Naesala

[RedNeck Holsety]

obviously its really long so if you see a way I can shorten it just say so. And there is probably still a spelling/grammer error here and there but I'll keep proof reading it ltr.

Naesala

Summary

Naesala is the King of Kilvas during Fire Emblem Path of Radiance and Radiant Dawn. Although in both games he fights against Ike and Tibarn he eventually joins their armies to fight for their cause.

Bio:

POR:

Naesala wanted to improve Kilvas and its status as a country by resulting to join the Daein Army. He is first seen betraying a Daein general by having his men steal the treasure from their ship and Beginon's ship. He then betrayed his friend Reyson and sells him to Oliver as a slave just so he can make a profit. Reyson is eventually saved by Ike and his army and they resume the war with Daein. Naesala is often seen lending Ravens to the Daein army. At one point Naesala himself joins a battle in attempt to kill Ike and his army. Although it is possible to defeat him if you talk to him with Janaff or Ulki he will apologize to Reyson if he is on the battlefield and he and all the other ravens will fly off leaving the Daein army to die at Ike's hands.

Naesala is not seen again until Ike defeats the Black Knight in Nados Castle. Naesala disquises himself as a Daein Soldier only to save the Heron Princess Leanne from feral laguz and King Ashnard. He then meets up with Ike and Tibarn after they rout the area of feral laguz. Ike and Tibarn realize that Naesala betrayed Daein and saved Leanne which leads them to ask for his assistance in the final battle of the Mad King's War. Naesala decides to help with the battle but will not join Ike and the main force unless you call for his help since he doesn't want to risk losing his life to King Ashnard. Even then he comments that its still Ike's battle and still would prefer to not have come. In the epilogue Naesala will tell Ike not to visit Kilvas since its against their nature to invite beorc to their country.

RD:

In Radiant Dawn Naesala is angered when he discovers the senators are behind the Serenes Massacre and forms the laguz alliance with Tibarn and Caineghis. He is quickly forced to join the senate when they hold a blood pact signed by a former King of Kilvas. If Naesala doesn't follow the senate's orders they could kill the people in Kilvas one by one so Naesala is forced to obey their orders. Neasala is forced to lead Tibarn's army towards the central army, thought to be a supply ship, only to cause most of Tibarn's people in his country, save for women and children, to die. Tibarn is quickly angered since his country suffered because of Naesala's actions and revives a grudge against him for selling Reyson three years ago. Neasala is then forced to abandon the alliance.

After Begnion politically divides between the apostle and the senate Naesala is now working under Sanaki, the Apostle, and her orders. When he takes her to meet up with Ike,Tibarn, and the unconcious herons during a battle with Daein,Tibarn later mentions that he will kill Naesala but lets him live for the moment. When Ashera awakens and turns almost all the people of Tellius to stone Naesala joins Micaiah's group to help her fight Ashera. Skrimir, a gallian general from the alliance attempts to kill Naesala for his betrayal and nearly fights Naesala, Leanne, and Nealuchi. Leanne attempts to stop the fight by saying Naesala that has a troubled heart, mainly for being forced to betray the alliance, but this only causes Skrimir to be angered even more. Naesala stops the fight by mentioning Tibarn deserves to fight him more since Tibarn suffered more then Skrimir.

When Micaiah,Ike,Tibarn, and their armies reach Ashera's location a small group go inside to stop her actions with Yune. If Naesala is taken into the Tower of Guidance you will discover Lekain, a Senator, held both Kilvas and Daein's blood pact which shows that Naesala only betrayed the alliance for the good of his people. Lekain is killed, and the blood pacts are destroyed thus saving the people of Daein and Kilvas.

In the epilogue the two bird nations, hawk and raven, unite as one country with Tibarn as their leader. Naesala leaves Kilvas to become a diplomat for all of Tellius, finding atonement in his work. If he and Leanne share an "A" support, they will marry and give birth to a Raven boy and a Heron girl.

Edited January 10, 2009 by King_Soren

[VincentASM]

Naesala wanted to improve Kilvas and its status as a country by resulting to join the Daein Army.

Should that be "by resorting to join"? Or did you mean something like "and as a result, joined"?

He then betrayed his friend Reyson and sells him to Oliver as a slave just so he can make a profit.

It might be a good idea to mention that Naesala had planned to rescue Reyson afterwards. I forgot what exactly his plans were though.

Naesala disquises himself as a Daein Soldier only to save the Heron Princess Leanne from feral laguz and King Ashnard.

I don't think Leanne faces any danger from the feral laguz (although my memory is kind of bad). You might want to replace that with Izuka, or his laguz researcher(?), instead.

If Naesala is taken into the Tower of Guidance you will discover Lekain,

Perhaps replace "you will" with "he discovers" or "he and the others discover"

Overall, it's a good piece. There are a few more issues that I haven't addressed, but I'll get to them later (if someone else hasn't already). Also I don't think it's too long actually , but it might just be me.

Edited January 10, 2009 by VincentASM

[RedNeck Holsety]

My minds a little foggy over POR but I think thats right

I think Leanne is only frightened by the Feral Laguz growls, either from the expierments in the basement or the ones in the tower, so I will change it to just King Ashnard.

I don't think Naesala ever confessed his actual plans to save Reyson though. He just claimed we would have but Reyson was already saved (?) but I will mention that he planned to save Reyson.

Also in the last paragraph with the bird nations uniting as one. Did that include Heron? I think it did but I wanted to clarify it.

Naesala

Summary

Naesala is the King of Kilvas during Fire Emblem Path of Radiance and Radiant Dawn. Although in both games he fights against Ike and Tibarn he eventually joins their armies to fight for their cause.

Bio:

POR:

Naesala wanted to improve Kilvas and its status as a country, and as a result, joined the Daein Army. He is first seen betraying a Daein general by having his men steal the treasure from their ship and Beginon's ship. He then betrayed his friend Reyson and sells him to Oliver as a slave just so he can make a profit. Reyson is eventually saved by Ike and his army and they resume the war with Daein. Naesala is often seen lending Ravens to the Daein army. At one point Naesala himself joins a battle in attempt to kill Ike and his army. Although it is possible to defeat him if you talk to him with Janaff or Ulki he will apologize to Reyson if he is on the battlefield and also claim he planned to rescue Reyson from Oliver. He and all the other ravens will then fly off leaving the Daein army to die at Ike's hands.

Naesala is not seen again until Ike defeats the Black Knight in Nados Castle. Naesala disquises himself as a Daein Soldier only to save the Heron Princess Leanne from King Ashnard. He then meets up with Ike and Tibarn after they rout the area of feral laguz. Ike and Tibarn realize that Naesala betrayed Daein and saved Leanne which leads them to ask for his assistance in the final battle of the Mad King's War. Naesala decides to help with the battle but will not join Ike and the main force unless you call for his help since he doesn't want to risk losing his life to King Ashnard. Even then he comments that its still Ike's battle and still would prefer to not have come. In the epilogue Naesala will tell Ike not to visit Kilvas since its against their nature to invite beorc to their country.

RD:

In Radiant Dawn Naesala is angered when he discovers the senators are behind the Serenes Massacre and forms the laguz alliance with Tibarn and Caineghis. He is quickly forced to join the senate when they hold a blood pact signed by a former King of Kilvas. If Naesala doesn't follow the senate's orders they could kill the people in Kilvas one by one so Naesala is forced to obey their orders. Neasala is forced to lead Tibarn's army towards the central army, thought to be a supply ship, only to cause most of Tibarn's people in his country, save for women and children, to die. Tibarn is quickly angered since his country suffered because of Naesala's actions and revives a grudge against him for selling Reyson three years ago. Neasala is then forced to abandon the alliance.

After Begnion politically divides between the apostle and the senate Naesala is now working under Sanaki, the Apostle, and her orders. When he takes her to meet up with Ike,Tibarn, and the unconcious herons during a battle with Daein,Tibarn later mentions that he will kill Naesala but lets him live for the moment. When Ashera awakens and turns almost all the people of Tellius to stone Naesala joins Micaiah's group to help her fight Ashera. Skrimir, a gallian general from the alliance attempts to kill Naesala for his betrayal and nearly fights Naesala, Leanne, and Nealuchi. Leanne attempts to stop the fight by saying Naesala that has a troubled heart, mainly for being forced to betray the alliance, but this only causes Skrimir to be angered even more. Naesala stops the fight by mentioning Tibarn deserves to fight him more since Tibarn suffered more then Skrimir.

When Micaiah,Ike,Tibarn, and their armies reach Ashera's location a small group go inside to stop her actions with Yune. If Naesala is taken into the Tower of Guidance he and the others will discover Lekain, a Senator, held both Kilvas and Daein's blood pact which shows that Naesala only betrayed the alliance for the good of his people. Lekain is killed, and the blood pacts are destroyed thus saving the people of Daein and Kilvas.

In the epilogue the three bird nations, hawk, heron, and raven, unite as one country with Tibarn as their leader. Naesala leaves Kilvas to become a diplomat for all of Tellius, finding atonement in his work. If he and Leanne share an "A" support, they will marry and give birth to a Raven boy and a Heron girl.

Edited January 10, 2009 by King_Soren

[VincentASM]

Also in the last paragraph with the bird nations uniting as one. Did that include Heron? I think it did but I wanted to clarify it.

Yes, it includes them. I forgot to mention that earlier ^^;;;

[RedNeck Holsety]

ok so to save another long post in the topic I edited it in the post above (changed two to three and hawk and raven to "Hawk, Heron, and Raven..."

Edited January 10, 2009 by King_Soren

[Mitoya]

Looks pretty good overall; my comments are in parentheses.

Summary

Naesala is the King of Kilvas (maybe mention that Kilvas is the nation of crow laguz) during Fire Emblem Path of Radiance and Radiant Dawn. Although in both games he fights against Ike and Tibarn(,) he eventually joins their armies to fight for their cause.

Bio:

POR:

Naesala ((wanted) "wants," to avoid tense shifting) to improve Kilvas and its status as a country, and as a result, ((joined) joins - although maybe "allies his nation with" would be better) the Daein Army. He is first seen betraying a Daein general by having his men steal the treasure from their ship ((and Begnion's ship) a little awkward; could probably be taken out) (may want to add "instead of fighting with the Daeins" or something like that). He ((then) later) betray((ed)s) his friend Reyson and sells him to Oliver as a slave ((just so he can) "in order to"?) make a profit. Reyson is eventually saved by Ike and his army and they resume the war with Daein. Naesala is often seen lending Ravens to the Daein army. At one point Naesala himself joins a battle in (an) attempt to kill Ike and his army. Although it is possible to defeat him(,) if you talk to him with Janaff or Ulki he will apologize to Reyson ((if he is on the battlefield) add parentheses/commas around this or replace "he" with "Reyson") and also claim he (had?) planned to rescue Reyson from Oliver. He and all the other ravens will then fly off(,) leaving the Daein army to die at Ike's hands.

Naesala is not seen again until Ike defeats the Black Knight in Nados Castle. Naesala dis(g)uises himself as a Daein Soldier ((only to) in order to?) save the Heron Princess Leanne from King Ashnard. He then meets up with Ike and Tibarn after they rout the area of feral laguz. Ike and Tibarn realize that Naesala betrayed Daein and saved Leanne which leads them to ask for his assistance in the final battle of the Mad King's War. Naesala decides to help with the battle but will not join Ike and the main force unless ((you call) the player calls) for his help(,) since he doesn't want to risk losing his life to King Ashnard. Even then(,) he comments that it(')s still Ike's battle and ((still would prefer) that he would have preferred) to not have come. In the epilogue(,) Naesala will tell Ike not to visit Kilvas since it(')s against their nature to invite beorc to their country.

RD:

In Radiant Dawn(,) Naesala is angered when he discovers the senators are behind the Serenes Massacre and forms the laguz alliance with Tibarn and Caineghis. He is quickly forced to join the senate ((when) maybe ", however, since") they hold a blood pact signed by a former King of Kilvas. If Naesala doesn't follow the senate's orders they could kill the people in Kilvas one by one ((so Naesala is forced to obey their orders) a bit redundant, could probably be taken out). (The part about Naesala having to obey the senate could be added here, ex "Under the senate's command,") N(ae)sala ((is forced to lead Tibarn's army) this could be "tricks Tibarn into heading his army" since there are already a lot of "forced"s in the paragraph) towards the ((central army) is this capitalized? I think it's Begnion Central Army), thought to be a supply ship, ((only to cause most of Tibarn's people in his country, save for women and children, to die) a little awkard, maybe "buying time for the slaughter of all in Phoenicis save women and children"?). Tibarn is quickly angered ((since his country suffered) seeing his country suffer?) because of Naesala's actions and revives a grudge against him for selling Reyson three years ago. N(ae)sala is then forced to abandon the alliance.

After Begnion politically divides between the apostle and the senate Naesala ((is now) begins) working under Sanaki, the Apostle, ((and) following, or maybe take this last part out) her orders. When he takes her to meet up with Ike,(space)Tibarn, and the uncon(s)cious herons during a battle with Daein,(space)Tibarn ((later) move to after "Naesala") mentions that he will kill Naesala but lets him live for the moment. When Ashera awakens and turns almost all the people of Tellius to stone(,) Naesala joins Micaiah's group to help her fight Ashera. Skrimir, a (G)allian general from the alliance(,) attempts to kill Naesala for his betrayal and nearly fights Naesala, Leanne, and Nealuchi. Leanne attempts to stop the fight by saying Naesala ((that) move before "Naesala") has a troubled heart, mainly ((for being) maybe "because he was") forced to betray the alliance, but this only ((causes Skrimir to be angered) angers Skrimir) even more. Naesala stops the fight by mentioning (that) Tibarn deserves to fight him more since Tibarn suffered more th(a)n Skrimir.

When Micaiah,(space)Ike,(space)Tibarn, and their armies reach Ashera's location(,) a small group go(es) inside to stop her actions ((with Yune) move before "to stop"). If Naesala is taken into the Tower of Guidance(,) he and the others will discover (that) Lekain, a Senator, ((held) "holds"? this one I'm not so sure about) both Kilvas and Daein's blood pact(,) which shows that Naesala only betrayed the alliance for the good of his people. Lekain is killed((,) can remove) and the blood pacts are destroyed(,) thus saving the people of Daein and Kilvas.

In the epilogue the three bird nations, hawk, heron, and raven, unite as one country with Tibarn as their leader. Naesala leaves Kilvas to become a diplomat for all of Tellius, finding atonement in his work. If he and Leanne share an "A" support, they will marry and give birth to a Raven boy and a Heron girl.

There are a lot of comments, but most of the changes are little things and the larger changes are mainly personal opinion. Information, structure, etc. all look good. Most of this post is actually just me being nitpicky.

[RedNeck Holsety]

most seem good and I'm in agreement with I'm going to assume the readers will know that Kilvas is the Raven Kingdom though since on the actual page they will see Naesala's class as "Raven King"

I'll start the revision with above suggestions later.

[RedNeck Holsety]

sry for the wait been kinda busy.

Summary

Naesala is the King of Kilvas during Fire Emblem Path of Radiance and Radiant Dawn. Although in both games he fights against Ike and Tibarn, he eventually joins their armies to fight for their cause.

Bio:

POR:

Naesala wanted to improve Kilvas and its status as a country, and as a result, he and his army ally themselves with the Daein Army. He is first seen betraying a Daein general by having his men steal any treasure in sight instead of fighting against Ike. He later betrayed his friend Reyson and sells him to Oliver as a slave in order to make a profit. Reyson is eventually saved by Ike and his army and they resume the war with Daein. Naesala is often seen lending Ravens to the Daein army. At one point Naesala himself joins a battle in an attempt to kill Ike and his army. Although it is possible to defeat him, if you talk to him with Janaff or Ulki he will apologize to Reyson if Reyson is on the battlefield. Naesala will also claim he had planned to rescue Reyson from Oliver. He and all the other ravens will then fly off, leaving the Daein army to die at Ike's hands.

Naesala is not seen again until Ike defeats the Black Knight in Nados Castle. Naesala disguises himself as a Daein Soldier in order to save the Heron Princess Leanne from King Ashnard. He then meets up with Ike and Tibarn after they rout the area of feral laguz. Ike and Tibarn realize that Naesala betrayed Daein and saved Leanne which leads them to ask for his assistance in the final battle of the Mad King's War. Naesala decides to help with the battle but will not join Ike and the main force unless he is called in as a reinforcement, since he doesn't want to risk losing his life to King Ashnard. Even then, he comments that it's still Ike's battle and still would prefer to not have come. In the epilogue, Naesala will tell Ike not to visit Kilvas since it's against their nature to invite beorc to their country.

RD:

In Radiant Dawn, Naesala is angered when he discovers the senators are behind the Serenes Massacre and forms The Laguz Alliance with Tibarn and Caineghis. He is quickly forced to join the senate since they hold a blood pact signed by a former King of Kilvas. If Naesala doesn't follow the senate's orders they could kill the people in Kilvas one by one. Under the senate's command, Naesala then leads Tibarn's army towards the Begnion Central Army,which was thought to be a supply ship, buying time for the slaughter of all in Phoenicis save women and children. Tibarn is quickly angered since his country suffered because of Naesala's actions and revives a grudge against him for selling Reyson three years ago. Naesala is then forced to abandon the alliance.

After Begnion politically divides between the apostle and the senate Naesala is now working under Sanaki, the Apostle, and her orders. When he takes her to meet up with Ike, Tibarn, and the unconscious herons during a battle with Daein, Tibarn mentions that he will kill Naesala but lets him live for the moment. When Ashera awakens and turns almost all the people of Tellius to stone, Naesala joins Micaiah's group to help her fight Ashera. Skrimir, a Gallian general from the alliance, attempts to kill Naesala for his betrayal and nearly fights Naesala, Leanne, and Nealuchi. Leanne attempts to stop the fight by saying that Naesala has a troubled heart, mainly because he was forced to betray the alliance, but this only angers Skirmir even more. Naesala stops the fight by mentioning that Tibarn deserves to fight him more since Tibarn suffered more than Skrimir.

When Micaiah, Ike, Tibarn, and their armies reach Ashera's location, a small group goes inside to stop her actions. If Naesala is taken into the Tower of Guidance, he and the others will discover that Lekain, a Senator, holds both Kilvas and Daein's blood pact, which proves that Naesala only betrayed the alliance for the good of his people. Lekain is killed and the blood pacts are destroyed, thus saving the people of Daein and Kilvas.

In the epilogue the three bird nations, hawk, heron, and raven, unite as one country with Tibarn as their leader. Naesala leaves Kilvas to become a diplomat for all of Tellius, finding atonement in his work. If he and Leanne share an "A" support, they will marry and give birth to a Raven boy and a Heron girl.

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think thats everything I used most of the suggestions since I agreed with most of them but not all of them. All spelling and grammer errors were changed though.

Edited January 16, 2009 by King_Soren

[VincentASM]

I'm back, I think...

Added. Thanks, you two ^^

[xanatha]

I don't think Naesala ever confessed his actual plans to save Reyson though. He just claimed we would have but Reyson was already saved (?) but I will mention that he planned to save Reyson.

If I may... I think it's pretty clear that Naesala would save Reyson eventually. Tibarn thought he would, Naesala says so himself and then the very biggest reason: they are friends. Even though he sold him, it was just for the gold, not enmity.

Added. Thanks, you two ^^

Why does this list say that Naesala is only a raven in Path of Radiance?

[RedNeck Holsety]

Ravens his class in POR just like Tibarns is just Hawk even though in RD its Raven King and Hawk king

in case you don't beleive me

http://www.serenesforest.net/fe9/class.htm

look at the laguz classes notice how it says Raven there also. Not to mention Tibarn being placed with Janaff and Ulki in the same "hawk" class

[Paper Jam]

Right before selling Reyson to Oliver, Naesala said "Please don't judge me too harshly. That said, I'm sure you will. Such is life. Enjoy your new one, old friend."

It's really weird; the "Please don't judge me too harshly" part implies that he intended to rescue Reyson, but the "Enjoy your new life" part implies that he didn't.

Also, Nealuchi probably knew about the Blood Pact even in Path of Radiance. (He tries to rationalize the ravens' treachery to Tibarn by saying that Kilvas has problems of its own.) If Nealuchi knew, Naesala probably knew too. That might explain why he obeyed a certain Senator in Path of Radiance, though it doesn't explain why he was fighting for Daein.

Edited February 1, 2009 by Paper Jam

[xanatha]

Right before selling Reyson to Oliver, Naesala said "Please don't judge me too harshly. That said, I'm sure you will. Such is life. Enjoy your new one, old friend."

It's really weird; the "Please don't judge me too harshly" part implies that he intended to rescue Reyson, but the "Enjoy your new life" part implies that he didn't.

Also, Nealuchi probably knew about the Blood Pact even in Path of Radiance. (He tries to rationalize the ravens' treachery to Tibarn by saying that Kilvas has problems of its own.) If Nealuchi knew, Naesala probably knew too. That might explain why he obeyed a certain Senator in Path of Radiance, though it doesn't explain why he was fighting for Daein.

Yeah, that's true... But I'm not sure if the other senators knew about Lekain's blood pact with Kilvas, and if they did not, then I think that Naesala would save Reyson. But if they knew, then I don't think that Naesala could help him. He probably didn't have much of a choise.

And as for the fighting with Daein, I trust what Bianchi said: Kilvas needed gold, that's all Naesala cared about.

Ravens his class in POR just like Tibarns is just Hawk even though in RD its Raven King and Hawk king

in case you don't beleive me

http://www.serenesforest.net/fe9/class.htm

look at the laguz classes notice how it says Raven there also. Not to mention Tibarn being placed with Janaff and Ulki in the same "hawk" class

True, but still... Naesala, Tibarn and Griffca are the only ones who can use the Laguz Bands in the endgame, because they're seen as Royal.