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Emblem Lugh

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  1. Fenrir has been the long-range Dark tome since at least FE4. FE7/8 need to change the name of their A rank methinks.
  2. I have clicked them all and still cannot find them. Also, those aren't what I am looking for. An example is Patty's avatar.
  3. I got this link a while back, but I can't find the big-headed FE4 avatars. ;_; http://www.fan.hi-ho.ne.jp/tahkn884/fe.html WHERE ARE THEY?! *dies*
  4. It says here that they promote into thief fighters.
  5. I am on Ch.7 in FE4, and I still have not gotten Holsety. On Serenes it says Levin gets it in Ch4 in some Silesia event. Then, I look in the Event section, and there is nothing about obtaining Holsety. What did I miss?
  6. In 3rd Gen, the stat cap would have to be changed to 40. D:
  7. I thought it smelled good. >_>
  8. I like durians! They taste more sweet than like rotten onions, despite popular belief. :P
  9. Totally a mage. I am intelligent, but I the same time I am physically weak irl. Or, I could be an armor knight with a mediocre str growth and wonderful mag and def growths... >_> imbue ftw
  10. Yes. Some people are better off dead. But, I am against it if there is any shred of reasonable doubt.
  11. FE1:0 FE2:0 FE3:0 FE4:1/2(Currently playing) FE5:0 FE6:1 FE7:5 FE8:2 FE9:3 FE10:4 FE11:1
  12. He voiced Haseo, the main character of .hack//G.U., the video game.
  13. I had a problem with a similar sentence in the Zihark article. So, I'll copy, paste and edit my suggestion here. To me, it sounds as if she disappears, and she is theorized to have joined Ike rather than it just it being a story branch. Elaboration seems to be a problem here. Maybe something similar to this is the better choice?: "At this point, it is possible for Jill to leave the Daein forces and join the Laguz Alliance." Also, there were tense and grammar errors in this sentence to begin with. "The Greil Mercenaries becomes part of the Apostle's Army" has a subject-verb disagreement. Take out the "s" in "becomes". Since the sentence after this one (in the next paragraph) starts with the word "regardless", it being in this sentence creates redundancy issues. Maybe you can replace it with a word like "anyhow" or "nonetheless"?
  14. What report is this? I've no clue. You should probably mention it sometime in the first PoR paragraph.The other posters caught the rest of the mistakes to my knowledge. It was pretty good.
  15. "Although this reply" in this sentence seems a bit unneeded. It can easily be substituted by the word "which". Less words, and the sentence will make sense. The "after" at the sentence's start is a bit redundant due to the previously used "afterwards" in the last sentence. This sentence overall may used a rewording and shortening. My suggestion would be something similar to: "Upon the defeat of King Ashnard, Zihark travels back to Daein, which, unbeknownst to the rest of the group, is in fact his homeland." Just another redundancy problem. "Also during this time period" can be substituted by "at the same time". To me, it sounds as if he disappears, and he is theorized to have joined Ike rather than it just it being a story branch. Elaboration seems to be a problem here. Maybe something similar to this is the better choice?: "At this point, it is possible for Zihark to leave the Daein army and join the Greil Mercenaries." Subject and verb agreement correction above. It if is hard to see, I striked out the "s" in "joins". Since the sentence after this one (in the next paragraph) starts with the word "regardless", it being in this sentence creates redundancy issues. Maybe you can replace it with a word like "anyhow" or "nonetheless"?That's all I saw wrong with it. It was very well-written.
  16. I never act the same in any two places. My personality changes just walking to the bathroom from my bedroom. >_>
  17. This. I hate flaunting attention whores. They make me look bad. Bullshit. I didn't choose this lifestyle, nor am I proud of it. You've no idea how much pain I go through just because I like other men. If I could choose my sexual orientation, I would be a hetero in a heartbeat. Fine. Stand it from a 17-year-old. You're a moron. There would be no problem if you hadn't previously said such idiotic things. Especially that "fag" insult. Not exactly helping your case.To clear things, up, I happen to be one of those fags.
  18. I took most of your suggestions except one: You do need the "the" before "Mad King's War". Your example is flawed, because the Mad King's War refers to a specific person, and this person's title, Ashnard. You don't say "Ashnard is Mad King", you say "Ashnard is the Mad King". Also, from what the end of your post says, you've not played RD. In that game, they always refer to PoR as "the Mad King's War". "The" is apart of the war's name, but grammatically, even though "the" is in the name, it should not be capitalized, so it seems to not be apart of the name. I assume this is where the confusion came from? (That is why we don't say "the World War II"; "the" isn't in the name of that war.) Edited first post, btw.
  19. I am now trying to seize the first castle in chapter 4. Problem is, the boss of the castle took the bridge down, and I have no idea what to do. Help, please?
  20. I'm going through it one more time. This is a minor grammatical error I did not catch: ----------------------------- These sentences should be at the start of this paragraph: ------------------------------ This paragraph should be at the end of this paragraph: ------------------------------ ------------------------------ ------------------------------ Wasn't there a paragraph before this? If you want to take it out, something needs to be done about this first sentence. I'd suggest: You can probably do something better with that.
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