Sacred Blaze Posted November 19, 2015 Author Share Posted November 19, 2015 Cool. Feel like the shoulders need to be slightly narrowed though on the outfit. That's most likely just because I lazily copied the body base over from her mother's outfit. I might try do something about that. Nice. I'm glad you for what you did to the one on the left to make all the features on her look a lot more real. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kon Posted November 26, 2015 Share Posted November 26, 2015 (edited) I decided to play around with the MC's mum 'cause I'm a sucker for redheads :3 A lot of the changes were random fixes to her shading, but I played around with her hair and face a bit too ~o3o~ Edited November 26, 2015 by Kon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sacred Blaze Posted November 26, 2015 Author Share Posted November 26, 2015 Haha, I was beginning to think this had almost died again. But she's looking great. Thanks a lot for this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted November 27, 2015 Share Posted November 27, 2015 Alright, I've been looking at it, and is it just me, or is her neck really tiny? Like, I mean in width, it looks like it doesn't go to the back of her head? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Peachar Posted November 27, 2015 Share Posted November 27, 2015 I agree with above statement. The collar is digging into her neck...if it were an anatomically possible width. Shoulders are a bit low as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sacred Blaze Posted November 27, 2015 Author Share Posted November 27, 2015 Yeah I see what you two are saying. That's my fault though, it was like that in the original. I should probably shift her head a bit more to the left or something, right? And maybe extend the right side of the collar out a bit more too, I guess. Not sure how I'll go about fixing up the shoulders though. She might end up needing some new ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kon Posted November 27, 2015 Share Posted November 27, 2015 I'll go ahead and fix it later on today, since I'm the dummy who missed it while I was fixing it Dx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sacred Blaze Posted November 27, 2015 Author Share Posted November 27, 2015 (edited) Oh, well I did try and give it a go myself. I hadn't gotten around to re-correcting all the shading and everything, but maybe it will be of some use. It's the one on the left, with the one you did before on the right. EDIT: Anyway, I'll be away for the weekend, so I apologise in advance if my responses become really slow or disappear altogether. Edited November 27, 2015 by Sacred Blaze Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enaluxeme Posted December 1, 2015 Share Posted December 1, 2015 I hope whoever redid Valentine has nothing against people editing his work, 'cause I made this: The shirt looked too plain to me, especially for a lord character, so I added back parts of the original design. Other than that I tweaked the inside of the higher shoulderpad and the eyes, made the neck more slim, smoothed the armor and made the golden parts "golder" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sacred Blaze Posted December 3, 2015 Author Share Posted December 3, 2015 For the future, I'd probably say not to go editing the portraits that I've already cleared. As for the portrait itself, I guess that the detail on the shirt is interesting. I didn't really have a problem with how it was before though. On the other changes, I don't know. They look pretty minor, so I have no idea whether they're better or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ErrantDShepherd Posted December 3, 2015 Share Posted December 3, 2015 Neck is a bit better looking imo. The shading of the new collar seems odd though. That black outline is pretty harsh. Unsure about the rest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sacred Blaze Posted December 5, 2015 Author Share Posted December 5, 2015 (edited) I tried to do some reshading on Alyssa's face and neck, cause it was looking pretty bad. All good so far? If so, I might try and see whether I can make the hair look a bit better next, but that might prove difficult. Also, it's really weird seeing how little I apparently seemed to have paid attention to the shading from the people I spliced the face from. :| EDIT: Also tried doing the same things to Zara. At the very least, it's looking better than before, I think. Edited December 5, 2015 by Sacred Blaze Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted December 22, 2015 Share Posted December 22, 2015 Tried my best to remake Emilia Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sacred Blaze Posted December 24, 2015 Author Share Posted December 24, 2015 The face and everything up top is looking decent. You also fixed the issue of her odd head shape, which is great. But on everything else, it seems like the collar of the clothing is really large and also really open in the back. The armour also looks to be at a different angle to the clothing. I also think the armour itself isn't quite there yet, although I don't really know how to advise on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted December 24, 2015 Share Posted December 24, 2015 Mmm Yeah I agree, I can fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted December 24, 2015 Share Posted December 24, 2015 (edited) thought that the armor design was bland, so I re did it. I'm also making another version without cloth collars. Edited December 25, 2015 by CobyTheKid Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sacred Blaze Posted December 28, 2015 Author Share Posted December 28, 2015 Looking better, definitely. Don't know if this is good advice, but wouldn't it be better to make the chestplate's lining pull back underneath the shoulders? That way you won't have to fill in the areas where the chestplate and shoulders meet up with blackness. Anyway, I've done some stuff to the face for now. (Middle one) Filled out the nose a bit more and changed up the shading on the far eye. Seemed a bit weird to have the lightest skin colour around it there. (Right one) Not sure whether this was better or not but I just pulled the far eye and nose a bit more over to the left. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 28, 2015 Share Posted December 28, 2015 I had a go at her body kinda boring but it's cleaner anyone else can add/take away as they need especially the hair, i was lazy today so I didn't try to attack it pls make good, SFers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CobyTheGoober Posted December 28, 2015 Share Posted December 28, 2015 Man that looks so much cleaner >_< thanks guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DH_Ninja Posted December 30, 2015 Share Posted December 30, 2015 (edited) Much cleaner but the angle of her head doesn't match the body well imo. Lemme see what I can do. Edited December 30, 2015 by DH_Ninja Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 30, 2015 Share Posted December 30, 2015 yeah i didn't touch the head at all or the neck neck angle's kinda weird and it's too long go bonkers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DH_Ninja Posted December 30, 2015 Share Posted December 30, 2015 (edited) Dare to Compare. Spent time working on this. I took some liberties with her ponytail and tried to edit the armor. I hope it looks okay. I want to keep doing touch ups yet. So... once I see some feedback I'll make adjustments or scrap it. Edited December 30, 2015 by DH_Ninja Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 30, 2015 Share Posted December 30, 2015 I like the idea you did with the armor but the chestplate isn't level anymore so that needs fixed. otherwise, they're good additions to it, and the shoulderblades head feels kinda... big? and the hair's more interesting but it's kinda lacking definition on the whole good additions tho'?i might try to poke at it tomorrow if you're done by the time i start streaming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DH_Ninja Posted December 30, 2015 Share Posted December 30, 2015 Last touch ups for the night. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enaluxeme Posted December 30, 2015 Share Posted December 30, 2015 Her right cheek seems odd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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