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Middle bang, MIDDLE BANG~ Needs to come down more, about 3 pixels. You DID say you were going off the card art

His chin could be smoothed out a bit more, but, pretty much everything else is good.

He's too bishie XD I expected Skasaha to be manlier.

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Middle bang, MIDDLE BANG~ Needs to come down more, about 3 pixels. You DID say you were going off the card art

His chin could be smoothed out a bit more, but, pretty much everything else is good.

He's too bishie XD I expected Skasaha to be manlier.

Skasaha=Astra

I like it. Leather needs a bit of irregularity.

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I do believe what Dan meant for the leather is that it's too straight but I'm probably extremely wrong, seriously. I'm no good with leather @~@ That, and the right piece is larger, width wise, than the left.

Middle bang, yay~

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[12:50:23 AM] Seph "Santa-chu" 1212: I saw.

[12:50:34 AM] AstraLunaSol: nuuuu dithering

[12:50:41 AM] Seph "Santa-chu" 1212: Yeah, I was gonna say...

[12:50:50 AM] Seph "Santa-chu" 1212: The frontal bangs are suffering from old!Dan syndrome.

Otherwise, the eyebrows look weird, and unclean, and the blinking frames could use work. I like the armor a LOT.

Mouth frames could use some work, too. Look at Sain's mouth for reference, maybe?

EDIT: For Skasaha, middle triiiiiiiiiiiiiiim. And, the leather straps are still two different sizes.

Also, frames, Lumi. You need to work on those XD

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Damn FE6 shading. I used Dieck as the reference. Go figure.

Alright. Tomorrow I fix his frames.

2ecdf11.jpg

here's the references I used, btw.

Hair. Any good references?

Edit: @ Ska: shiiiiit I forgot.

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