Fateborn Posted January 4, 2013 Author Share Posted January 4, 2013 Will do. Flaming red hairdo and lovely field green. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fateborn Posted January 5, 2013 Author Share Posted January 5, 2013 Eh, I can't decide between Straight or Joshua hairdo. What says you guys? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted January 5, 2013 Share Posted January 5, 2013 i prefer the joshua hair because it adds a bt more of character, though you have to position that mouth in a better way °-° Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted January 5, 2013 Share Posted January 5, 2013 i prefer the joshua hair because it adds a bt more of character, though you have to position that mouth in a better way °-° same here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted January 5, 2013 Share Posted January 5, 2013 That looks like Eirikas face tilt, go look at her mouth to see what it sould look like. (Not in size, just that it isn't a straight line) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fateborn Posted January 5, 2013 Author Share Posted January 5, 2013 (edited) Yeah apparently the mouth is the only problem here? Improvement! Edit: Need a sacae name for her. Any idea? @L95 Yeah it's Eirika but not just any Eirika. Beta Eirika. Meanswhile... still hunting for FE6 Beta. Oh I forgot to upload finished work. Edited January 5, 2013 by Ubel Engel Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alfred Kamon Posted January 5, 2013 Share Posted January 5, 2013 When I'm done with her new mug. I'll name her after you! Kamon! *Actually I'll make it Kanon since Kamon sounds male.* Hey, seriously? ^_^ Thank you very much! Kanon is a cute name. About that last splice, wow. You're improving. You're better than me at making the characters look unique, and this is because you use so many characters as base. So, thanks, you helped me realize something pretty useful. °_° She's from Sacae and she should be based on Fir. Lyn + Fir... Why not Fynn? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fateborn Posted January 5, 2013 Author Share Posted January 5, 2013 Perfect! ... Oh man that's pretty ironic in a big way. (You'll get it after I manage to get hack working... when I get my computer back... which is likely never... dammit brother.) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alfred Kamon Posted January 5, 2013 Share Posted January 5, 2013 Ahah man, I'm pretty curious now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fateborn Posted January 5, 2013 Author Share Posted January 5, 2013 (edited) Spoiler was here! Edited March 14, 2014 by Fateborn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fateborn Posted January 5, 2013 Author Share Posted January 5, 2013 (edited) I'M SO BAD. I can't get the headpiece right to show her status in army... ... /cry I'll use the left one, until someone can offer me some advice on how to make headpieces looks fabulous instead of CRAP THAT'S JUST PIECE OF JUNK SHOPPED ON HER FACE KILL IT WITH FIRE! I messed up with the hair on the left side at some point. ... I SUCK Edited January 5, 2013 by Ubel Engel Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kramy Posted January 6, 2013 Share Posted January 6, 2013 before you fix her hairpiece, give her a comb cause her hair is messy as hell Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fateborn Posted January 6, 2013 Author Share Posted January 6, 2013 She went through so many battles she can't help but leave her hair messy. A veteran at young age. Ahh... exciting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eclipse Posted January 6, 2013 Share Posted January 6, 2013 Reference someone like Miledy for the headpiece. Right now, it's too dark, starts too high, and dips too low. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fateborn Posted January 6, 2013 Author Share Posted January 6, 2013 Not the best but... Meh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted January 6, 2013 Share Posted January 6, 2013 (edited) There is such a thing as messy hair, and such a thing as a mess. You may want to redo it. Because TBH, it really doesn't look like messy hair. And the hair you customed looks pretty bad, TBH. It's flat and pillowed at the same time. Though, the circlet thingy looks better. Edited January 6, 2013 by L95 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted January 6, 2013 Share Posted January 6, 2013 She went through so many battles she can't help but leave her hair messy. A veteran at young age. Ahh... exciting. Lol it's not that the hair's messy, the shade is super weird But yes it looks pillowy in some spots... if you don't know what that means I'm pretty sure it describes it in the Spriter's Resource thread. But also maybe you should try reference the way shading is in the hair of other FE sprites. You should also try reference to try understand how hairtips are supposed to look. There are some spots where it doesn't really look natural at all. Those two red circles circle parts where the tip of the hair looks kinda strange... As for the green circle, I'm wondering what those random goldish/skin-toned spots are for Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fateborn Posted January 6, 2013 Author Share Posted January 6, 2013 (edited) /crosseye Alright, I'm not going to splice 5 different hairs on same spot and custom it...maybe I know I'll looks like an idiot asking this. But, I don't know the real definition of pillow the pixels. I assume it means it looks fluffy? Edit: Dammit, I decided to just ask now and you ended up answering them for me F.D The green circle. Actually It looked like that in the original. I'll fix that later. Edited January 6, 2013 by Ubel Engel Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted January 6, 2013 Share Posted January 6, 2013 /crosseye Alright, I'm not going to splice 5 different hairs on same spot and custom it...maybe I know I'll looks like an idiot asking this. But, I don't know the real definition of pillow the pixels. I assume it means it looks fluffy? I'm guessing you must've been typing that before I posted my response XD But yeah look in Spriter's Resource because I think it describes it in there somewhere~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fateborn Posted January 6, 2013 Author Share Posted January 6, 2013 Nah I was still on this page for a while thinking about stuffs and reading. Then I decided to type without refreshing. And so that's what pillowing is... ... /headsmokes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 6, 2013 Share Posted January 6, 2013 Hair shading on her left side is very.. chunky. Trent gave me a critique once that the hair I did was like Play-doh. That's what it looks like now. It needs flow. Not to mention it's just very messy in general. There are definitely some characters you can reference. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fateborn Posted January 6, 2013 Author Share Posted January 6, 2013 Gave her a bit of grooming. I guess it's better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted January 6, 2013 Share Posted January 6, 2013 (edited) There's some splotches where it can still be improved, specifically on her left side near the shoulder and the top of her head. Her right side is still messy, and that random hair strand that's longer than the rest bugs me... was that intentional? EDIT: http://gyazo.com/4a0da4de55dacf177f39fd022d5b5562 Have an example on how to fix it. I tried with the right side then gave up because it's kind of a mess. I'll play with it more and see what I can come up with. Edited January 6, 2013 by Hamlet Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fateborn Posted January 6, 2013 Author Share Posted January 6, 2013 The random long strand of hair is something like Rukia's hair. And I can see improvement on her front hair, but I agrees with that right side. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fateborn Posted January 7, 2013 Author Share Posted January 7, 2013 (edited) Surprise surprise. a WIP of the female Mercenary. Kanon. Trying to think of a good clothing for her chest. Two versions. Free hair and Ponytail Edited January 7, 2013 by Ubel Engel Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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