quite as long since I've sprited cause of real-life stuff. I'm still trying to get back into the thick of it after a VERY long hiatus. I've finished most of my WIP's so I've got nothing to present but a new design I'm working on. I'll include the reference drawing that I also drew so please don't hurt me. I realize it's a tad too big... hence, the spoiler. also, I found out that when I moved down Verdant's eyes, he looked younger and more appropriate. edit: oh yeah, if any of you guys need to find me, don't hesitate to pm. I'm usually just lurking to check things. >.> Edited March 30, 2014 by Acha Emiya Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted March 30, 2014 Share Posted March 30, 2014 How custom is verdant? He looks very much like IS's work, and if younger was what you were going for you nailed it. I dig. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted March 30, 2014 Author Share Posted March 30, 2014 he's full custom. One of two main characters for my story. I did use Morgan's coat and that's just it. Well, he is supposed to be four years younger than Vermillion. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted May 20, 2014 Author Share Posted May 20, 2014 some minor update but still not done though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted May 20, 2014 Share Posted May 20, 2014 Looking good. Still impressed by how similar you make them look to IS's better work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted July 7, 2014 Author Share Posted July 7, 2014 (edited) this is still WIP and I consulted a few people about it. I have to finish the body asap. Edit: didn't realize I posted a more outdated version. sorry. x.x Edited July 7, 2014 by Acha Emiya Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kramy Posted July 9, 2014 Share Posted July 9, 2014 dat improvement O-O Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted July 9, 2014 Share Posted July 9, 2014 You've done well, young padawan ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew Posted July 9, 2014 Share Posted July 9, 2014 Hnggg looks so much better man :) I like this sassy lady Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted July 24, 2014 Author Share Posted July 24, 2014 Hello. Just a small bump. this one only has a few minor details left to be done. I think it's safe to say it's about 95% done. and other WIPs I still have to finish are Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted July 29, 2014 Author Share Posted July 29, 2014 yey. props to Nih and GK/Kyle/WhateverNameHeGoesByNow. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord of Gabriel Knight Posted July 29, 2014 Share Posted July 29, 2014 Maybe I should go back to GabrielKnight... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted July 29, 2014 Author Share Posted July 29, 2014 lelz. but anyways, thanks man. :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew Posted July 30, 2014 Share Posted July 30, 2014 yey. props to Nih and GK/Kyle/WhateverNameHeGoesByNow. :O I'm not sure if you consider this done, as I feel like there's lots of shading missing on the face, like where the hair touches the face, and also the lips are pretty faint. The bottom of the ponytail is also quite devoid of shading. It might partially be a color thing, every color is really close to the other in the hair/skin color. Another thing is that the collar should be rounded more, right now it seems kinda overly uncomfortable/starchy. It should wrap around the back of her neck more, I think. I feel like the hair almost needs another color? I dunno, I find all of the nice detail kind of hard to read :T Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted July 30, 2014 Share Posted July 30, 2014 I am a bit useless rn cause tablet, so i cannot see pixels well, but as soon as i come back (around the 20th) i will try tofix the shading issues for you if i see any^^ For now do as mew says...? And maybe try making the hair a bit longer like i told you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted September 9, 2014 Author Share Posted September 9, 2014 shading updates. still have things to do with the hair it seems. this was gonna happen sooner or later. more stuff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted December 17, 2014 Author Share Posted December 17, 2014 almost done with this. something I'm working on. It looked better on paper though. </3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ErrantDShepherd Posted December 17, 2014 Share Posted December 17, 2014 The guy looks pretty cool, but like you seem to have noted the girl looks a bit off ATM. The facial proportions... Seem off somehow. Maybe if the face was a tiny bit smaller? ...either in the features being a pixel or so smaller for the eyes/mouth/nose or perhaps slightly different positioning? ...hmm, I would see how it looks at least moving the eyes down a pixel. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted December 18, 2014 Author Share Posted December 18, 2014 Yeah, she still a long way off. I actually tried 'enlarging' her body to make the proportions look normal. I dunno. The head just seems big for me. I don't think it's the pose. Maybe I'll fiddle around with the facial features. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ErrantDShepherd Posted December 18, 2014 Share Posted December 18, 2014 Yeah, enlarging the body would also balance things a bit. ...maybe a variation to try would be just moving the eyes around and seeing how they look slightly differently placed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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