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Not exactly. "Give thanks to the benevolent gods for your salvation," said Libra "No I will not!" Noire screamed "W-what!" Libra gasped in shock. "It's always the gods, gods, gods with you! Why? The gods don't care about you! You devoted your life to them, and they let you die! 'Give thanks?!' I curse them every day! If they're so benevolent, why would they let the world get this bad? And why would they take you away from us? You don't know what it was like for mother and I having to fend for ourselves! And you have no idea what it was like for me when your precious gods took her too! All I ever wanted was to be with my parents... I don't need gods! I needed what I always needed-- you and Mother!" So it was basically just a "fuck you" to the gods and even Libra. It was beautiful. 0-0 It's been around before Fire Emblem. Now that's news to me. I've only seen it around when it's being used in the context of Fire Emblem. Is there a husband equivalent? Oh and to be a little stick in the mud, the period goes inside the parenthesis.

The one that really sticks out to me is the Noire/Libra conversation in the Future Past dlc. I just love Noire's "Fuck you!" It just gave Noire so much depth. She really became this child who had to grow up too fast in order to save the world and survive. It was really beautiful imo, and it's probably one of my favorite conversations throughout the whole game. Off topic, can someone tell me what started this waifuu business? (Can't people just say wife? Or even bae?)

I don't hate it, but I have a few problems with it though. -The story is cheesy. -Emmeryn being brought back from the dead. Basically it really soiled her sacrifice and makes her death way less significant. -Lucina and Chrom are dull. (Gasp.) Especially after one gets over the superfanboy and fangirl craze. -Intelligent Systems tried way too hard to bring the old games back with spotpass and the dlc. The only dlc maps I liked were all the Future Past ones. (It was more interesting than the story tbh.) -The support conversations. Don't get me wrong, the support system really covered major weak points within having a "large" cast of characters within a video game, however, a large number of support conversations are so poorly written that it makes me cry. (PriamxFeMu (He basically fell for her after she did his laundry,) A and B for ChromxFeMu (They should have combined A and B, then made a separate A conversation, Gerome conversations are horridly bland (exception being NoirexGerome. Never been a fan of the silent lone wolf type that just ends up having an adorable side,) Miriel conversations that weren't with Lon'qu, and TharjaxFeMU ( should have an option to go lesbian for Tharja imo) to name a few. -If anything, the game made it feel like the MaMu was superior to FeMu. (But that's just me I think.) -The avatar ending overriding every spouse in the game.

Just have fun! :D Let the cheesy story, hilarious dialogue, and the hit and miss supports take you away in the first run.

I agree with that list you compiled. Even though I love Owain to pieces, I recognize that he is overrated. Lucina and Chrom are kind of boring in general. (GASP I actually said Chrom is boring. I love him and all, but as a solid character on his own without being with someone (as in romantically wise and without Emmeryn, he is kind of dull.)

Honestly, I wish a ChromxCordelia was even possible. Anyways back on topic, I think Intelligent Systems was lazy. They left a lot of dialogue unchanged even though character wise they should change.

Oh I see. I forgot about them faires.

I find that FredxCherche works fine. Aegis + Pavise + Dual Guard+ or Dual Support+ + Renewal. Is it the modifiers that are derp? Or is it the average growths? Vaike!Nah is nice. Access to Armstrhift+Axefair+Sol.

Ooo how did that work out? I never tried a sniper Lucina. Magical Lucina is nice. ;D I <3 Maribelle.

1. Kind of. Didn't like the return of Emmryn. Honestly. I like to think that she came from another time line/outrealm. (But that's just wishful thinking.) 2. It's hard for Fire Emblem to treat death really seriously unless it's a lord character. It's mostly because of the gigantic cast of characters players have to work with. Unless you build an emotional attachment to the unit (who are mainly developed by support conversations) or just filled with rage, than we kind of feel nothing about their deaths. (Plus we can reset the game when people die so...)

Oh I see. Thanks for the info! :D I appreciate it.

I am a bit of a noob with it too. (I dislike using the skill, but whatever.) I think his or her qualm with it is the fact that vengeance is nearly useless on enemy phase if they manage to reach her because more often then not the enemy will aim for close range combat against a bow user.

1. So is this a script for some kind of movie? Isn't really a "fan fiction" to me. (Or a story for that matter.) 2. The way you spew us all this information in one gigantic paragraph really points the fan fiction to be some kind of script for a television show instead. If you wanted to write a fan fiction, don't spew detail about every single little thing about each character all at once. It's overwhelming and already takes out room for development all in one go. 3. Any number ten and bellow must be spelled out. Yes this applies to things like first, second, third, ect. 4. What do these people look like? So far they are just stick figures in my head. 5. It opens like a children's fairy tale. Not really a fan of that unless it is somehow well implemented. 6. Awkwardly phrased = there are some sentences that are worded in a way that sounds odd. (Maybe a little more than half the time it could be because the sentences are actually fragments.) 7. Not a fan of your usage of "endowed." Endowed usually is used when you are talking about MONEY, and when it isn't, it's usually used with a positive connotation, such as gift or bless. Not a curse. Plus it's a dollar word. What I mean by that is that it's too "big." Most people generally are comfortable reading at a tenth grade level and that definitely isn't a tenth grade level word.

:D Thanks for the critiques. I'll keep those in mind for later runs. (I thought Sumia gave -1 not -2. Damn I am just off forever.) Yeah Stahl is the best physical Owain. I tried to keep my post within the choices he provided. (Stahl is generally a great parent for almost any child to be honest.) I always thought +3 stats were decent. Well goes to show how little of Awakening I actually know about. Whoops. Trickster = Sword hand. (Plus it makes use of his magic mods and still use his sword hand that isn't Dread Fighter.)