Soledai Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 (edited) Well if you say so then! Mm..it seems like a typical dystopian but I suppose you make a point there. Hmm... that perturbs me that is seen as "typical", but yes, this is just to paint the scenery. I might even hit a different note, I've toyed with the idea. Makes me wonder what you define as "typical" Edited September 13, 2014 by Soledai Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lance Masayoshi Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 nice to meet you bord Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koneko Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 (edited) oh are you doing other things earlier was making dessert so that's why I went poof for a bit is all Hmm... that perturbs me that is seen as "typical", but yes, this is just to paint the scenery. I might even hit a different note, I've toyed with the idea. ehh really now? mind telling me this idea o: Edited September 13, 2014 by Koneko Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stargirl Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 yeah, i...i'd be a pretty bad maid >.> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lance Masayoshi Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 earlier was making dessert so that's why I went poof for a bit is alloh I seeWhat kind of dessert Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comet Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 yeah, i...i'd be a pretty bad maid >.> that's moe! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magical Glace Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 *ourRight.yeah, i...i'd be a pretty bad maid >.>You were able to lead Comet and Naughx to Shadow's room! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balcerzak Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 It's most likely from the lack of playing VN's that gives me a false perception as to how it is hearing how the vn is from friends doesn't feel the same as playing the VN yourself. It'll probably be a good idea to play a couple of them to know how they're like and all beforehand I suppose! I know there's a story behind it and all with the many many details that makes it such a great game aside from the dialogue, but it's just dialogue overall that I have trouble writing. I was told that my dialogue writing is too formal and I have to make it seem more casual so that's something I have to work on for a while.Ohhh, okay okay. Your clarification makes a lot more sense now, yes. And honestly, after playing 999 and VLR, you should have a pretty decent grasp on the general VN format, although those were indeed technically puzzle hybrids. I am trying to remember a good VN format one to recommend as opposed to the more popular ADV style, but I'm drawing a blank on content-suitable options there. As far as formal/casual for dialogue, that is extremely dependent on the individual character and their particular traits and quirks. Good characterization could have one using quite formal/respectful conservation with literally no contractions ever, while another is using slang and multiple contractions in a single word. It's about creating vision, sticking to it, and adapting it to the circumstances of the plot. The more anything you read, the more insight you get into possible ways of handling dialogue, so my best advice to you is just to read voraciously. In any medium. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lance Masayoshi Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 yeah, i...i'd be a pretty bad maid >.>hazikashiidesu hmm Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soledai Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 ehh really now? mind telling me this idea o: Sure, not here though, I'd want to mess around with a scenario or two before I delve too much into it. See if it can click with my "actors" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starman Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 yeah, i...i'd be a pretty bad maid >.> HHHNNNNNNNNG Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 You were able to lead Comet and Naughx to Shadow's room! Whoa!! Nice job Mei~! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MRDRHAWK Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 yeah, i...i'd be a pretty bad maid >.> i'd have you in a maid outfit >w< Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soledai Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 Ohhh, okay okay. Your clarification makes a lot more sense now, yes. And honestly, after playing 999 and VLR, you should have a pretty decent grasp on the general VN format, although those were indeed technically puzzle hybrids. I am trying to remember a good VN format one to recommend as opposed to the more popular ADV style, but I'm drawing a blank on content-suitable options there. As far as formal/casual for dialogue, that is extremely dependent on the individual character and their particular traits and quirks. Good characterization could have one using quite formal/respectful conservation with literally no contractions ever, while another is using slang and multiple contractions in a single word. It's about creating vision, sticking to it, and adapting it to the circumstances of the plot. The more anything you read, the more insight you get into possible ways of handling dialogue, so my best advice to you is just to read voraciously. In any medium. I want to add on this with a question Kitty, have you started Ever17 yet? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lance Masayoshi Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 i'd have you in a maid outfit >w<oh my Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freohr Datia Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 Um... Okay, people just being creepy about Mei now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caster Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 Stop it. Let Mei be. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Comet Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 (edited) Um... Okay, people just being creepy about Mei now maybe it'd be a good idea to talk about tou--oh wait that's only slightly less bad Edited September 13, 2014 by Comet Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magical Glace Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 I'm sorry Mei. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soledai Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 (edited) It isn't getting weird in the slightest... .. >_> Edited September 13, 2014 by Soledai Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stargirl Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 Right.You were able to lead Comet and Naughx to Shadow's room! straight to their deaths wowie! go me! ^///^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Breezy Kanzaki Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 Yawn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stargirl Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 (edited) W-what just happened? o///o i'd have you in a maid outfit >w< good golly... (0.0) Edited September 13, 2014 by Hashuni Mei Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starman Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 (edited) Sorry, Mei *looks down in shame* Edited September 13, 2014 by Formerly ShockMaster Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lance Masayoshi Posted September 13, 2014 Share Posted September 13, 2014 oh my Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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