Strider Zero Posted November 13, 2010 Author Share Posted November 13, 2010 Looks much better. One of the things that stands out to me, however, is that there needs to be more shading around his neck where his collar meets skin (just a little bit more, in my opinion). All the way around the neck would you say? Also, should I use a shade that is on this dude's face or should I reference a different sprite to find a coherent shade? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cymbeline Posted November 13, 2010 Share Posted November 13, 2010 (edited) All the way around the neck would you say? Also, should I use a shade that is on this dude's face or should I reference a different sprite to find a coherent shade? The skin color of his neck should be the same as those on his face. And as for the shading, just in the front where his collar is split. That's the part that really stands out to me. Edit-- Also, there is an outline missing on the left part of his face. Edited November 13, 2010 by Cymbeline Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parrhesia Posted November 13, 2010 Share Posted November 13, 2010 (edited) Something is definitely wrong with those eyes, but I can't pinpoint it exactly. Are they too close together? Too far down on the face, or is the nose too high up? Edited November 13, 2010 by Furetchen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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