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Emblem Lugh

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  1. Just a question... can the English name be used on the tier list, please? ^^
  2. This description is a bit vague for my tastes. The significance for her to the Begnion soldiers is not explained. Maybe something like: "The soldiers express delight at catching "The Silver Haired Maiden", a fortune teller of some renown. She possesses the ability to heal without a staff and is a member of the aforementioned Dawn Brigade." The mention of Micaiah's farsight seems a little vague. May want to add that she cannot choose what to see or when. As it is now, it could be interpreted as "Micaiah can sometimes see the future". It explains the when, but not the what. Also, I'd edit the first sentence in the quote to something like "Several days later in the capital city of Nevassa, Micaiah awaits the arrival of another member of the Dawn Brigade, Leonardo, with another member about her age named Edward." There is just something about the original that bothers me. "Micaiah waits for Leonardo with Edward" just sounds better than "Micaiah and Edward wait for Leonardo." That's your choice, though. As for the third sentence, it should probably be something like "While the two wait, bandits attack the townspeople, and a woman, along with a young boy named Nico, ask them for help." I'd make it something like: "The aforementioned members of the Dawn Brigade return to their current hideout, where they are soon accompanied by companions Sothe and Nolan. After Nolan and Sothe learn of what happened from the others, the group decides to leave Nevassa. After a small skirmish, they find the marketplace, where the townspeople are more than happy to assist. As she attempts to escape, Micaiah suddenly has a vision of a tragedy about to happen, and turns back. The townspeople are attacked by the army's archers, and the boy from earlier, Nico, is hit by an arrow." This is more of a grammatical edit: "While heading towards another town, the group is approached by a young priestess, Laura, who is attempting to get medicine for her sick abbot." Jill's vague description doesn't go well with those of Tauroneo and Zihark's. I suggest mentioned her ancestry. "They are familiar faces from Path of Radiance: Tauroneo, a former Daein general, Zihark, a Laguz sympathizing swordsman, and Jill, daughter of former Daein General Shiharam." Other than that, there are numerous mispelling and grammatical errors. No where near ready to be added.
  3. Emblem Lugh

    Lyon

    Lyon: Oh, are you... I'm... My name is Lyon. Uh-huh. That's me... The son of the emperor. You're Prince Ephraim and Princess Eirika from Renais, aren't you? I heard you were coming, and I've been waiting here all day. I've always wanted... I don't have any friends my own age... So, Prince Ephraim... Princess Eirika... What do you say? From now on, let's be friends... It was in the game script for the game on GameFAQs. Sadly, the Blazing Sword one is incomplete. GameFAQs Sacred Stones FAQs All the flashbacks should be in that script.
  4. Agreed. It would make much more sense. It has been a small while since I have written anything. How about "Florina is a timid and frail, yet loyal, pegasus knight of Ilia."? Reading the original sentence over again, I see how badly I put it together. You are quite right, though I believe this entire sentence deserves a make-over. "Florina, in a search for villagers who know of Lyn's whereabouts, accidentally lands her pegasus on one of the Taliver bandits. She attempts to apologize, but rather than listening, they begin to bully her. They talk amongst themselves about selling her and her pegasus, Huey" Also, I spelled whereabouts incorrectly (fixed in the sentence revision). What a disgusting sentence indeed. I think I'll take some of your ideas here. I think it sounds better as: "Though her outward appearance suggests otherwise, Florina proves to be a competent and loyal warrior. She joins Lyn and the rest the "Lyndis's Legion" on their quest to Caelin to relinquish Lyn's birthright from her uncle, Lord Lundgren." Fixed the misspelling of competent in the process. I had trouble deciding on this part, really. Though, it seems a more correct way to describe was "comedy relief". "Florina's fear of men allows for some comedy relief in her support conversations with Hector. In which, Florina attempts to thank Hector for saving her in Noble Lady of Caelin, and after many failed attempts she finally succeeds." Hah. Of course it should. Oh, and I stuck the presumably in there because I could not remember if they outright said it, or hinted at it. In their ended together, it said: "Hector succeeded his brother as the marquess of Ostia, but the pain of his brother's death weighed heavily on him. His beloved Florina gave him comfort and helped him become an enlightened leader." To me, it presented itself as a hint that they were married. Looking at it now, the "His beloved Florina" part pretty much says that they were married, so it was an interpretation mistake on my part. It should say: "If paired with Hector, He and Florina go to Ostia, where they are married and Florina aids him in becoming a good leader." How far should I expand upon them? I wasn't too sure, so I decided to summarize them as much as I could.
  5. Summary Florina is a timid and frail, yet loyal, pegasus knight of Ilia. After being knighted, she joined Lyndis's mercenary group to further her training, and would do anything to stay by Lyndis's side. She is very uncomfortable around men, making it difficult for each male in the group to get close to her. Bio Florina makes her first appearance in the story after Lyn, Kent, and Sain stumble across a ruined village attacked by the Taliver bandits. Florina, in a search for villagers who know of Lyn's whereabouts, accidentally lands her pegasus on one of the Taliver bandits. She attempts to apologize, but rather than listening, the bandits begin to bully her. They talk amongst themselves about selling her and her pegasus, Huey. Lyn later notices Huey, and eventually Florina. Florina then joins Lyn, Kent, and Sain in a battle against the bandits. Though her outward appearance suggests otherwise, Florina proves to be a competent and loyal warrior. She joins Lyn and the rest the "Lyndis's Legion" on their quest to Caelin to relinquish Lyn's birthright from her uncle, Lord Lundgren. Upon the end of this quest, Florina stays in Caelin to further her training. She is then not mentioned until Marquess Lau's attack on Castle Caelin. Florina's fear of men allows for some comedy relief in her support conversations with Hector, the only male she supports with. In which, Florina attempts to thank Hector for saving her when she fell from her pegasus while seeking Eliwood's aid back in Caelin. At first, she can't bring herself to say a word to Hector, let alone to reveal who she was. She even practices on what she is to say to Hector when she thanks him, but Hector overhears and interupts her, causing her to run away nervously. Eventually, Huey grabs Hector by the arm and drags him to Florina and Florina finally gathers up the courage to thank Hector, although Hector teases her by pretending not to know what she is thanking him for. Florina's support conversations with Serra show Florina's personality best. Florina reveals to Serra that she admires Serra's personality and wants to learn to become more like her. The reason being, Florina feels that her fear of men takes away from her usefulness in battle. Serra tells Florina that she needs more confidence and to treat people as bugs, rather than equals. Next, she starts ordering Florina to adjust her posture, but in ways that Florina seems to find painful. After some time passes, Florina admits that she just cannot be like Serra. In the end, they decide to become friends. Florina is rarely, if not ever, mentioned in the story after the reclaiming Castle Caelin. However, in the epilogue, if she is unpaired, she simply returns to Ilia after Ostia gains control over Caelin. If paired with Lyn, though, she travels to Sacae with Lyn before returning. If paired with Hector, He and Florina go to Ostia, where they are married and Florina aids him in becoming a good leader.
  6. Yeah, the whole ToS 1 cast disappointed me when I got to use them... :(
  7. ToS: Dawn of the New World is really fun!
  8. Order of my FF preferences (If it isn't on the list, I haven't played it): FF4 FF6 FF3 FF1 FF7 FF9 FF10-2 FF10 FF8
  9. Agreeing with Levin. Though his identity surprised me! After all, I was a firm believer in the "Anna is the BK" theory! (All joking aside, I believed the Zelgius theory, and since Zelgius was alive, it was to be expected.)
  10. Well, she does start off with 13, which is wonderful. That, and it is usually around only a point off Nolan's (in part one!) and he can double attack almost all part one enemies, so I can see where xanatha is getting at..... Beyond part one, though, she loses her luster, especially when since she decides to hang out with the Greil Mercenaries. Of course, xanatha's entire point was her part one usefulness anyway. EDIT: Had to ellaborate something that was obviously wrong without explanation.
  11. Fiona. There is too much against her for her to shine later.
  12. EDIT: I guess it can get to 270 (280 for easy) if she supported Ike and was adjacent to him, and was in a bush and had the WTA, and height advantage, and had best biorithm and had the affin bonus. Yeah... this is crazy.
  13. I did some calculations when I was bored, and I came up with Lucia's max avoid being 160 (170 is easy). Is this correct, or did I make an error? That is like.... godly. O_o I looked at some other characters, but their avoid was still inferior. Does Lucia have the best avoid in the game? If so, I am using her. :D
  14. Gah! Evil was an understatement!
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