AstraLunaSol Posted June 13, 2010 Author Share Posted June 13, 2010 (edited) This one is good, but the right arm OPV looks really weird. This one's great. I like it, too. Something about this guy's face and hair bothers me. This one's very good. The hair looks kinda weird, but otherwise it's good. A bit wide hmmm? Thanks. Actually, the main problem people pointed out was the broad shoulders, I fixed that but I'm just too lazy to upload the new one. Thank you again. Where. EDIT: Re-did the Opening post. Edited June 13, 2010 by AstraLunaSol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
riariadne Posted June 13, 2010 Share Posted June 13, 2010 A bit wide hmmm? Actually, the main problem people pointed out was the broad shoulders, I fixed that but I'm just too lazy to upload the new one. Where. Compare it to her other arm, which you can barely see at all. Oh. I think that the hair and face just seemed a bit disproportionate compared to the shoulders, but fixing those would probably do the same. It falls weirdly in the front. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted June 13, 2010 Author Share Posted June 13, 2010 Compare it to her other arm, which you can barely see at all. Oh. I think that the hair and face just seemed a bit disproportionate compared to the shoulders, but fixing those would probably do the same. It falls weirdly in the front. Because of the fluff ._. Yeah. ... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
riariadne Posted June 14, 2010 Share Posted June 14, 2010 I know the purple haired guy's hair falls like that, but I think you sprited it a bit weirdly is what I meant. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted June 15, 2010 Author Share Posted June 15, 2010 Ah alright. Kiyoteru, another Vocaloid. Suit was a FC, I really suck at them. -.- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amelia Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 Who is he? I didn't see him before. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
riariadne Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 That's actually a pretty good suit. That one's good btw, nothing obviously wrong with it from the eyes of someone who doesn't sprite themselves. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chalis Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 Who is he? I didn't see him before. Hiyama Kiyoteru, Vocaloid developed to satisfy every last fetish the other Vocaloids couldn't. [spoiler=a rather popular song by him] As for the sprite, I love the glasses. Something about the top neck shading feels a bit off though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted June 16, 2010 Author Share Posted June 16, 2010 I love simple edits: ------------------> Personal mug competition, the theme was evil. And a splicing contest, guess who I used. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted June 19, 2010 Author Share Posted June 19, 2010 Haku Yowane, finally done with my important requests. @_@ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amelia Posted June 19, 2010 Share Posted June 19, 2010 I love simple edits: ------------------> Personal mug competition, the theme was evil. And a splicing contest, guess who I used. Icky. Look like zombie. I see Sain, Eliwood. But Sain's eyes changed. Or at least..that's what I think. Haku Yowane, finally done with my important requests. @_@ Nice, good job with the eyes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted June 21, 2010 Author Share Posted June 21, 2010 Just a random splice, looks a lot like Marcus, only....younger? =P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted June 23, 2010 Author Share Posted June 23, 2010 First full custom of my spriting career, it's Rallen from Spectrobes btw. You may now rip it to shreds. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Posted June 23, 2010 Share Posted June 23, 2010 (edited) Shading's too plain. Unless that's intentional, I'd say to use more shades. There's also how awkward it looks to have one side of his face be dark and the other side lighter. I almost thought that was the design of the character, but I googled some images and it doesn't seem to be the case. Nice work, otherwise. EDIT: Whoops, I meant more shading and more contrast between the shades, not more shades. Edited June 23, 2010 by Nightmare Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted June 23, 2010 Author Share Posted June 23, 2010 Shading's too plain. Unless that's intentional, I'd say to use more shades. There's also how awkward it looks to have one side of his face be dark and the other side lighter. I almost thought that was the design of the character, but I googled some images and it doesn't seem to be the case. Nice work, otherwise. I try to stick with 16 colors max, though I should see what would happen if I went OVER that limit. Yeah, I fixed that. Thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prompto Posted June 23, 2010 Share Posted June 23, 2010 (edited) Before you go ballistic. I think the problem with the headshading is the way it kinda curves is a bit unnatural and should be more... straight? Hope you get what I mean. Also, on the right side of his head where his hair flips in front of his face a little, there should be shading there. If you don't understand me I could explain better. /headdesk Edited June 23, 2010 by Starsong Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted June 23, 2010 Author Share Posted June 23, 2010 Before you go ballistic. I think the problem with the headshading is the way it kinda curves is a bit unnatural and should be more... straight? Hope you get what I mean. Also, on the right side of his head where his hair flips in front of his face a little, there should be shading there. If you don't understand me I could explain better. /headdesk I got that, Lux and Nightmare commented on that, fixed that. Totally changing the hair, I found a pic of Rallen from a side view, his hair curves in. I understand, thank you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted June 25, 2010 Author Share Posted June 25, 2010 A battle sprite. =P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted June 25, 2010 Share Posted June 25, 2010 Ooh, interesting! I don't know what to say really, but it's pretty damn cool. Microphone looks like athos's staff. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
riariadne Posted June 25, 2010 Share Posted June 25, 2010 That's a biiiiig microphone... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted June 25, 2010 Share Posted June 25, 2010 Uhh lets not go there Nice sprite to say the least. And you said you dont do battle sprites Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted June 25, 2010 Author Share Posted June 25, 2010 Well it was a spriting contest involving Athos' staff, so I had to use it in 1 way or another. @Kai: I just started making them, I needed to start making them anyway. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted June 26, 2010 Author Share Posted June 26, 2010 Ver 2.0 18 colors though, meh. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted June 26, 2010 Share Posted June 26, 2010 That one looks better than the original. Im really digging this guy. Looks a lot like a mug i made...well sorta. The vibe is the same. Although it looks like hes got a total 80s rocker mullet. XD I like the Miku battle deal. Nice speakers. Man, Vocaloid must be a huge fad on here what with everyone doing sprites of them and having sigs, etc. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted June 26, 2010 Author Share Posted June 26, 2010 (edited) That one looks better than the original. Im really digging this guy. Looks a lot like a mug i made...well sorta. The vibe is the same. Although it looks like hes got a total 80s rocker mullet. XD I like the Miku battle deal. Nice speakers. Man, Vocaloid must be a huge fad on here what with everyone doing sprites of them and having sigs, etc. =P Thanks. Mainly my friends giving me requests. Holy shit this is a "Hot topic" *celebrates* Edited June 26, 2010 by AstraLunaSol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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