peener weener Posted December 5, 2010 Share Posted December 5, 2010 It's exactly Garrets T-Shirt, I just had to keep it 16 colors. But I guess I can custom it >_< u callin Hawkeyes necklace gay? No, silly, the combination of t-shirt and necklace. God, I don't know. It just... looks wrong. For whatever reason. Even if it probably isn't. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted December 5, 2010 Share Posted December 5, 2010 The lighter colours make the curvature more noticeable, try to replicate hawkeyes chest curve, IIRC it isn't as breast-like as Garret's. I kinda agree though, the necklace, tattoo and body along with duessel's face almost makes him seem like a wannabe tranny, His hair is pushed back and neat, giving him a classy feel, the shirt looks more "low-cut" than ripped with how it is as well and the neck shading above the necklace is really appalling, i'd suggest straightening out the shirt or splicing in another torn shirt neckline from somewhere else. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted December 5, 2010 Share Posted December 5, 2010 Garret just makes it look badass. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted December 6, 2010 Author Share Posted December 6, 2010 So I was going to fix it today but I was playing DnD then working on a school project. So can someone suggest a new left shoulder plate to splice on instead? I'm thinking Echidna. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted December 10, 2010 Author Share Posted December 10, 2010 Huge WIP. Please help me fix it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted December 10, 2010 Share Posted December 10, 2010 (edited) well, for starters, that neck is too big. Edited December 11, 2010 by Mew Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted December 14, 2010 Author Share Posted December 14, 2010 I'm bored again. Someone give me a SNES set to splice. No awk angles please, and I dont care about game diversity. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted December 14, 2010 Share Posted December 14, 2010 enjoy~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted December 14, 2010 Author Share Posted December 14, 2010 (edited) No awk angles please :| Try again Kai. Edited December 14, 2010 by Spy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted December 14, 2010 Share Posted December 14, 2010 its doable you pansy Lachesis, Fin and Sigurd go. Too lazy to link Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zak Something Posted December 14, 2010 Share Posted December 14, 2010 Make a super Grl Stealr! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted December 17, 2010 Author Share Posted December 17, 2010 "And when I'm done wit 'er, youre never getting your grl back!" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zak Something Posted December 17, 2010 Share Posted December 17, 2010 Noooo! What terror! What have I done! It's great looking! Why am I still yelling!? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted December 18, 2010 Share Posted December 18, 2010 too much hawk in it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted December 18, 2010 Author Share Posted December 18, 2010 too much hawk in it I know -_- I tried to edit it out but had a hard time with it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted December 18, 2010 Share Posted December 18, 2010 Ermm why does he have hawk's eyebrow and Johan/Johalva? 2 eyebrows on 1 eye... :| The hair shading is also very very messy and the headbands angle doesn't match the heads. TBH I don't really like it, It looks very rushed and seems to lack finesse, effort and therefore skill too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted December 20, 2010 Author Share Posted December 20, 2010 Thany emote. Shin emote. I might go about getting these added to the roster. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Elf Posted December 20, 2010 Share Posted December 20, 2010 Questioning crit was ignored :| *derp* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted December 20, 2010 Author Share Posted December 20, 2010 Im horrid at replying to criticism. I'm working with the sprite (and failing too ) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted December 24, 2010 Author Share Posted December 24, 2010 Shading update. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted December 27, 2010 Author Share Posted December 27, 2010 Repost. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NICKT™ Posted December 27, 2010 Share Posted December 27, 2010 Nose is too far across, mouth is too short, neck of the shirt needs more shading. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted December 31, 2010 Author Share Posted December 31, 2010 Nose is too far across, mouth is too short, neck of the shirt needs more shading. How many more pixels should the mouth be? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted December 31, 2010 Share Posted December 31, 2010 How many more pixels should the mouth be? Compare it to your average Fire Emblem female. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted December 31, 2010 Author Share Posted December 31, 2010 That was made from an all female set -_____- Maybe Ill extend it till it looks better. I should also change the palette, as it made peoples eyes bleed. Apparantly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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