Tamanoir Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 Oh, and I was able to read all the pages before we reached the milestone. I just want to post here and for the 4444 milestone, and then I will be OK. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soledai Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 Look like someone challenged fate, Glac And it was ugly from what I saw... but chaos is good I wish you the best of luck to win that battle against skype today o7 This tank is the best, the resistance is down for the count. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magical Glace Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 (edited) Chapter 7: Ruins of Home Silver P.O.V. "I never thought I'd come back here again..." I mutter as Duck, Lux, and I enter Aries Village. "Oh, the memories..." The once lush pastures and quaint homes of our village had been reduced to burning wasteland and rubble. I looked around, but most life had vacated the village, except... "Anon!" Lux cries. "You... have wings! And... who is that?" "Duck, I saw what had happened when Dusk attacked these two." Anon says. "Why didn't you tell Lord Tonton what you and Shinpichu were doing?" "I..." Duck mumbles, looking down. "I didn't know if they thought it was possible." He lets his wings unfold as Lux and I stare at him. "I went and reported what I saw to Lord Tonton. General Poly was assigned to come with me after you." "Hold up!" A feminine voice cries. A young girl with white wings flew down from the sky, followed by more of this apparent third type of angel. "Sorry, but we have orders on what to do with these two." "Orders?" I start to ask, but I was already scooped up by the white angels' leader. "I'll take her to him." She says confidently. "You all take the boy to Queen Kinumi." I steal a glance at Lux, who is fainted in the arms of a different angel. Her comerades began flying off as her orders had dictated. "Who's him?" I asked, but she was already flying toward Ice Angel territory. "We're sorry but... Lord Comet..." *** Duck P.O.V. "Wait! Where are you--" I cry. "Let them go." General Poly says, calmer than usual. "Lord Comet needs the girl, Duck." "Who is Comet?" I sob. "What is he..." "Now isn't the time to tell you." He answers. "But it will all become clearer, soon." Edited July 15, 2014 by Sylveon Lord Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koneko Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 Ahh that was a nice edition to the story o: Nice job Glac! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuxSpes Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 Chapter 7: Ruins of Home "I never thought I'd come back here again..." I mutter as Duck, Lux, and I enter Aries Village. "Oh, the memories..." The once lush pastures and quaint homes of our village had been reduced to burning wasteland and rubble. I looked around, but most life had vacated the village, except... "Anon!" Lux cries. "You... have wings! And... who is that?" "Duck, I saw what had happened when Dusk attacked these two." Anon says. "Why didn't you tell Lord Tonton what you and Shinpichu were doing?" "I..." Duck mumbles, looking down. "I didn't know if they thought it was possible." He lets his wings unfold as Lux and I stare at him. "I went and reported what I saw to Lord Tonton. General Poly was assigned to come with me after you." "Hold up!" A feminine voice cries. A young girl with white wings flew down from the sky, followed by more of this apparent third type of angel. "Sorry, but we have orders on what to do with these two." "Orders?" I start to ask, but I was already scooped up by the white angels' leader. "I'll take her to him." She says confidently. "You all take the boy to Queen Kinumi." I steal a glance at Lux, who is fainted in the arms of a different angel. Her comerades began flying off as her orders had dictated. "Who's him?" I asked, but she was already flying toward Ice Angel territory. "We're sorry but... Lord Comet..." ***"Wait! Where are you--" I cry."Let them go." General Poly says, calmer than usual. "Lord Comet needs the girl, Duck." "Who is Comet?" I sob. "What is he..." "Now isn't the time to tell you." He answers. "But it will all become clearer, soon." Fire: Tonton, Shinpichu, Duck, Anon, Poly Ice: Glac, Dusk, Comet Light: Kin, Kitty, Riru, Fre Human: Me, Silva, (Shytende, Soledai, Damian, all taken by Ice) The plot thickens Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DreadFighter Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 Nicely done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-------------------- Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 (edited) Oh wow, you guys even have a story. This is kind of amazing @_@ guess third rate third gens like me wont get a part Edited July 11, 2014 by Akinaoki Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soledai Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 Excellent, very nice update Glace. I eagerly await the fight scenes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magical Glace Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 Oh wow, you guys even have a story. This is kind of amazing @_@ guess third rate third gens like me wont get a part I can try to squeeze you in if you want. Excellent, very nice update Glace. I eagerly await the fight scenes. Spiraled to the point that they are an if. There was a short one between Shinpichu and Dusk so far and that's about it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soledai Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 Oh wow, you guys even have a story. This is kind of amazing @_@ guess third rate third gens like me wont get a part Hey, third gen isn't third rate, I'm the candidate leader, apparently... and my squads are the best Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuxSpes Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 So the last humans are all split up... I'm unsure as to what's going to happen. Why do Comet want one human and the light angels the other >< Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koneko Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 The plot thickens.. agh this is getting way too good to be waiting for such a thing though I guess good writing like this takes a good amount of time as well Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soledai Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 So the last humans are all split up... I'm unsure as to what's going to happen. Why do Comet want one human and the light angels the other >< Such suspense, we have to wait for the next episode... the SUSPENSE It's a conspiracy, they've made a truce, to overthrow the common foe. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magical Glace Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 The plot thickens.. agh this is getting way too good to be waiting for such a thing though I guess good writing like this takes a good amount of time as well Actually I just write on the spot after some mental prewriting of the overall plot. I really just wrote that after finishing the post prior. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kinumi Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 (◥◣_◢◤) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soledai Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 The plot thickens.. agh this is getting way too good to be waiting for such a thing though I guess good writing like this takes a good amount of time as well And the proper motivation, even if you have the story in your head if you can't will the "pen" it won't move Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PKLucas531 Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 ༼▀̿Ĺ̯▀̿ ̿ ༽ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 >: < } Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kinumi Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 (ﾉ￣д￣)ﾉ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magical Glace Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 (◥◣_◢◤)Is that an alien?And the proper motivation, even if you have the story in your head if you can't will the "pen" it won't move^ THIS. IS SO TRUE. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kinumi Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 ⸂⸂⸜(രᴗര๑)⸝⸃⸃ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PKLucas531 Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 TO 4000 WITH GUSTO Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magical Glace Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 ⸂⸂⸜(രᴗര๑)⸝⸃⸃I can't see any of those symbols. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pull My Devil Trigger Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 KIM Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soledai Posted July 11, 2014 Share Posted July 11, 2014 THIS. IS SO TRUE. Well, I write myself, so I understand. Which is why I always ask if you're prepared when you say you're about to write. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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