Darros Posted September 6, 2010 Share Posted September 6, 2010 (edited) CLEARED Edited March 8, 2011 by Hawk King Tibarn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted September 6, 2010 Share Posted September 6, 2010 Gee, I never knew Pirates wore armor.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CT075 Posted September 6, 2010 Share Posted September 6, 2010 I like that Gordin battle sprite the most. But anyway, your FEDS splice has a few stray pixels (or it's just oddly outlined) on his chin. Beyond that, keep up the good work~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted September 6, 2010 Author Share Posted September 6, 2010 (edited) Gee, I never knew Pirates wore armor.... Im probably updating it, its kind of old. A friend on dA is writing a fanfic with her friends and she made me a cav. I'm going to probably make a pirate/nomad one. I like that Gordin battle sprite the most. But anyway, your FEDS splice has a few stray pixels (or it's just oddly outlined) on his chin. Beyond that, keep up the good work~ Thanks! I know the FEDS splice missed pixels, but for a first try it came out better than I thought. Edited September 6, 2010 by Uhai Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Mercenary Posted September 7, 2010 Share Posted September 7, 2010 Arrrgghh, cyberarmored pirates of the future. I don't need to repost the comments of the first sprites, so I'll comment on your younger Forde: The part where his shirt's neck and the armor meet needs to be fixed, since the sprite where you got his armor from has a different facing direction than the shirt's one. The eyes look a little weird since you need to add like a line of shading under them. Apart from that, you're still improving. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted September 7, 2010 Author Share Posted September 7, 2010 @SM: I know, thats why its noted as WIP. Another random splice. Set: Lucius, Eli, Wil. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strawman Posted September 7, 2010 Share Posted September 7, 2010 (edited) @SM: I know, thats why its noted as WIP. Another random splice. Set: Lucius, Eli, Wil. That ones pretty good yeah. You're getting better Though there is an issue with the hair under the ear going around the neck. On our right side point of view. Also some random pixels in the neck and next to the right eye(our point of view). Edited September 7, 2010 by acey555 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted September 8, 2010 Author Share Posted September 8, 2010 Thanks Acey! Â :D Will fix. NEW STUFFS My friend Courtney's character in my other friend Mirandas fanfic. Class:Archer. Same story but for nicole. Class:Theif. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted September 9, 2010 Author Share Posted September 9, 2010 Sain decided to try out reclassing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted September 9, 2010 Share Posted September 9, 2010 Pegasus knight sain?! Now that's just plain old wrong! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted September 9, 2010 Author Share Posted September 9, 2010 I didnt want to leave out anything lower tiered! Qatch someone point out I forgot something Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted September 10, 2010 Share Posted September 10, 2010 Shading in the hair is your friend. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted September 10, 2010 Author Share Posted September 10, 2010 Shading in the hair is your friend. Can you rephrase that please? My brain understood that two different ways. Nicole, now with battle sprites. She wanted the hair brown. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chocolate Kitty Posted September 10, 2010 Share Posted September 10, 2010 She means reference hair shading to make it look better. I think... But that's what I'd say. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ansem Posted September 10, 2010 Share Posted September 10, 2010 Can you rephrase that please? My brain understood that two different ways. Well, let me use one of my sprites to attempt to explain it to you You might have to open up paint and zoom in. Examine the shading of the hair on both sprites and let me know if you noticed a difference Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AstraLunaSol Posted September 10, 2010 Share Posted September 10, 2010 (edited) Basically, it just needs more contrast between the shades. Since there's a lack of that as well. Edited September 10, 2010 by MeteorLunarSolar Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted September 10, 2010 Author Share Posted September 10, 2010 I suck ass at shading, you saw Katarina. Ill rework that one... tomorrow or Saturday, depending on if I get tons of homework or not. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted September 11, 2010 Author Share Posted September 11, 2010 Good morning, I updated a sprite. Younger Forde. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted September 11, 2010 Author Share Posted September 11, 2010 (edited) I heard the distinct sound of no one caring! I think Im slightly improving. Random Fighter, but I sorta like him. Might use him as a character for a story or something. SFs splicing Comp round 10. For all who havent seen, heres the hell of a set: Edited September 11, 2010 by Uhai Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted September 12, 2010 Share Posted September 12, 2010 Uhai, yeah. I hate Chalis forever now! My sprite is total fail but oh well. Yours looks pretty good actually. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted September 12, 2010 Author Share Posted September 12, 2010 Thanks! My problem with it is Salehs armour, which I turned into a headband. The outlining is terrible :/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted September 12, 2010 Share Posted September 12, 2010 Dont feel too bad. Just take a look at mine in the thread. LOL! Its a gnarly set! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted September 12, 2010 Author Share Posted September 12, 2010 (edited) I like yours though, Florina. UPDATE: Some guy with a hat. First custom thing I can say was semi-decent, the moustache. Purple strip fails, badly. Yes, the shoulder is supposed to be pushed out. Better with black hair? I may use it as a new personal mug. Edited September 12, 2010 by Uhai Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted September 12, 2010 Share Posted September 12, 2010 Guy with a hat isnt too bad. No offense but... Your friend here has his head all wonky and doesnt seem to fit the body right. Plus his 'stache is less than stellar. Theres no shading on it. Also theres some shading/outline issue on the (my) left side of his neck. Purple strip is D:. Not your best work, there, pard! Big guy looks alright! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted September 13, 2010 Author Share Posted September 13, 2010 Stache used shades 1+2. Pent has 4 shades. I was informed the purple strip sucked from my friend IRL. What I did in the past hour. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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